"My name is Sunset Shimmer, and there are two Twilight Sparkles who are both madly in love with me.
Please help."
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Oh. Oh, you cheeky dickwaffle, the puns. Alright, alright, I'll read it.
good dammit i know that reading this kind of fics at 2 am is no good for me 'cause i wake up all my family, i was laughing so hard!!!




but totally worth it!!!!!
this is just to much for me, i think i'm gonna die!!
That ending though
I bet Twi WOULD be totally into that.
Glad to see this fic finally making it out of your head and onto the site!
*Looks at title.* Proceed face-palm.
Lovely. There were a lot of really funny points in this. And I'm really glad it didn't end the way I thought it would.
Damn it.
I thought that title meant two hands in Sunset's bush.
I guess that just means I'm a terrible person for thinking that.
Celestia that ending. So much yes. Sunshy is my new ship!
Okay, no it's not, but it's still funny.
I have no idea how this got on the front page, but DAMN if it isn't funny. Sometimes a silly little fic like this is a good thing. you shouldn't take life or literature too serious all the time.
Next step is for all of Sunset's friends and enemies to fall in love with her.
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Ha. Ha ha ha... HA!!! I know what you're referencing~!
wow all I can say is just wow that was awesome
If I were Sunset, I would haul off and punch Twilight in the face for setting a fucking time limit. I mean, I'd probably think of an answer in that amount of time, yeah, but she didn't have to make it an order.
...Alright, so maybe a punch to the face would be a bit dramatic. Then again, so is high school romance.
Well that last bit was quite unexpected. At least it was something (or in this case, someone) they could do
Nice. That was freaking Hi-larious XD
Dear God this was funny.
Ah, twilight does have a tendancy to go completely overboard when shes frantic. Funny to read. Poor sunset, hopefully she and Fluttershy make a good pair.
We get both Twilights making out, ShimmerShy, and Flash Sentry gets nothing?
Works for me...
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Truer words have never been spoken.
Ouch.
*DIES* That is such a perfectly Twilight thing to say!!
Dammit, stop killing me!! I'm running out of Revives!!
And no "me days" for Sunset at all, because she's just a trophy!
You tell those crazy purple bitches, Sunset!
YES! Sunshy is SPREADING! My plan is working PERFECTLY! Muahahahahahaha!!
Awesome story, loved every second of it!
This was pretty funny.
You know, I could've seen it working if both Twilights hadn't come on so strong.
Ah well, selfcest for the win!
In the end, self-cest is the key.
I like it....
WHAT?...thats all I got man!!!!
Shimmershy/Flutterset? I somehow approve
Great story, I really enjoyed it! Thumbs up from me.
Good to know I'm not the only one. And my roommate said I was being stupid, it's helped me more times than I care to admit. not to mention it's tested to bear 2 tonnes of weight (It fell off the back of a forestry truck... I love my luck)
And my sides are hurting!
But hey, everyone ended up happy (except Flash but no one cares about him)
SEQUEL!!!!
That ending!
I lost it there. Your Twilight(s) is spot-on, exactly how I would imaging they would deal with this revelation. And that Shimmershy! What a Twist!
I really just want to make a clop fic bassed on that picture there
I did not that end coming, though I was VERY much hoping for it!
I like selfcest, I like Fluttershy ships. Therefore I love this.
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face and the topped with the phrase "Thats worse than incest times a billion!"
My reaction exactly, only with more of a
6029075 Oops. I might be writing a SunsetXSunset story right now...
Long time no see by the way!
Sequle now plz
Flash ended up alone, that's sad Flash needs more love so I think he should at least be shipped with Blueblood
Fisting!
Grinding!
You smart person, you!
That was glorious.
Ten outta teeeeeen.
That was the best possible ending A++
I'm a sucker for multiple instances of the same person interacting. This was hilarious through and through, especially Sunset's response to the Twilights' proposal. Thank you for this.
If I was gay and less of a dick I'd totally bang myself. Good call Twi.
Well, I certainly expected a TwilightSunsetPrincess threesome, but Sentry getting nothing worth it xD
Dat SunsetShy was unnexpected xD
6029127 Flash ended up alone. Finally. And he also lost Twilight to Twilight. The irony.
I had to take a few minutes to collect myself after that ending. Jesus-mother-humping-Christ.
I loved this, a whole lot, and I'd love to see more. The situation's pretty much been wrapped up by this point, but it'd be awesome if you could find a way to continue it!
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I completely dug that Sunset told the Twilights off and ended up with Fluttershy - because about from the 24 hour thing onward it was clear that those two was cray. I'd complain about Twilight being OOC, but this seemed to pretty much be a crackfic, and it made me laugh. So, yeah.
Up thumbs.
6029075 Selfcest is bestcest.
For me, that was the best line in the whole story simply because it proves that she IS that oblivious
Oh, and dat surprise... uh... Sunsetshy? Fluttershimmer? yeah... dat ship.
Oro, you are a horrible, horrible person and I love you dearly.
Twilight and Twilight making out... nothing wrong with that. Though I think Sunset kinda screwed herself over with Fluttershy.