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TheFaceofMercy


If there was any way to cure laziness, I probably wouldn't know 'cause I'd be sleeping.

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The newest prince in all Equestria, icon for all old and young, now had to deal with something really unexpected, after all, you weren't always transformed into a PRINCESS by mistake.

AN: My first Rule 63 story, half of the mane cast are mares (Pinkie, Rarity and Fluttershy) and the other half are males (Rainbow Blitz, Applejack and Dusk Shine) Some of the Princesses are R63 too (Prince Solaris, Eros, and Princess Luna)
Teen because... Yeah.
Massive rewrite taking place.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 29 )

That was an interesting twist to start with. I can't wait to see what is going to happen next. Let alone how the others are going to react. I question is how much are the other guys going to hit on Dusk now that he is a mare? Good luck with the next chapter.

Awesome. I love how Spine's mind worked. Now lets see if any of Dusk's friends gets a crush on Dusk. That would be funny if all three stallions did and they asked the other two girls for help on how to court Twilight. That would be funny. Good luck with the next chapter. I loved that his story updated quickly. Good luck with the next chapter, I hope it comes out soon. I am also favoriting this story. Thanks for writing it.

That was awesome. I love how Rarity was able to see through that illusion. I think that even though AppleJack should be apple to detect lies, I say he should be so awe struck by Twilight that he doesn't know. Also Dusk has to confront Pinkie before she spills the beans. Now let the story continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Awesome job. Also great reference with Doctor Who.

5224420 Thank you for the enthusiasm, I love your comments and if you want to see something you like in the story, just comment it, I like when people leave me their feedback!

5224512 Okay. I would like to see both AppleJack and Rainbow Blitz fight over Twilight. That would be hilarious. Also Twilight needs to do something crazy to not get Pinkie to spill the beans, and to stop the party. (you know pinkie loves to through surprise parties.) Then we need both AppleJack and Rainbow Blitz to ask award questions to Rarity and Fluttershy about how to get Twi's attention. That would be funny to read. Thanks for responding to my comments. This is a great story, and I'm excited to see what happens next in this crazy universe. To bad though that Solaris know that Twilight doesn't have any additional siblings. I would have died if Solaris asked Twilight out on a Date.:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Finally! A fan fiction where some genders are reversed and others are not. It's about time I found one. I hope to read it at some point.

Awww.... Fluttershy flirts the same way she says hello!

“But somethin’ that does sound suspicious is why Dusk never mentioned that he had a twin sister, I mean we are his friends for Faust’s sake, he should tell us more about his family and all.”

To be fair AJ; he didn't talk about Gleaming either.

Sweet chapter. I like how Dusk is acting more and more like the stereo typical mare. If he doesn't change back soon, it may be permanent. Good job. I'm happy about the update and love how loopy Blitz is acting. As for AppleJack's accent, yah that's hard to write. Good luck with the next chapter. Thanks for the quick update.

I rather liked the detail that the King/Queen of Magic and Checklist is already referring to herself as a Princess.

It made me do a double take, but a nice little character moment. :twilightsmile:

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I think that's the first time I've ever thought that gigantic caping plot wound in A Canterlot Wedding has been a good thing...

Well...This particular question has been bugging me for some time : Dusk and Twilight's cutie mark are the same! What will they be doing about that?

WHY MUST I CHOOSE DOCTOR!?!? Seriously, Baker was awsome, but I also consider Tennant my favorite 'new age' Doctor. My problem is that the new and old series doctors are just to different from each other to compare to the original 8 (aside from Capaldi, he strikes me as more original D.W than the other 3). You can't compare a 40-50 yo actor to a 20 yo one and not recognize that they will be fundamentally different from one another on screen.
... Mostly though, I just can't decide. Curse you indecision!

I feel like I'm missing a chapter between this one and the previous one. Where are they and what happened in the hospital?

“…your mother was a hamster and your father smelled of elderberries!”

Also it's nice to see this story was updated but what happened at the hospital after the prince came?

7560221 I knew I had forgotten something :pinkiegasp:

Thanks for the update. Great job.

interesting idea. like what i am seeing here. you most defiantly need an editor.
but other wise i love these kinds of stories keep up the good work. ^_^

2nd chapter. much much better. ^_^

I really liked this. Hope to see more in the future!

I really like this story so far hope to read more soon

Oy vay, buddy, you could've used my help on this one, huh? :derpytongue2: Sorry that I can't offer it now. :ajsleepy:

Well, grammar mistakes aside, this is pretty fun. I had it in my Read Later list and decided to check it out, despite its lack of completion (I usually wait, but every now and then I make exceptions). Then again, you've got something else you need to work on, don't you? :raritywink:

Anyway, given one or two of the comments, I now understand why the previous chapter was posted after this one. It made perfect sense to me this way.

I've gotta say, I'm looking forward to where you're going with this one. Hopefully you've got time to swap between this story and MaMD! :yay:

7610409 I wish I had the time, but you know me procrastinator extraordinaire. :rainbowdetermined2:

I usually write for this story when I already exhausted the inspiration for MaMD, it is a pretty good way to avoid a writer's block.

I'm glad you liked it, and it is indeed a shame you cannot help me out :derpytongue2:

Please Sir Some more?!

You can't leave it like this, this is a god tier story.

WHY DO ALL THE REALLY GOOD STORIES DIE?!

The Monk

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Wow, I'm glad you liked it. I'm currently working on both my stories but college took a lot of my time this semester. I'm trying to get back into the rhythm but it's really nice of you to say that. :pinkiehappy:

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Because the good die young.

this fic is amazing so far! I sincerely hope you continue it. BUT also, get any life things straightened out or completed, you come first before your audience! it doesn't matter how long it takes neighther, I'm a patient girl :twilightsmile:

Fluttershy is OOC, yet it's kind of funny:rainbowlaugh:

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