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mattchilly


I'm just a fan of MLP, Touhou, and much more and now for a personal quote. "Inspiration is a fickle thing it’s there when you don’t want it and gone when you need it."

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You know the story. Go to a con meet the Merchant but this one hit a little sang. I bought so much stuff he couldn't displace me and had to ask for his bosses help. Now I'm one of if the the best archers out there. This will be useful with Demons invading this world. They all shall fall before me for I never miss my target.

If you want to see the list of all of Sharpshot's abilities feel free to visit this blog

This is one of two characters I designed to be completely overpowered. the other being in The Equestria 'Girls' Shinobi

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 29 )

Too much exposition. I ended up just skimming over it

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I knew that was going to be problem! I'll make a bonus chapter for the abilities and edit the first chapter.

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Still too much exposition (unless you haven't had a chance to go over it yet.

As there don't seem to be any MLP style ponies in this chapter, I'm going to assume that you either encounter some, end up transferred to Equestria, or this is a merged world where Equestria is just another land in the world of Azeroth, like Pandaria.

Looking foreward to finding out as I go to read the next chapter.

Zooming in I saw a mid-evil gallows

The word you are looking for is: midieval.

And you definitely need to add an obvious link to MLP:FiM soonish. Either by adding a character that is supposedly from the setting (may be an OC), or by having the story transition to the MLP:FiM setting within the next few chapters. As I said in one of my other posts, simply being a Displaced story isn't quite enough.

Zooming in I saw a midevil gallows

The word you are looking for is still "medieval." That's how it is really spelled... :facehoof:

Nice to see the main abilities/powers/weapons list moved to it's own blog page though. Looking forward to future chapters! :twilightsmile:

Jeez, and I thought my Displaced Link was one who had too much equipment. XD

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And this is just Sharpshots starting equipment. :pinkiecrazy: I've got a few idea's few new gear but nothing solid yet.

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No need, you've got plenty as it is. XD I mean really, so much damn power/blessing/etc, you would have to fight literal gods.

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This is what I get for editing when late at night... unfortunately that's when I get a lot of my idea. "Laying in bed ready to go to sleep? TO BAD! You've now got fifteen ideas that you need to write down before you forget! So get to work!"

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Considering Sharpshot's new history and Idea's I have for this... Here's hoping I can make this kind of story interesting

How can one be "complacently" overpowered? Or did you mean completely?

I meant completely. I really need to do better with my editing. Thanks for letting me know.

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thanks for letting me know about that.

I'm getting a vibe at this point that Starswirl is evil or will betray them later out of jealousy

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or he could just be an ass. you'll have to wait and see what i have planned.

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I'm working on chapters for both of them but because it's been a while since i updated my Tales of a Lycan-Scale i wanted to update that one before continuing on my Archer and Shinobi stories. Hopefully i'll be able to get to them in a day to two

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I'll keep ya in mind for a proofreader as for the crossover I'll read your story then take some time to think about it ok?

Standards, not Standars.

Liked and followed anyway.

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thanks for the heads up and I hope you continue to enjoy the story.

Luna looked at Celestia and the Solar Monarch nodded. “Sharpshot has shown that his abilities are more than capable of killing the Demons. As such the Archers of Dawn and Roguesof Dusk have our full support.”

Roguesof you made a miss type. good luck

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Thanks, not sure how I missed that.

Can u put pictures of them or at least pics of the armors in this chapter, please??????:twilightsmile::pinkiehappy:

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there ya go. the pics of the armors is in the authors notes... as if they needed be even longer :pinkiecrazy: still i hope you enjoy the story!

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thx and i hope i wasn't bothering you for them, love the fic by the by.

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nah it's cool and I'm glad you enjoy it!

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