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This story is a sequel to Sweet Pea


The third installment to The Midnight Dance and Sweet Pea. Based on the fairy-tale: Thumbelina. When Princess Luna's long-lost daughter Princess Cadence had been cursed a long time ago, it is up to Cadence's cousins to help break the spell along with an old sweetheart of Cadence's...

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Oh no... Flash thinks there's something with Shining Armor and Twilight... :pinkiegasp:

Anyway, the story was GREAT! :pinkiehappy:

I think I figured out why Flash is so nervous. Great idea for a story. I never though of Cadence as a breezie. Good luck with the next chapter. Good luck with school.

Flash thinks Shining's an old clot-friend of Twilight's doesn't he?

:yay:

So this is a Flashlight story?

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Part of it will be, but the rest of it is about Cadence and Shining Armor.

That was great. I wonder how it all is going to turn out. I loved how the girls are having wonderful chaos of family life.

I think it's sweet that Flash is jealous of Shining :rainbowkiss:

Good luck with future chapters

U-D123 :yay:

I recognize the the constant weight remark. That was one of the my favorite remarks from BB2. I can't wait to see how everypony reacts when air between Twilight, Flash and Shinning gets cleared.

They found Cadence. YEAH!!!! Now we need Shinning's love to break it. At least that is what I'm guessing needs to be done.

YAY! CADANCE IS BACK!!!!! :pinkiehappy:

Flash you done goofed

Why do men always leave after listening in on conversations right before the important bit :applejackunsure:

And I can't believe that he's going to go spying on them.

Twilight loves you Flsh, that's why she married you in the first place :facehoof:

While I do admit Flash is being an idiot, especially for not talking to Twilight directly, I have to stand up for the guys here and say I understand where Flash is coming from. Guys in a relationship have feelings and we get jealous when our girlfriends starts going on and on about another guy. At least Flash hasn't started a fight yet. Stereotypical guy will not talk about the problem until their suspicions are confirmed. With all of that said, this is like a train wreck about to happen, and we call just can't turn our heads away. Thanks for the update.

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Wow, thanks for pointing that out. As I'm not very good about writing from a guy's perspective. I don't have any brothers to talk to and my dad doesn't talk about his "feelings". So writing from a guy's angle can be very challenging for me so thank you for the insight. I do apologize if it seems I'm making males to look like idiots. :fluttershysad:

Flash, now you've done it. YOU BETTER TAKE THAT LITTLE CLOAK OF AND GO TALK TO TWILIGHT! NOW! :flutterrage:

Great chapter. On that note....


CALL THE BOMB SQUAD!!!!
Something is going to explode when the girls get to Canterlot. Possible Bombs: Luna's temper, Flash's jealousy (Because Twi is going to distract Shinning.), some evil threat, or the other couples trying to figure out what to get for their paramour for their anniversary.

Wow. Nice chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next in the shopping department. This is going to be good.

YAY! Mother and daughter reunion! :pinkiehappy: You know what this calls for?

She kept on looking until she bumped into a grey pony with jet black hair, "Oh, please excuse me."

"You're excused." the pony said without looking at her.

That voice… she thought, Where have I heard it before…

She doesn't even know her own husbands voice... :ajsleepy:

And I had a feeling that that would be the song when Discord said Match Maker :pinkiehappy:

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Yes, she does recognize her husband's voice but that's why she was confused at first of somepony else sounding like him. :derpyderp2:

I LOVE THAT SONG!!!!!! THANK YOU!!!!! times 1,000,000. The other song I love is I won't say I'm in love from Hercules, but this is AWESOME!!!! Thanks.

That was a good song. I do hope Discord doesn't betray the family in this story, but I think we will see soon enough. Thanks for the great chapters. I loved them. Good luck with the next ones.

Also I have a song when Tirek tempts Discord for you. I hope you enjoy it.

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Hey... That's actually not a bad idea! But, we'll see what happens.

:raritycry::fluttercry::applecry:

So Bea...ut...i...ful

:raritycry::fluttercry::applecry:

(Oh but I know it as: The Swan Princess and the Mystery of the Enchanted Kingdom)

But other than that Love this chapter :heart:

I approve of the Coco Silver shipping. I also approve of the Swan Princess reference. Favorite song from that is Practice. Thanks for the great chapter.

First line : This spells works at night, when the moon's bright glow touches a body of water.

OMG THAT'S THE SWAN PRINCESS! :raritystarry::pinkiegasp::rainbowkiss::yay::twilightsmile::ajsmug:

5974077 My one's are Far Longer Than Forever and This Is My Idea

5974359 This is my idea is awesome!

THE POWER OF SHIPPING COMPELS YEE

Like for realsesies, this shipping is great

You're making Silver Shill x Coco Pommel... making me ship it too...

Two things:

One: RARITY'S HAVING THE FOAL! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :pinkiehappy:

And two: D'AWW! :heart:

:raritycry: That... is so... bea..uti...ful :raritycry:

Hope Shining's wasn't permanent for when the spell gets broken for Cadence.

That is SWEET!!!! I think you are doing great. Thanks for the update. I can't wait to see what happens next. I can't wait to read about the new baby.

BOOM
DAMN IT!
My Dawwww meter broke again
:facehoof:
Also the new baby!
:yay:


Update soon
Ummm, If you don't mind that is.

Nice job with this chapter. I can't wait to read what happens next. Thanks for bring back the CMC. I was wondering about them.

Nice! Rarity had her foal! The CMC is coming back! And another big lump of awesomeness! Keep it up! :pinkiehappy:

I was sure Dignity was going to come down with Older-Sibling-Tosis when he first saw Gem and said

"She's... cute I guess"

But I'm glad he didn't :twilightsmile:

Nice chapters. I can't wait to see what happens next. I do wonder though... When will Twilight and Flash have there second child!?!?!?!?! I hope at the epilogue because Cadence may be able to alleviate the stress of the kingdom.

I sensed a bit of 'Don't Mine At Night' was placed in here :rainbowkiss:

I assume that twilight has already escaped and tied up the Diamond dogs.

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Just a small easter egg :raritywink:

Great chapter. Thanks for the update. I can't wait for the girls to see Cadence's true form.

must make a vow of everlasting love…

:pinkiegasp: SWAN PRINCESS!!!! :pinkiegasp:

:raritystarry::pinkiehappy::ajsmug::yay::rainbowkiss::twilightsheepish:

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I'm calling it now
THEY. BECOME. CRYSTAL PONIES!!!
WITH THE CRYSTAL EMPIRE!!!

Nice idea for a chapter. It looks like the Gala is going to be impressive this year. Good luck with the next chapter.

The songs from Disney's Robin Hood isn't it?

Would you mind if I asked Smooze to make an appearance at the Gala?
The Smoozinator already has his top hat and bow tie picked out.
He's really excited.:pinkiehappy:

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