Sep
7th
2018
Imitation can only go so far before you spot the outright theft. · 2:35am September 7th
So I was reading a story to kill time, just enjoying myself.
Then I notice that this author was writing about runes. Cool, I thought. Someone else likes the idea.
Then I noticed the words seemed mighty familiar about how he was explaining them.
The idea of aspects? Hmmm.
Oh wait, long lost family returning to canterlot to see the princesses. Hmmmm.
Oh wait, the same fucking lines used to introduce them to the characters and story as a whole?
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Thadius0 · 1,135 views
· Story: Foster Father for the Princesses
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#Thought I wouldn't notice
WOW!!! Your Golden Sun displaced series was generally awesome, so awesome in fact that I read the whole series in less than 2 days... I might have a slight problem when I find a good story... Oh well!
In all honesty, you need to realize the difference between the "hate comment" and the constructive criticism. Some people have different tastes and won't like your story, but it'll be impossible to please everybody.
The people who give constructive criticism love your work and/or really want you to succeed.
Do what you love, and people who live what you do will follow. That's what's important.
What are you, a chicken?
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Holy...
Thanks for the watch. I don't feel worthy.