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abrony-mouse


Occasional FimFic contributor. Also short reviews on request. Blog for silliness, music, writing. STATUS 2024.05.05: Reluctantly giving birth to a fic. Can I push this one back in?

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  • Today
    5th May. Random thoughts, music and pony.

    To boldly go
    To blissfully go
    To angrily go
    To happily go
    To sadly go
    To manically go

    Is this lazy, or does it work? Jury is out.


    WARNING: TRIGGERING TOPICS / POLITICS

    My pronouns are

    *drum roll*

    *more drum roll*

    *drum roll on a rolling drum*

    "If I was a guy –I mean, I am one, sort of"

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  • Saturday
    4th May. Random thoughts, music and pony.

    WARNING: SAD

    In the morning, in the winter shade
    On the first of March, on the holiday
    I thought I saw you breathing

    All the glory that the Lord has made
    And the complications when I see his face
    In the morning, in the window

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    0 comments · 14 views
  • Friday
    3rd May. Random thoughts, music and pony.

    Still Alive from Portal is still so freaking good


    "The half elf pony paladin gains 4 hit points more per level than the werepony bat mage. But your werepony gains two extra abilities on the full moon. Is everypony following?"


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  • Thursday
    Story Ideas

    A place to put all my story ideas

    SFW

    A 2nd person adventure along the lines of the Frazzits https://www.fimfiction.net/user/70170/AlwaysDressesInStyle

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  • Thursday
    2nd May. Random thoughts, music and pony.

    "Let me finish my cute G3 fic!"

    "Silence! You shall first make a G5 fic, despite you knowing almost nothing about it! It is the perfect plan."


    INTRUSIVE THOUGHTS UPDATE!

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Apr
25th
2024

It Doesn't Matter Now - The End of All There Ever Was is due – but Pinkie Pie needs to finish something first by Loganberry (Random Recommendations in <50 words #4) · 6:50pm April 25th

Overall. I'm speechless. Which is a disadvantage when giving reviews.

Best lines:


“It’s all I can do to get the sigh effect going in a vacuum like this, and I’ve had practice. Yet here you are, this splash of pink in a place where even black should not be. Please, please may I just get this done, and then we can all have a nice rest? I’d even think about offering you a cup of tea later on, though obviously it would just be for the show of the thing. It doesn’t matter now.”


Why read? Makes you think; delivers on concept; interesting concept; unique.

Flaws. Pinkie could be more fun.

Meta: Skim-read?Full-read? Recommend Author?
Special Slice of life begins with the end of the universe. Classic Pinkie.

Final thought. Mere thoughts are too limited in scale to finish a review of this fic. All is Pink. Pink is All.

Comments ( 2 )

Thank you for the review! This, as it happens, is my entry in the Royal Canterlot Library, probably the biggest honour I've ever had for any of my stories. I would hold that Pinkie here isn't supposed to be especially fun. The point is that there's a deeper side to her character, that she isn't all about parties.

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No problem :)

and Ikwym, that is why I wanna do a deep review of your fics.

I respect that you have a different Pinkie to show the world, and you do it well. But I suppose to me, while Pinkie isn't all fun and laughter in the show, there is an irrepressible nature to her interactions. And I was looking for that back and forth with a Pinkie fic. The fic is wonderful - just wanted more of that Pinkieish feeling, althouth that may well be a personal thing :P

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