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abrony-mouse


Occasional FimFic contributor. I do short reviews on request. Check my blog for silliness, music, writing thoughts and anything else. STATUS 2024.04.25: Currently consumed by writing bug. Still queer.

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Mustafa Combe comes from a family of groomers whose tails and manes have been the talk of the Crystal Empire and his pride and passion is his wonderful moustache. Today is an important day for Mustafa – one in which a most coveted prize is in his grasp, provided he proves equal to an ultimate test of skill.

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A delightful little story, I must say. I have a weakness for slice-of-lifes like this one, especially those that can add depth to characters and elements that didn't get it from the show. I'd say you did an excellent job of giving us a peek into the life of our mustachioed friend. My only complaint might be the overuse of pictures in lieu of description, but now that I think about it, I think it works in this instance, as it has better comedic timing to it.

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thanks for the comment :)

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