I read many stories of guys being transported to Equestria and turn into one of the mares of the show. Yet I have not read on of a guy doing the same but still be male still looking though. So I thought why not write one with a twist.
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Was 99% sure you were mocking bad fanfiction, but it was so well done I had to check another story to make sure. Good job, the cringe was real.
On the off chance that was *not* on purpose... Uh sorry? And start with spell check
I have to admit, I never expected Harry to be the wizard who cracked supersonic broom flight.
Amazing work like always I can't wait to see what you do in chapter 2
...yeah you might want to mention this is a harry potter AU in your description since someone like me might come along and think this was an actual original story with real characters and plot that you had to come up with yourself.
Where did "The Man Who Concord" come from? I don't remember that from the books.
I love this jacket it's so heartwarming at the end
You have just made me very happy... This has taken two fandoms that I love very, very much and squished them together into an amalgamation that I will deeply enjoy!
*snort* Awww so adorable *Chuckles while hiding mouth behind hoof*
I'm enjoying this, please make more.
The end of the chapter was so sweet when teddy called Twilight mama
Aww cute...
I do have to wonder though... Is Kreacher with them? He was Harrys House Elf after all... Or would he stay back at 12 Grimmald Place? I wonder.....
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I actually forgot about him.
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Shhh, no one has to know.... *places Kreatcher into cryo pod*
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Yeah I was thinking of him going to live with the Rich family you know Filthy, Spoiled, and Diamond Tiara just picture that.
"Kreature work for good family Black, now work for stinky horseis, place smell like barn."
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I think the house elves would live wonderfully in Equestria... A Well, Kreature being, Kreature >_> lol But yeah most of them would live wonderfully there I think....
loved the bit with the 2 fire birbs betting xD
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love it
So when is the next chapter coming? And I mean for ALL of your stories.
Very good sir.
A look into the Wizarding world, and OMFC STEVE ROGERS AS MINISTER OF MAGIC! 
Oh you clever man. 
Also the bit with Twilight finding out she's pregnant with Harry's child, beautiful. 
WHAT?!
And Sirius is ALIVE?! What a twist!
Um... Please don't take this the wrong way, but why should I care if this story has cover art or not?
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Not you, it's for HIM.
I love what you did here and love the twist ending
Great work as always I love the end it almost sounds like you're going to have a prank war happened with Harry pad foot end of Royal sisters
So, did Blueblood survive? Is there not going to be fallout from that?
[AS DARTH VADER] Impressive, most impressive.
When's the next chapter? Come to think of it, when are any of your stories getting updated?
Laying it thick, aren'tcha? That's at least three-layered thick already.
Welp, this was somewhat non sequitur. Did Blueballs crooked and everyone are happy that he did or did he survive and everyone are a bit sad that he did?
Who?
WHO?!
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Ok first off typo, Dusk Shine the name given to Harry Potter as an alternative for a pony name, and second Night Lite is Twilights father's name you would know this if you have seen the show or read the ICW comics
WHO???
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I know, who is Dusk Shine and Night Light, I ask who is Duck Shine and Nightlite
And what means "he looked around I'mbearest"
again: Who?
Who?
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My god a Grammer Nazi and I thought all of you were fucking dead.
Love it, The last chapter had a lot of spelling errors, but I enjoyed it greatly, and it showed Hermonie and Luna, always good to see them in a story. <3 And this chapter was really good too, no spelling errors that I could see and also really good chapter. I enjoy the house elves greatly.
Ok first this first. All your chapters were a bit of an info dump and sometimes made no sense. Also with this being Harry Potter for the love of god put it as a tag cause I was so lost for a while on the first chapter. Other then that I like the idea of a male remaining a male I could never stand a male becoming a female and accepting it. Tis just so unnatural. Anyways Tis alright so far an I do want to see where you take this so until then good luck!
Sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo, what's up with your stories? I'm sure I speak for all of us when I say "We miss you!"
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Theres a bunch of HP X FIM crossovers on this site, I'm even responsible for one of them funnily enough
Lord too many family names Potter, how very original, now also a pony.
I'm thinking how many elves can support Tree of Harmony? I think they will be happy to get entire Equestria worth of tasks.
Magic AKA Twilight Sparkle. Or maybe Harmony.