The Mane Seven explore a distant island several miles off the coast of Equestria. What they see fills their hearts with dread. How can this be? How can there be a land so silent? So empty?
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So will this story go anywhere or is that it? Just curious....
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Depends on how popular it becomes.
Well, that was strange, but in a good way.
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I for one would really appreciate a sequel. Really want to see if the king means "hooray, my species might survive!" or "hooray, magical creatures for me to feast on!"
Was that meant to be ambiguous, or am I just an idiot?
Before I read this, I must know: What's so unusual about a deserted island?
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in a world full of life and magic? quite a lot actually.
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think about it, what place on earth has absolutely no life in it? Even nuclear wastelands have some traces of life and some the most extreme areas have some sort of life inhabiting it.
Hmm, well this was interesting, in a grim sort of way.
I have never heard of bitch black before.
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Oops.
Never heard of that shade before
-Dm
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Bitch black. The darkest of shades. Vantablack has nothing on it. Black holes bow in fear and reverence.
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If it makes you feel better, it’s probably the second funniest spelling error I’ve come across. The funniest was in a YouTube comment. Long story short, the guy put dick instead of dock.
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The worst part is that I did it TWICE.
But is it fun?
Aw, crud.
So...what the hell ate part of Pinkie's treat?!
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ambiguous.
I'll admit my first impression was that this fallen Kingdom was meant to be a mirror to Equestria. I took the dead forest to be a mirror of the Everfree, the decaying farm to be a mirror to Sweet Apple Acres, and initially interpreted the Castle on a Hill as a mirror to Canterlot before realizing it was different. I thought it was leaning toward the idea of one kingdom's demise foretelling the fall of another.
That said, I enjoyed the story. Rare that I find such an interesting one. I'd like to see something about how this place came to be as it is. Perhaps a prequel story with Twilight learning about the stories of this place (History books, old journals, maybe even some things from the Castle of the Two Sisters since they had some ancient tomes as well). In any case, I enjoyed it, and I'll be looking forward to reading more from you.
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Thanks
I enjoyed it. When I hear castle on a hill I immediately think Castle of the Two Sisters, after Luna wrecked the place.
Angry Luna is best wrecking ball.
Well, that was interesting.
You better not leave it there, I want more.
How do they know it has no magic? And what portal?
Are none of them gonna comment on what she said?
Wait, so rainbow was wrong?
I’m surprised she’s still able to pull stuff out of her mane.
Wait what?
Not gonna lie, I was thinking the same thing.
Outer-wall?
Continue ?