Apr
24th
2024
Pinkie Pie Drives a Hearse - BRING OUT YOUR DEAD!!! by Winston (Random Recommendations in <50 new words #1) · 5:09am April 24th
Overall. Just like watching a FiM ep. Except a really strange one.
Best lines:
“This doesn’t have anything to do with me, does it?” she asked with concern. “Am I scheduled to be dead today?”
“Lemme see here.” Her secretary consulted a day planner. “No, but your afternoon is a bit light,” she said dryly. “I can try to work it in if you like.”
“BRING OUT ANY DEAD YOU HAVE… UM, PLEASE.” Fluttershy’s voice drifted through the window. It was a bit on the quiet side, but only in the relative sense that she hadn’t turned her megaphone up quite as loud as Pinkie Pie.
Why read? Mane 6 characterisation. Delivery on concept. Short & Sweet. Dialogue!
Flaws. Ending.
Meta: Skim-read? ✔ Full-read? TBC Recommend Author? TBC
Final thought. BRING OUT YER DEEEEAD
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abrony-mouse · 62 views
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Hey, a new reviewer!
Okay, kind of review, but they're all welcome! Could maybe do with a clearer link to the story (ideally to its description page rather than the chapter text itself) but otherwise I really like the format. Will definitely read these if you post more!
yay, thanks for the comment! yup it's a very smol review. What I hope to do, after skimming and short-reviewing other fics by the author, is do a full review of either this fic, or one of their others, which will be very detailed. That will let me fill in the rest of the meta. Good point about the story link - have made a little 'click here' sign.
Re reviews, thanks!
Having had a look at your shorts recently, tempted to review another one of them :)
incidentally, I am adding them to a new group I made to share and request reviews - atm just a little personal thing for both reviews that I like and for stories that want reviews https://www.fimfiction.net/group/217616/2024-reviews-group
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Any reviews of my fics will be extremely welcome, regardless of what you think of them! No obligation of course, but any time you want to please do go for it.
Also, I've joined that group. Let's see how it goes.
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Yay :) FiM 2024 Reviews here we gooo!