The two Royal Sisters ruled Equestria. They were its Protectors, its Guardians, its leaders, selected by the three tribes. Starswirl the Bearded, he was their mentor, he was there to guide them, he was there to counsel them. Perhaps, they may even view him as their father-figure. Many believed them to be true.
This was not entirely the case.
The Royal Sisters past is something none would venture on to question, how were their life before becoming a Princess, what feat of events that awakened the hidden powers within them? None would know except the King.
Now, the King, the true Guardian of Equestria, has returned. They were bound, not by flesh, but by the bond they shared. He shall return as promised.
An intriguing concept, but terribly rushed. This could've been spaced out into two chapters, but it has it's merit i'll give you that.
I like it. But the part where the princesses show up could use a bit more explaining in my opinion, such as how they knew, and what was going on between those moments. Keep up the great work!
Interesting
Amazing work
Good start
Nice concept and interesting start. A bit rushed for a first chpater could be spaced out a bit more or just a give a more detailed explaination on the surrounding.
shit !!!, I haven't even read it and I already like it !!!
now I will read it and see if it lives up to its introduction
Well, I still like it, though, I don't know, something is missing, but the fic is still good, I look forward to the next chapter.
I'm really liking the concept although it feels like the story is moving a little fast and that ending with sisters just popping up out of nowhere saying 'Father!' kinda had me laughing with how random it was.
Did you perhaps mean adorned?
I hope you will continue this
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Why did I have to find such good fic so shortly after release? Why can't I ever find completed good fics? I hate waiting.
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We all feel your pain
Nice chapter a few errors but not enough to distract from the story itself.
Nicely done, hope to see more
Dead?
I’m glad that I finally got caught up. Hopefully you can update soon! The interaction with the princesses is pretty funny.
Update?
nice one
Hey, do you plan on continuing this story? It is too good to let die.
Porque todos los fics que me llegan a interesar no vuelven a continua r:'v