Whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa... WHOA!

Pen... Are you writing clop now? This pleases me. Also, cute art. I shall give this a go once I get more free time.

Taco

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damn that image of marble on the character tag doesn't fit her anymore

7082009 Heheh, 'ride'. Because, y'know, they're horses. Get it? Uh....Imma shut up now.

7082256 You don't get to go to Equestria. Not really.

7082515 One second, let me fix that. Oh, now it wooooooooooor-....

7082639 Made you look, right?

7082901 The secret is, clicking 'no' sends you to Azkaban. Congratulations.

7083240 Whoa! Whoa! Whoa! I guess I am. Sort of. Does writing window dressing for someone else's clop chapters count as writing clop? Eh, let's count it as a 'yes' because it makes me feel all grown-up and stuff. Uh, I didn't read the clop chapter and now I'm waiting here for comments on it or for some random passing god to smite me, whichever comes first.

7083287 7083408 This is actually the story of how an intercontinental ballistic missile met a taco.

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7083776 what is true??, she is smiling so hard that looks creepy and totally goes against her canon, well at least is not as bad as starlight new hairdo for season 6.....

7083812 did you grip your chair armrest before or after the cloptional?

7083818 I wrote that comment for the first chapter. The nonexistent armrests didn't survive that sudden flood of story. With heavy heart I had to bury them in my mind. There's enough space to spare in there anyways.

Moar plz

Before reading I was like, "Cloptional, so like with a link going to the actual clop section."

2 minutes into reading, "Welp, I walked straight into that one."

I'm calling it right now.
Starlight performed a spell and made Marble and whoever the human is switch bodies.

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Hahaha, I'll count it. Its a step in the right drection at least.

Is this story finished?

If the next chapter starts with the morning after, I'm going to be very sad. I love the setup.

I didn't know how much I need this, until I needed more.

Please provide more, by the way.
I mean, *Blush*, if that's okay with you.

7086346 Make that a double helping Q~Q

Well now, it seems there's gonna be lots of tacos with stuffing.
party time!

Well, things did certainly happen and I'd be grateful if I was able to read about more things.
Please

Me like

Definitely going to put on my read later list, but for my sanity I have to wait to see if it's going to continue. I love your stories, but if it's not a one shot, you always start strong, but then we don't see an update ever again. Such a tease...

I always pictured Starlight as a larger mare.
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On to my thoughts about the story: unfinished.
We, the audience, never really learns what happened to Marble, the narrator, or if Marble's body can take all of Big Mac's ICBM. We are also hinted that Marble can vocalize more than just "Mmmhmmm" by whatStarlight said on the train, but we never see that. Other than that, this was a fun story that I enjoyed reading, I just would like to see more explored and explained. I feel everything could be wrapped up in another cloptional chapter and finish with another slice of life chapter.

Suddenly Pineapples invade.

This is kinda hot

7088758 The story is and has been marked "incomplete. "

My, my, are you just going to sit there and take this, boy? You need to get involved in your rutting, you'll have a much more wonderful time!

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Hmmm, feel like I saw it marked as complete.

I will admit, I was very upset it ended there

I'll just have to fav and see what happens next

Then they wake up tomorrow and get a show of charades trying to explain the alien intruding in their beloved mare....
Keep going! ;)

Dayum. Just...dayum.

I actually find this story more intriguing than anything else.
There's obviously a story behind Mac and Marble's relationship and how it eventually grew to include a couple sort-of love rivals and then eventually Starlight Glimmer (the fact that such acquisitions seemed to revolve around Marble more than Big Mac in particular). I hope that element of the plot gets a lot of attention, because honestly it's way more interesting than hearing a fish-out-of-water story involving a dimension-hopping brony.

So when's the next bit hitting the theaters?

This story is getting me very interested in it a lot in hope you make a new chapter's for this story soon please update more soon.

7104707 *Twilight Zone Music/Han Zimmer Buom*

It's look like Marble still inside her own body. I think that MC and Marble start to... merge together?

Is the story kill?

7386124 Typical Pen Mightier's story...They tend to run out of fuel a few kilometers in.

dammit and things were getting good

Aww this needs more attention...

I wonder if this will ever be completed?

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i dont think it will be

Ah, well. I have plenty else to read.8274149

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yea i just finished reading anthropology its a intresting read to say the least

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Link?

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https://www.fimfiction.net/story/4656/anthropology one link coming up

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Yoink!

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that will be tree fity

I kinda want to see more of this.

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guess it is dead then :<

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Alas.

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maybe it's just sleeping