• Member Since 18th Jan, 2014
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Brolkier


Military Brony. Saving lives one pony at a time.

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The opportunity of a lifetime presents itself, as Derpy undergoes a new magic medical procedure, to fix her eyes. The results are astounding, and Derpy is presented with a literal "new outlook on life."

Will Derpy come to find that she now has a "normal" life, or will she lose sight of what's always been important to her?


Inspired by the Futurama episode; "The Cyber House Rules"
Cover art credited to dA user: BaumkuchenPony

Chapters (5)
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Comments ( 22 )

derp! nice job on the way you included sparkler as part of the family! (most bronies do not.):derpytongue2:

I was a little hesatent to read this, thinking it might not be writen that well. I'm glad I read things before passing judgment!
Also, I love how you use,
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for page breaks, and was wondering if you would mind if I used them?:duck:

Skydoesminecraft is Time Turner? What?

I'm enjoying this very much! :derpytongue2:

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I have no problem with you using them as well.

And with that, I leave a hoof to you /)

I really like this story, keep up the good work :pinkiehappy:

I like this story. It's like living a small part of there life with them, and it gets a few laughs out of me as well.:eeyup:

For those without experience with single-eye problems, the other eye compensates to the point where the only handicap is a lack of depth perception (and a not-particularly-useful backup if the good eye fails for some reason). After corrective surgery, expect to see no significant change in ability at first (acquisition of depth perception takes time), but be aware that the patient will acquire a tendency to occasionally (maybe once a month, or a lot more for the first few months) close the good eye to appreciate the view through the formerly bad one.


So far, this story is portraying the psychological effects of such surgery quite well.

DERPY WILL NEVER BE DERPY AGAIN!!!

:derpyderp1:I'd hate myself if I just left it like that.:derpyderp2:

The key is in the tags. :derpytongue2:

This was a great story. I hope that you can write another one just as good as this :twilightsmile: And a brohoof for derpy /) :derpyderp2:

I find that last paragraph to be one of the best things I have ever read in a fanfic- or any book for that matter- ever!
You defanitly deserve the follow, fave, and like you got from me!

Too bad I can't give you more than that...:pinkiesad2:

I thank you all for your support and following it to the end! :pinkiehappy:

If I could ask for anything, it would be ideas for another story, but if not, I'll see what I can come up with next. :derpytongue2:

Hnnnnng hearts attack.....*while dead* good story.

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