Beauty on the Beach

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summer storm

summer storm #1 · May 24th, 2015 · · · Chapter 3: Parting ways ·

very nice story. not entirely sure why someone else already voted down on it, but some people are just dicks. wonderfully written and no grammar errors that i could see.

Fimbulvinter

Fimbulvinter #2 · May 24th, 2015 · 2 · · Chapter 3: Parting ways ·

6011851 There is always that person who downvotes because they don't like the idea, or the coupling, or something similar that doesn't mesh with their own ideals. You just have to accept it and move on.

The Ascendent

The Ascendent #3 · May 24th, 2015 · · · Chapter 3: Parting ways ·

Awesome story man.

Unbreakable

Unbreakable #4 · May 24th, 2015 · 4 · · Chapter 1: A WHAT kind of beach??? ·

M'mares *tips fedora and saves the independent proud damsels in distress*

summer storm

summer storm #5 · May 24th, 2015 · 1 · · Chapter 3: Parting ways ·

6011868
Indeed. What annoys me though was that when i went to the main page, there were no further views. Someone had downvoted without reading the story.

Christopher

Christopher #6 · May 25th, 2015 · · · Chapter 3: Parting ways ·

I looooooove this story

Razalon The Lizardman

Razalon The Lizardman #7 · May 25th, 2015 · · · Chapter 2: We need to talk ·

Beauty and the beach

Not 'on' the beach?

Nick11235

Nick11235 #8 · May 25th, 2015 · · · Chapter 2: We need to talk ·

6014884 I think it was a reference to "Beauty and the Beast," made popular by Disney's film/movie.

Fimbulvinter

Fimbulvinter #9 · May 25th, 2015 · · · Chapter 3: Parting ways ·

6014884 That was a typo. Corrected and well spotted.

Templenator

Templenator #10 · May 26th, 2015 · 2 · · Chapter 3: Parting ways ·

Huh, and here was me thinking it'd turn out that Cheerliee hid Mac's boxers in an attempt to get closer to him...

DJPonE450

DJPonE450 #11 · May 27th, 2015 · · · Chapter 3: Parting ways ·

You good sir, know how to write a proper love story. The detail and overall vocabulary made me love it all the more. Not to mention you like to mention sex in a very scientific way, I look forward to the works you create later. Well Done

Fimbulvinter

Fimbulvinter #12 · May 27th, 2015 · · · Chapter 3: Parting ways ·

6022412 If you liked the style, there are three other stories done in the same 1st person descriptive as part of this continuity. you might enjoy those if you haven't already read them.

CaptainSanchez