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lillytheomegawolf


I enjoy reading and writing cute ponies. If my works brighten up your day, even better.

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Bright Mac and Pear Butter, newly married stallion and mare.
This story follows the first day after their union.

The night time wedding leads to cuddles under the stars as they come to terms with the Pear family's exit from Ponyville.

The following day, Pear Butter does her best to settle into her new family. They also have fun getting to know each other more as husband and wife.

A cute and cuddly story with a bit of spice.

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This is adorable and well written, Definitely feels like an actual episode in tone so you pulled off the feel of that particular episode well and the whole feel of the couple and their rather nice relaxing and cute play off one another really works. And it was nice that you hit on the feelings Buttercup had after her wedding- the fear and sadness of losing her entire family and with it being so new to the pair of them, the slight pushback of Bright Mac's family.

All in all you wrote really a really fantastic contained story on the two. I definitely want some more of these two from you.

My heart melts at this scene! 100/10

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