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RainbowShyBrony


About the author:

Just some random guy writing pony stories that seem as though they have a good plot. I'm a busy person and don't have a lot of time to write because of work and college but I do what I can when I can and I try to keep it in good quality the first time around because I'm also in a money crunch and can't afford thing like a good editor or a good cover artist. Although some of my stories are sad I try to have something that keeps a happy mood somewhere nearby. My OC Stormy Night will make cameos when it works/fits/makes sense. Please keep your hands, feet, hooves, horns and wings inside the story at all times and enjoy the ride!

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Feb
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2016

It's here! It's here! · 9:47pm Feb 20th, 2016

The sequel to "Have you seen my Mommy?" is here! It is called "Have you met my Daughter" and you guys will be able to read it soon.

Here's a little screenshot of it for you guys:

Hope you guys and gals like it! Enjoy!

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JackRipper
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Thanks for the favorite! :heart:

Don't forget to upvote it if you haven't already. :scootangel:

2425319 Oh yeah, no problem. And from how you worded it, it sounds like you are going to stick to your story as you envision it instead of having the story be influenced by the audience. I really admire that. Here's to a good story.

2424916 Don't you worry, there is more to this story then meets the eye. As more chapters come there will be things about Gretchen, but that will come until later.:raritywink:

Also thank you for comment, I appreciate hearing things like this. I hope you do enjoy the upcoming chapters. :twilightsmile:

2424586 I really enjoy how alive all of the characters feel. They feel as though they could be real people (or maybe you're ponyfying an experience you had). Although you could make the argument that some of the characters are exaggerated compared to the everyday it's easily defended with it being for entertainment purposes. Another thing I like about the story is Gretchen herself. While she may (on the surface) seem a little flat I always have this nagging impression that she did something or something happened to her or that she secretly enjoys caring for Quicksilver (if I mixed up the characters I'm sorry I'm really bad with names). The truth is that Gretchen is a mystery wrapped inside of an enigma and this recent out break from her is something entirely different.

If I'm blowing this out of the water or putting a lot of pressure on "the reveal" don't worry yourself about it I'm still looking forward to what you write whether I'm on the right track or I'm assuming about things that aren't even there. Can't wait to read more. You sir (is what I'm assuming from your username) have my attention.

2424494 Thank you so much for that.:twilightsmile: Was there anything in particular that you liked so far in my current story?

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