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Golden Flare


I love to create stories.

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Shin Dowe,
A stallion who can see what's in ponies hearts through his dreams, the sides of them that they hide from everypony.
Many thought he was crazy, some call him insane, but all of them thinks he belongs in an asylum.
Shin moved away from his hometown in Dodge City to get away from those who hate him and decided to live in Ponyville.
He wants to try and get a fresh start, but that means he has to keep his thoughts under lock and key.
He thought, no, he knew nopony could understand.
But one nightly walk allowed him to meet a certain bat-pony, who made him realize that the world's not perfect.
It never was.


Takes place after "Bats!"

Chapters (18)
Comments ( 15 )

I think she would be called a vampire pony, bat ponies are like Luna's guard, unless that's what you meant by bat pony

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Well, Shin is the one narrating the story, he sees Flutterbat, looking like a half bat, half pony, so he doesn't necessarily know she's a vampire pony until she explains it to him in Chapter 8, but thanks for letting me know, I'll remember that for the next chapter! :pinkiesmile:

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Sorry, got caught up in another fanfic, trying to finish another chapter, I just wanted to get that outta the way. More will be on the way soon, I just need a little more time, sorry for the wait. :eeyup:

:pinkiehappy: I did! I enjoyed it soooo much!! :pinkiehappy:

3923108 Thanks, that means a lot! :pinkiesmile: I'll have more chapters out soon!

I think we all learned a valuable lesson here: applejack and rainbow dash are huge jerks!!!

3923512 Well, Shin and Flutterbat did eat a lot of Applejack's apples and Rainbow Dash REALLY wanted the cider, so I figured I'd show a more aggressive side of AJ and RD towards that.

I'm really glad everyone's enjoying the fanfic :twilightsmile:

3923542 well AJ at least has a reason because apples are her job but RD doesn't have a reason

3923703 the apples made the apple cider that Rainbow loves so much, so she got angry and frustrated at Shin and took out her agression on him

Comment posted by Golden Flare deleted Feb 24th, 2014
Comment posted by Golden Flare deleted Feb 24th, 2014

is there a description of shin dowe and flora allure's appearance?
it's never explained in this story.
but i like it nonetheless.
7/10

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