After hearing a report from a group of miners of strange noises in the valley they were stationed in, Prince Shining Armor and a battalion of guards set out to find the source of the noise they discovered not only a new Displaced but an entirely new Kingdom.
Hello everyone, a shorter story this time but I feel like I wrote everything that was necessary, And as of posting this I'm planning on taking a break from the Nexus-Verse and focus on my other stories. Part of the Nexus-Verse.
Chapters (1)
That’s a fascinating take on a Displaced that I’d honestly like to see more of. Displaced once into the world your character is frm, then a second time into Equestria. I really like this idea. I may have to use it somehow.
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Feel free. I've had this idea for a while but never really knew the right way to implement it.... and i just wanted a reason for why the entire Frostborn clan was in Equestira
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Makes sense.
Wish this was for more than one chapter!
This has promise!
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Thanks, I might come back to this once I finish a few things I'm working on but I can't guarantee anything.
Despite a couple hickups within the narrative - which could be easily corrected with the assistance of an editor - I found both the concept and execution for this story quite interesting and engaging to read.
For thinking of something new for the genre, all while keeping it from being stale - and drawing my attention - I give you a like and a fav, mister author!
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Thank you very much
I like this.
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I'm glad.
Short, but sweet, with some very good passages like this for example:
Oh, by the by, here is a little typo:
I'm quite sure this was meant to be beard and not bread.
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thanks for catching that typo and I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
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No problem.
if they think the Crystal Empire's armor is bad what would they think of the armor in the royal guard.
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Cue one entire clan of laughing dwarfs at the people thought armor made of gold was a good idea.
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lol