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Occasional FimFic contributor. Also short reviews on request. Blog for silliness, music, writing. STATUS 2024.05.12: ELEVEN PEOPLE LIKED MEH FIC! THANK YOUUUU <3

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Apr
28th
2024

REVIEW! The Anatomy of Aesthetics ~ History recalls Flaire d'Mare as the eminent fashion designer ~ by AltruistArtist (Random Recommendations in <50 words #6) · 6:41am April 28th

Overall. Came for the pretty pony picture. Stayed for the verbal visuals.

Best lines:

“Indeed, polyester! Of course it’s polyester.” Flaire whinnied a shrill laugh.


A sob punched Flaire in the gut.


Flaire’s ears twitched backward with each of her indiscreet gulps.


The memory was watery[...]

Why read? beautiful; engaging topic; evocative writing; shining character

Flaws. Takes a while to get going.

Meta: Skim-read? Full-read? TBC Recommend Author? TBC

Final thought. The adverb metaphoricaled me in the sternum.

Comments ( 2 )
PresentPerfect
Author Interviewer

yeah, this really caught my attention on the front page this morning

5778505
it is gorgeous, isn't it. Love that use of colour. And the artistry carries on inside <3

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