Greetings I am Thrin. After purchasing a robe from a anime/video game store in the local Mall I'm transported to Equestria the day of Luna's banishment with the knowledge I can now transform into the Champions from League of Legends, and the first thing I do is intentionally get myself trapped in stone. Now one thousand years later I'm free, but soon I learn I'm not the only one sent here. Are they friend or foe? Join me on this journey to find out.
Thrin's Token's message: I am Thrin an Heir to Legends and the Half-Elf of the Wild Woods, if you need my aid in battle, problems with magic or merely some advice then hold this to the sky and say my name.
Edit: I've been thinking about reworking Thrin's story. more info can be found here
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Some misspelled words, but still a good read
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Thanks for letting me know that I missed some typos.
that sing is one of the trippyest songs in a kids movie ever.
And that's why I chose it to show Discord how chaotic humans can be.
Lol, beautiful.......now I dare you to use those on Luna, Cadance, shinning, and finally
Big MacTrixie when she appears (if she does)I'm so fucking proud of this, taking my idea and making it like this is brilliant! I'm also happy Thrin's embracing this little idea... but now I'm curious as to what would happen if he tried to handle one of them for a prank as... say, Anivia?
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I didn't even think of that! hmm now I have a few idea's. Thanks!
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Trust me a lot more ponies are going Anthro, but not all. This Equestria is going to be a mix of pony and Anthro and I already know the next target or will it be targets?
no problem, different displaced always have different answers to problems.
Good story, but needs an editor and it has some pacing issues
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I agree with you there and I'm glad that it's still enjoyable despite it's flaws
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The pacing is the biggest issue. He shows up, uses his powers, has a conversation, and kills all the things in one chapter. It's really rushed, and could definitely use some filler and description.
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He should've showed him memes
Images broke
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thanks for letting me know. I'll fix that asap
Cool ... More chapters please
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And the pink elephants are indeed evil. Well played.
The anthro thing seems unnecessary. Do they have a way to turn back, at least? The comment about the Wonderbolts implies not...
Also, it might be wise to run a good spellchecker over these. That's not an insult, but I have been seeing some obvious typos that one should catch.
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Thing is I've only seen Dumbo once and the only thing I remember about it is that Dumbo can fly, has a mouse friend and that a weird song about pink elephants is a thing
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The reason for the Wonderbolt comment was mostly because training as a Monk and Wuju isn't something you can just stop and it takes up a LOT of time. Rainbow will need to train until when she fights it's more of a "Don't think, feel." kind of thing. Thrin can change her back to a normal Pegasus if Rainbow want's, he's just warning her that once she goes down the path of the Monk and gets used to her new body it won't be easy to go back. This is something I plan to work in when I do some edits on the story after I rewrite chapter 1
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That was more in line with what I was expecting, but you never know.
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Same here. I remember flying pink elephants, lots of trippiness, and bubbles. Heck, it was on the original VHS.
Linnea in Monet's garden.....never heard of that movie, what's it about?
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it's an educational movie where a young girl and one of her neighbor's who's an old man go to France to visit Monet's home a musiem to see some of his art and generally learn more about him. It's not that long and is a very peaceful movie.
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nice, maybe i'll watch it. also, just finished ch. 13, this is an epic read, hope you update soon cause this got me addicted to this. it's very hard to find a story with the merchant and even harder to find shopkeep. it's also 4 or 5 years since last i read any story with him. can you send me some links to some fic if you know any with him in it. and also, hope not being a nag, but i really hope you update soon to this story. aloha.
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Shopkeep is my own creation so I hope he hasn't appeared in any other story... or if he does then someone should have let me know. As for the merchant that one is from Orgran's story. I'm both glad you're enjoying this story but also sad because I've been thinking about doing a complete reboot of Thrin. I've got a blog with more info on the reasons why.
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sad if that happens. and yeah, the shopkeeper is like the good guy version of the merchant. can't remember where i read it from, i barely remember him from when i was in high school at the end of 2012, hence why i said he is very rare to find in other stories. for THE merchant, anyone who made a displaced fic either has to have him there cause it's one of the base staple of the fics. also, the merchant isn't a singular being, he/she is a group who does the displacing so some are like the shopkeeper and others are just dicks. so yeah your ok. you can even say you tm the shopkeeper and the multiverse merchant guild. that was neat. plus, i must say this. this is your story, so no matter what me or anyone/pony says otherwise, this story is your baby, and it's ultimately your choice to do so what you please.....but i really hope you reconsider and continue this story at your own pace. i can wait.(sits down like good boy)
. anywho, thanks for responding and hope you have a great life.
oh,
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well I'm not the one who made the Merchant's Guild. I don't remember who wrote the story where I first heard of them but I do remember that their Displaced was named "Umbra Shadow-walker". Thank's for the feed back and I hope you have a great life too!
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do you remember the name of the story or even if it's a displace and if so, whats the crossover???
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I had it faved but when I looked I didn't see it. Guess the author took it down
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crud, well oh well. can't help it. anyways, gotta log off. need to work tomorrow and get up early. probably talk to you later tomorrow around 7 or 8pm ish on my side. hope you doing good and brony on. aloha and good night.
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anyways here's a link to the first story, i'm pretty sure the "Merchant's Guild" appeared in the squeal.
so I did a bit of looking and turns out the author didn't take the story down. I just forgot to fave it.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/191287/so-that-happened
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thanks
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can you send me a link to umbra's stories cause i tried to find him but the search engine on this website sucks.
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here's the link to the squeal. I was wrong about there being more then one.
https://www.fimfiction.net/user/186412/Jsyrin/stories
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thanks but do you know what happen to umbra cause this guys name is jsyrin???
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I think he changes his name to "Umbra Shadow-walker" towards the end of the first story. I don't fully remember because it's been a while since I read them
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ok so he's jsyrin now or is it something else???
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*shrugs* don't remember
Now I want to read a story where pinkie becomes discord's apprentice. Is this a thing?
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Far as I know there's never been a story where Pinkie became Discord's apprentice, but I do wanna see what that would be like
Interesting
Grateful for the foreknowledge about things since i know nothing about LoL or the dragon stuff.
You need to get your pov straight bro. It's ether 1st or 3rd not a flip-flop every other sentence or word.
Where is the rewrite? I would really like to finish this story, because I really hate cliffhangers.
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Sadly I haven't started it yet. been rather busy here... plus haven't really had the drive to write which pisses me off. I like writing my stories
wait so do you need some ideas ooooor..
is it that you literaly dont have the mood to rhite this anymore?
also i know some of what i say is spelled rong but i cant actualy help it since i sound most words out if i dont instinctualy know how its spelled
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I have plenty of ideas. I just don't really have the drive to write solo stories. I've been working on some with some friends of mine so, hopefully I'll get back in the swing of writing.
ok
so thrin's part of the multiverse isint dead officaly yet
thats good