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Arcanum -Phantasy

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This story is a sequel to The Gaps in F r i e n d s h i p

For Twilight Sparkle, the world was a very empty place. While her family helped her bear with it, there was only so much they could do for her. Combine that with Crystal Prep's toxic atmosphere, and it was a small miracle that she hadn't done something drastic a long time ago. As the void surrounding the poor girl continued to grow, that possibility became more and more likely. At least, until the day she found a strange black crystal near the remains of Canter Creek Bridge. Twilight's life was now about to make a drastic change, but would it be for the better, or the absolute worst?

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 6 )

O great.
Lily is back.
Should have known she wouldn't be gone for good.
But... is she actually upset and angry FOR Sci-Twi, and what she's going through at Crystal Prep?
This won't end well for a certain principal and five certain Shadowbolts, if so.
And this is just a guess for the next story in the series, but...........
Methinks THEN we have how Sunset, Derpy and their crew are gonna react to Lily being being back once the Friendship Games happen in your universe.

Anyway, great to see the newest story in the series, great work with this chapter, and I can't WAIT to see what happens next!!!

Ouch I hope Sunset will realize that Sci-Twi is being manipulated before it goes to far. Then again I think the Friendship Games is going to go in a very different direction and hopefully Lily will finally be dealt with.

The same please for peace.


Yes! The story continues!
Should've known Lily was down but not out.

Huh, i guess it's time for that "fallen angel with the power to summon black holes". Finally. :pinkiecrazy:

Ahhh shit, the bitch is still alive!

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