So close... · 8:26am Feb 2nd, 2022
The next chapter for Our Daughter is almost ready.
It's been a challenging one to write, but I think it's also quite a strong chapter as I begin to reach moments I've been wanting to cover since I started out. The story has turned out longer and a far bigger emotional trip than I thought it would be when I started out with my initial two short chapters.
Thank you so very much for liking my story Uni-Pecker ^^
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Hello would you like to rp I have Instagram and discord snapchat and messenger
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I'll be sure to make the next chapter extra special ;)
Well dang, happy to hear your feedback.
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First
twiluna. I’m a huge fan (even have a short story about those two in the mods que to be posted). Also, sparity as a second ship appeals to me especially if I get to see a bit more growing up spike and rarity on the side rather than baby dragon.
Secondly, your premise is nice. “And with any luck things won't get awkward. Or out of control.” Lol sure. Now I’m expecting something to go crazy.
The writing itself so far as been nice and enjoyable to read. Seems to me as though Luna is going a bit crazy over twilight
So I hope celestia will also have a great, funny impact too soon. Maybe by roping Cadence in as well?
Looking at my comment on your story, I could have put this all there. I guess at the time I had other things beckoning and so kept it rather short..
Impress me next chapter and I’ll try with a better comment there