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This story is a sequel to The Golden Trail
When a daddy Unicorn and a mommy Alicorn get together and love each other very much, they get a rambunctious little Flurry Heart. When a daddy Siren and a mommy Windigo get together and love each other very much they get...a very lonely creature. But maybe Flurry can change that.
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hm this interesting story...very good opening almost like a prologue! hopefully in second chapter will explain (or in flashback) why flurry and her friends decided to check out that cave. one error though it's "followed not fallowed" question: ruby and sapphire (flurry heart's friends)names aren't in relation to Pokémon?
Really good and interesting so far.
I hope this fic gets featured.
It's supposed to be, "Since when did you swear?"
Thanks for the input and no, their names where inspired by Steven Universe. I simply flipped the personalities a bit.
It's intriguing. I'll track this.
A lonely Windigo is something the official series is still missing. Don't know if they will ever bring them up. Maybe in the upcoming 44-minute Hearth's Warming special? Well, unlikely but still possible.
it's been a long while (for me anyways!) since reading the first chapter. great character progression on all fronts
also liked haze using an alias "alto" I think he's using one? only missing an extra 's' of the word hiss.
I love the idea of super rare ingredients/critters just being "lunch" to poor Alto.
If Alto and Flurry are same age and have same growth speed then the topic of Alto's mother's killer will be very dramatic.
I found two typo.
shouldn't it be windigos?
shouldn't it be lead?
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1. Thanks for that.
2. No I ment led like the metal.
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Isn't lead the metal spells the same with lead the leader.
lead2
Loving this story! It’s very rare to find a Windgo story and this could be a really good one. Be sure it’s long and fun to read!
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Huh. So it is. I'll be sure to fix that when I have a chance.
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You seems busy. Good luck with whatever occupy your time!
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No his name is really Alto.
As you should
.... That is a distinct possibility with him
HA
Flurry Heart, there are several races in your world that dosen't need wings or a horn to use magic, and then there are those that can use magic completetly unrelated to the horn or wings they do have
He's good
And so it begins
But what would the point be of trying to sneak out, if you don't look like your trying to sneak out... the thrill of getting caught is part of the "sneaking out" process
Part of me wants Flurry to tell her... and then watch the no doubt hilarious fallout
HA, i like how everyone think they are dating... admitingly i believe that they will start to date soon, but that's beside the point
Oh i seriously doubt that
Well, her teacher is Maud Pie, so that's to be expected
It ain't possible
Literally everyone thinks they're dating, its just a matter of time before they finally realize that's basically what they are doing and make it offical
Also; YOU LIVE IN THE EMPIRE RULED BY THE PRINCESS OF LOVE... YOU. SHALL. BE. SHIPPED
He just told you that she takes after Twilight more than Shining, so when he says everything, he means...
Exactly
If she's anything like Twilight that will keep her busy for a few hours at most
Necromancy, Chronomancy.... Draconequui mating habits
Those numbers don‘t make any sense. You can‘t go colder that absolute zero (roughly -273 C) and 1000 C is hot enough to melt aluminium, so the spring should have vapourized.
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Siren magic and Windago magic. Extreme Cryomancy and Hydromancy. This is the same world that has talking technicolor ponies, Discord, the laws of nature managed by mere mortals/demigods, portals between worlds/realities, and whatever the hell Pinkie is, and you think Alto can't destroy the laws of temperature with his magic? Really?
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On the top end, sure, but absolute zero is when atoms stop moving. Heat is just energy being released, and you can’t have less energy than no energy. So having a temperature below the point at which atoms stop moving is not something magic can really work around.
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Fare enough, but what if the spell freezes something to such a high degree that it turns it into pure blue ice?
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Absolute zero would still aply.
Fair enough. Perhaps I should alter the scene a bit when I get the chance.
When will this be updated again?
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most likely when I'm done with The Gaps in F r i e n d s h i p. Its one of my more popular fanfics so it kind of demands most of my attention.
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Temperature issue corrected. I am also happy to inform all who it may concern that work on this fic is resuming as we speak so expect a new chapter to be coming soon.
Congratz, you got featured. 5/9/2019, for your reference. Good job.
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Huh... didn't see that coming.
9614388 Few do.
Nice
Hmm, maybe
Cadance would approve
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If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?
Ruby would sound kind've like Maud.
Sapphire would sound like Spitfire
Alto like a male version of Fluttershy
Quartz would sound like Sorin or Flash
Opal would sound like Time Turner
Onyx sounds like Big Mac minus the accent and southern dialect
And Platinum would sound like Octavia, minus the accent.
(While not an OC Flurry's voice sounds similar to Sweetie Belle's.)
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what are the age ranges of the characters in the story? I can't really peg them down and the use of colt and filly cover anywhere from prepubescent to late teens in the MLP fandom
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Flurry, Alto, Riby, Sapphire, Quartz, Opal, and Platinum are all 16 while Onyx is 25.
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thanks
Can Sapphire and Ruby do some crazy combo magic? Maybe something with the word Garnet Associated with it.
AaAah this fan fiction is so good! I can't wait for more!
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HA. HA. HA. HA.
clod
Dangit, Starlight! XD
I do feel like it would be starlight though to get the ,if any, info about who flurry is meeting just from seeing that shes the confiding pony flurry seeks out.
Nuff said
Of course not
That must have been fun to say
Hello, 🍎
Not trying to be a pain, just going to say you wrote "sattle" bags twice. Did you perhaps mean "saddle" bags?
Nice story concept too.
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Yeah, that's an old trick of mine that I'm trying to fix. Thanks for the heads up.
Poor Platinum...
The Royal Guard? Nah, to join up with that lot you simply need to be able to stand still and put a helmet on the right way around. Now if you were trying to join a combat branch things would be rather more rigorous...
Nice to see more chapters coming. Hope that Platinum finds Friendship and maybe have a crush on Alo since he is a wild pony... though Flurry won’t be happy