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This story is a sequel to Seven Saviors
Now that Anon-a-Miss has been defeated, Sunset is ready to move forward with her new friends. Too bad the past doesn't want to leave her be. New misadventures follows her and her crew as the past meets the present. Can Sunset help fill the gaps that have formed around her friends hearts? Or will the shackles of past sins drag everyone down? And what of the CMC? Will guilt lead them to do something that can never be taken back?
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You just had to make me feel sad with the first chapter.
Yay! A sequel!
*After reading the first chapter*
...oh snap!
I'm glad this story happened so soon
Some might question your choice of tags...
When accidentally falling to your death I figure it’s best to own it in case anyone is watching.
It’s a nightmare that some of the girls will have I think pinkie Rainbow and applejack are going to be hit the hardest.
...Dude
Well, that's one way of kicking off a story.
Jesus Christ.... I wanted a sequel..... But at the expense of Pinkie wasn't what I had in mind....
Damm.. that's one way to start a sequel. Can't Whait for more!
What a hell of a way to open the story. Yeah, even without the author's note, I probably would have assumed you wouldn't kill Pinkie off. You would have had a death, suicide, or tragedy tag for starters or if you were playing coy. I'm glad there is more to this, but even if Pinkie had killed herself... as horrible as this is going to make me sound, I probably wouldn't have gotten out my torch and pitchfork. Don't get me wrong, it's sad if Pinkie dies, but Pinkie isn't a character I am going to get all bent out of shape for. I don't hate anypony/one, there are just other characters I prefer more. This is a prologue for shit's sake.
Good start, very ballsy. Doubly so if you are going to lie and kill her off. You would probably have a lot of angry people if you did that! Personally, I don't think you will. You wouldn't have cared enough to write an author's note if you weren't being a dick.
I'm on to you!
Well that's one dark way to start a sequel.
Although, I do have to wonder later on of what happened in the revealing aftermath from the last story when Rainbow, Applejack, Pinkie, and Rarity found out it was the CMC who created the account and framing Sunset and almost committed suicide. They're lives may possibly getting worse and worse in my opinion.
Well, Pinkie promised to "fix this or die trying", so really there were only two outcomes. Shame.
DON'T YOU DARE KILL PINKIE OFF LIKE THIS!
Pinkie what have I told you about breaking the fourth wall in the comment section.
grabs pinkie and pulls her into a bear hug then.
The tag is for comedy! There's nothing comedic about Pinkie nearly drowning! Pinkiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiie!
Welp, that's one way to start a new story...
Than again, Pinky did say "fix or die" so I'mma gonna go with coma, and that help them fix. After all their is no way in hell Sunset takes this "attempt" well.
Well that or dream/vision but I'm thinking coma.
Well that's one way to open a story. The death of someone that's going to be thought of as a suicide.
After reading the description I hope you have someone keep a close eye on the human CMC. They sound like they are close to breaking and they all sound like they need counciling as do the rest of the Rainbooms.
I guess Pinkie does have a chance of fixing things rarity, Apple Jack not s0 much small chance....Dash...hehehe..hahah..BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
..................Screw her.
Don't want her to die or anything, but getting a second chance forget her, she blew it.
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Only if you laugh like this. Then its funny.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hqVXi_UVkTs
I know Pinkie's gonna be okay in the end since there's no death or tragedy tag, but I still gotta get it off my chest.
PINKIE PIE!!! NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!
I feel much better now.
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She kinda looks pissed, I would start running if I was you.
I'm already eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
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I agree a coma does sound fitting.
Also:
Diane. The "e" is silent.
Tear.
Though I cane see why you went with what you did. Tear and Tear look the same, but are indeed completely different words.
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
the dramatic irony of all this being the fact that there isn't a lot pinkie could do to get this instantaneous forgiveness/ fixing everything she expected.
Lily seems nice.
What will happen?
well that was awkward
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Ok for the last bit i think a wrath or something is trying to feed off of the rainboom’s despair
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Ouch.
Well, Lily seems sweet.
And Pinky ends up in across the dimensional divide somehow, while looking like mirror pool clone!Pinky last seen in Manehattan? Oh yeah, this is going to end well
Sooooo.....Fluttershy's fallen for her pony counterpart. *shrugs* Can't blame her.
If Fluttershy can be Alucard then please, oh please, let Pinkie Pie become Vash the Stampede from Tri-gun
So are the girls permanent citizens now or are they just visiting.
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Visiting
After reading about Pinkie's experience, I have a feeling something 'chaotic' might be in the works.
Huh. So some sort of dark specter is trying to get at the Rainbooms and Sunset, and its domain just happens to be located off the most convenient bridge in Canterlot for jumping. Neat.
...
What?
So we've got a dark spirit intent on consuming the Human 4's despair and I'm guessing that Sci-Twi saved Human Pinkie who is now a pony. This is getting interesting.
What a way to officially kickoff the 1st chapter! From Sunset's friends almost attacking Twilight's friends to Rarity & Pinkie being beyond right now!
Also Merry Christmas!
Wow, so many things happened... so many questions! I have no words! What a great Christmas present!
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she fainted.
So some strange being is feeding off of the Rainbooms' (Sunset's former friends) despair, while the human Pinkie Pie is not only alive, but turned into a pony as well.
Things are getting interesting!
Honestly even if it had been human Rarity, human Fluttershy had no right to act the way she did, especially not when she's just as guilty as the other Rainbooms.
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It was mostly because, to her, it looked like her former friends were acting like nothing happened. She knows she messed up and feels guilty about it, but they weren't and that infuriated her.
Merry Christmas/Happy Heart's Warming to you too
Eager to read more.