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gallagsp the corgi


And then my therapist said I shouldn't have stopped taking my medication! HA!

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Short stories all under 500 words! Read and enjoy!

Read the sequel here!

One of the chapters has been made into a full-size story based on Popular request! Check out "Rusted" Check it out here!

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After reading a bunch of really sad fics lately this was just perfect.

A:pinkiehappy: Yeah, I think I'm going to enjoy these.

2972695 Glad you enjoy them!

2972410 Happy to bring you out of that depresing-sort of stuff :scootangel:

Love your stories! Though this one might have used a follow-up, as to not leave any ambiguities about what happened and what did not...

2977077 I was thinking around the same thing, it seems kind of lacking to me, I thought about making this into a stand-alone story to get more detail, then i remembered that i read MANY fics with the same idea, and couldnt think of any way to make mine stand out. I might also do a follow up later on, another short one (maybe from twilight's side?)

Also, glad you like it so much. Seeing positive feedback really helps me get stuff written

Accidentally Rainbow Dash from killing herself? :pinkiegasp:

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Something along those lines, I guess. :pinkiehappy:

Timeline: 4 years after the events of Equestria Girls, when Twilight finally got used to the teasing from her friends.

You go Luna! Protect your spider pet...

3002635 I didn't even think about when that chapter took place, but I like your thinking

3005805 Celestia continued to feel spider crawling on her for the next week after that night...

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO:derpytongue2: shes dead:moustache:

What the..........................................................:applejackconfused:

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Wrong, a fate woorse than death.

A LECTURE BY TWILIGHT SPARKLE! (DUN DUN DUN!) :trixieshiftleft:

Hahahahahhahhahahhahahahahahahahhahahahhahahahahahahhahahahahahhahhahhahahahahahhahahahhahahahhahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaahahahhahahahahahahahahaahhahahahahahhahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahaahhahaahhahahahahahahhahahahaahhahahhahahhahhahahhahhahhahhahahahahahahahahahahahaahhahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahaahhahahahahahahahahaahhahahahahhahahahahahahaahhaahahahhaahahhahahahahahahahhahahha................................That was funny you know:pinkiehappy::pinkiesmile:

Comment posted by scarves-n-converse deleted Aug 10th, 2013

Actuallt lightning dust, I think she is faster then lightning, considering she was faster then you and all...

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Well, considering she had completely gone bonkers and is willing to destroy everything in her path to get back at Dash, I think her perspective may be a tad bit skewed...

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Yes...a tad. because a person who is a bit bonkers will be dirty, have yellow teeth and still wairing a cadet uniform that is teared. I think she is more then a bit bonkers.

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you're right... how about "Downright psycotic"? :pinkiecrazy:

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No, she is not cupcakes insane.

I must compliment your skill to write small stories like these on an almost daily basis. I really like these stories, although some ideas could use some more explanations, like with "Hidden Agendas". I was mostly confused by the end, though this is a very minor complaint. Is it hard to come up with ideas for this and to have a 500 word limit?

3033907 Sometimes. Most of these stories I just came up with randomly, but couldn't figure out how to work it into a regular sized story. Some I could if I wanted to, like with "Hidden Agendas" but I had to cut out most of the potential in order to make the 500 word limit that I set. (And I set the limit because I have a tendency to ramble) Most of these are just me getting an idea written down before I lose it and just practicing my writing. I'm glad you're enjoying it though, Seeing people enjoying my stuff always makes me feel good inside.

3033905 So, setting a field on fire as target practice for when you attack your rival witth lightning isn't insane?

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She isn't planning on turning her into cupcakes, so she is not pinkamena insane, but still insane

3034149 Ah, I understand. My mistake for not knowing the difference between cupcakes insane and regular insane. :derpytongue2:

...And then Discord came and covered everything with snow.

But Applejack is secretly a witch everyone knows that

3039921 or a scarecrow... at least on nightmare night

Just like all my fanfic

3041135 ha! I was waiting for someone to say something like that! You made my day

Head canon is your personal extension of the lore. Head cannon is what you commit suicide with. Learn the difference.

3047307 Spelling was never my strong suite, my vulpine friend, the error has been corrected.

Also, not sure if you meant that jokingly or not, but I take suicide jokes very seriously. Someone very close to me committed suicide.

And then.... Cupcakes was born :pinkiecrazy:

Very well done. Love it :heart::twilightsmile:

Personally, I hate Cupcakes, and everything related to it. Also, the ending is bit confusing - I'm not entirely sure which Pinkie Pinkie is now.

3061870 this isn't really "cupcakes" Pinkamena, its more along the lines of my own interpritation of her that lives within Pinkie's mind. I also hate cupcakes (mainly because I hate horror and overly-gorey material) but the concept interests me enough to catch my attention. The pinkie at the end is your decision, whatever you feel like believing.

3062238 "The pinkie at the end is your decision, whatever you feel like believing." HATE HATE HATE HATE HATE SO MUCH HAAAAATE stories that do so. It's the WORST. WRITING TRICK. EVER.

Unless you are a impossibly famous poet from over 100 years ago, like Shakespeare, Plato, or my home country's hero Mickiewicz, that teachers force on their pupils to read their works, making ambiguous ending WON'T win you fans.

3064708 give the fact that Pinkemena is a name usually used for Pinkie's dark side and the chapter ends like this:

"O-Okay, thank you, Mr. Cake." Pinkie stood up and followed Mr. Cake out of the room. She cast one last look at the shattered mirror and shuddered as a hundred Mini-Pinkemena Diane Pies watched her with looks of hatred and rage from the shattered pieces of glass.

I'd say happy pinkie's still in control. For the moment ~C.Spirit

3064708 Who said I was doing this for fans? I'm doing this for my own entertainment, and no one is forcing you to read this anyway.

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