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Any idea how long this is goin to be?
Naturally, the part with Pinkie Pie made me laugh.
Shifting melodies is one of my favorite stories on this site cant wait to read a new one by you and aus
Right, sure it will
Yes! Another collab from the two of you? Sign me up! Shifting Melodies is still one of my Top 5 favorite stories on this site, and so I can't wait to see what you guys are able to do with this one.
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Just judging it from the description makes me think you took the human characters from earlier pony generations and put them in generation 4.
Holy Long Synopsis, Batman!
I'm glad to see you writing again, and doing another collab with Aus no less!
I hope you two have as much fun with this as you did with Shifting Melodies.
Jokes aside this was a great chapter!
keep up the good work!
Okay, is his name Christopher or Christian? You switch back and forth a half dozen times that I'm not entirely sure...
So, Chrysalis is sibling in this AU, now I'm imagining the MC yelling out to her during the wedding.
"Young lady, if you don't stop this invasion right now, so help me I will put you over my knee
*Back at the alter*
Chrysalis
good job
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Thought I snagged them all, that has now been fixed, thank you.
8107271 both he is atleast two thousand years old he has many names
... Why, Celly? Why must you invoke Murphy's Curse?!
8107338 Goddammit that's fucking funny...
8107358 Yeah, no worries. I once tried to write something like this, failed miserably and is left collecting dust on my hard drive... Best of luck to you and your co-writer in making this work. Maybe after this you can do a sort of prequel thing denoting the adventures of the MC in his earlier years.
This story made the feature box in under 24 hours which is how i found it, congrats.
I adore these types of stories. This certainly promises to be a wild ride!
Noice.
Edit: Is Twilight supposed to be in shock or something? Because her reaction to all of this was waaay too subdued for her.
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It's great.
Oh, she said the words, everyone is gonna die!
I'm a little iffy on the timeline, so was Christopher there when Starswirl banished the Dazzlings or was that before his time?
I severely doubt a human being would raise two girls without teaching them how to not tempt fate. Celly sure needs a refresher course, now.
And to be remembered it's PONYVILLE. The cataclysm Nexus of equestria. If something weird happens, it happens there first. How the hell does one tempt fate with a deck so stacked against them?!?
Yes, everything will be absolutely fine.
And I can say that with utmost certainty because it's sarcastic.
Extremely sarcastic.
I'll give this story a chance.
Also, I'm sure Celesta should be able to count because that guard said more than six words.
Ooh, a Thadius story. Well, I have to give it a go, especially since it has a romance tag.
Still waiting on the sequel to The Betrayed though. ;p
Before I begin, there better be scenes of Cutelestia and Woona giving happy greetings of "Daddy!"
because tis you, i'll go ahead and read the one chapter you have out xD
You... made wanna change your description, I'm sorry but I couldn't help but cringe, no offense, a human wielding rainbow powers and being a hero?
8109600 Megan you should have heard of her
I do believe I can actually hear Murphy laughing in the distance...
meh
*Picks up a phone*
Murphy? Yeah, I need you to come here, someone just tempted fate.
Do you hear that?
.......................
That princess,
Is Murphy's train whistle.
And he's coming full speed.
Why do they speak as if Surprise was a bad thing?
Also, all those names with no explanation. Some I understood from their definitions, but Yggdrasil? Hydia? Reeka? Draggle?
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Well the last three, they were from Gen 1.
The first one, you'll hear his story...eventually.
8115546 hey good story... But it has some community errors. Surprise is mentioned in the story as if she died long ago but in MLP:FiM she appears alive and well. Also Twilight Velvet (Twilight Sparkle and Shinning Armors mother) was a character from G1 (I learned that from a video I watched) which would make her and Surprise the oldest characters on the show, even older then Celestia and Luna. Other than those it was very good. Can't wait for the next chapter! Let me know if I missed any other community errors cause I'm not really familiar with any of the older MLP Generations just the current one.
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There are copies of many ponies throughout the generations. Many with the same name and coloration. There were some from Gen 1, and there are some in this gen, that bear a resemblance to one another across time and space.
We're treating every instance of these ponies as a separate pony. Which means fun times ahead.
8115964 Okay thanks for explaining that. It's basically like IDW Comics' take on The Transformers, characters either look a like or have the same name. That helps. I hope the MLP Movie has humans in it because that would be AWESOME!
There will be a point where Christophsr no longer has to turn into a pony correct?
Nice. 10/10 would continue reading.
What generation is Aspect remembering from? I'm assuming G3? I don't know the G' s very well.
All I know is G4 is bae and G3.5 is a spawn of Satan.
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Majesty was actually someone that only existed in the books of MLP's Gen 1. She was written out for the show.
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I thought Majesty was referring to the unicorn royalty who's name i forget. From the Hearth's Warming play.
I wonder how he'll handle Chrysalis in the future?
(future wife?)