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I enjoy reading and writing cute ponies. If my works brighten up your day, even better.


A story of how Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash met as fillies. The joys and hardships of life, friendship, and love and all the surprises that happen along their journey as they become best friends--and much more.

This cute fic includes Flutterdash shipping as well as hints of SoarinFire and TwiLuna.

After about 6 years of hiatus, I have revised and rewritten the whole story so far with the intent of continuing and finishing it. Re-release started in early 2019 with a revised chapter 1. 2020 marks a brand new chapter 9 and the continuation of the tale of two cute social outcasts. 

Thanks to Super3rainbow1 for pre-reading and helping out when I needed someone to bounce ideas around with.

Chapters (17)
Comments ( 229 )

I must say this seems to be a very adorably fabulous story I hope it does good with the ratings and all that stuff so for now I must be off to read the next chapter and wait for the third afterwards so for now stay fabulous my fellow ponies:rainbowkiss:

Hey, it's you. The guy who happens to comment on every story I ever read. And the guy who happens to comment exactly what I plan out in my head to comment as well. Writing a story? Well, it's FlutterDash, so might as well read it. However, so far, I like it! It's really cute and D'aww filled and I am enjoying it so far. Only thing I realized is that since they're both mares, how can they have a foal who has traits from both of them? I imagine magic or something of the sort, but I just thought I'd put it out there. Chapter length may also prove to be an issue, but not everyone has the time too write long chapters, I guess. However, I'd rather wait longer for a long chapter than have frequent updates with short ones. Either way, I'll be tracking it. So good luck!
And as always, FLUTTERDASH FTW :yay::heart::rainbowkiss:

899685 Hey, its you, the ah forget it. I literally see you everywhere. And zephyr. And the author.
Anyways, this story looks cute, although i cant exactly tell yet. The detail was good, but I cant help but think where they got their children, if those fillies are their children.

928655 When i start reading a thing, i finish it, so i had to finish this one too (and so i can give a definite like/dislike), but i have no idea if feeling annoyed, or angry, or just happy due to the cuteness.

I have no idea why i'm reading Romance stories with Dashie in it, probably because i can't completely process what the heck i'm doing, or probably because i read (almost) everything that has Rainbow Dash in it (which i think it's the most plausible reason).

And i said: "I'm still confused about what's between Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash, i mean, not WHY they're together,because i got it, but why they're lesbian!", that comment is basically related to the whole first chapter, because as you described it, it seems that they're lesbian (surprise... :facehoof:) and due to the fact that "Romance + :rainbowwild: = Rainbow Lesbian" it's a over-used MEME now, i can't afford it anymore, i'm just annoyed.
I'm used to read stuff, even cute one, but when i think that something is annoying me, i can get crazy. And this "meme" (because now it's a meme according to me) just annoy me and some other bronies that doesn't like Dash being lesbian.
And that's why i said, and still say: Where's the imagination? Why every time i see a romance story with Dash in it, ends that she's lesbian? I already answered by myself to those question: Because people doesn't have enough imagination (No offense).
I don't know if i explained my opinion well, so fi you have any doubt, let me know, ok?

PS: What do you mean by saying "I see where're you coming from"?

Cuteness: √
Rainbow Dash: √
I don't know what's wrong! :twilightsmile:

Oh right, FLUTTERDASH STORY. :twilightangry2:
But i'm still reading it because of the two statement before being true. And i feel ashamed. :twilightblush:
God dammit!

937698 Hey, hey, hey. They won't getting shipped till around chapter 17-19. (I won't tell exactly when but it does take a long time... thier friendship needs to grow first and a reasable ammount of time has to pass for them to accept whats going on.) I know, I've already written some of those scenes. Including when they go on a class field trip and something awesome happens there :pinkiehappy:

So for now, sit back and enjoy a story of your fave pony as a filly. :rainbowkiss:

nice they origin of there friendship nice first

This is really great! Your writing is good and you write these two really well. I'm not sure how close to canon you wanted to make this, but if its really close, then Fluttershy shouldn't be interested in animals on the ground yet, since that happens when she gets her cutie mark.

But either way, this story is really great! I can't wait to see more.

938317 Oh how annoying I had taken that out... There fixed. I'm aiming for this to be as close to canon as I can make it. I consider the couple to be as canon as any two female ponies could be in a childrens show and this is suposed to be my interpretation of how I see them when they were young.

Its good to see you like it. Fasten your seat belt, this is going to be a long ride. :pinkiehappy:

Sorry I hadn't commented before, how mean of me! :fluttercry: But here I am now! :pinkiehappy:

This is very nice, a little look on when they were fillies and grew up together as friends. :twilightsmile: I like that, and I hope with all hope that they'll touch on this in season three. It's just too awesomely cute NOT to!!!

Awww, at least Rainbow Dash had a good day in some regard, which is thanks to Fluttershy. That was really all she needed! :pinkiehappy: Now Fluttershy is happy to have a friend too! Yay! I really always did see them, growing up together, to have been each other's only real friend. They were both social outcasts, so it really would make sense...and it would essentially have a better reason as to why Rainbow Dash defended Fluttershy's honour. :twilightsmile:

So far, it's great! :pinkiehappy::raritystarry:

Cute, Damn cute... Each chapter that comes out makes my life 20% cooler. Keep up the awesome work! :rainbowkiss:

939064 Why thank you :pinkiehappy:
Some shipping will kick in around the chapter 15 mark (slowly...) so they won't always be just friends :scootangel: but as I have planed on covering thier whole fillyhood from this point onwards you can be sure there will be a lot of growing up together action between these two who quickly become the best of friends. Im especialy looking foward to the flight school scenes.
I'm glad that I'm not the only one with this sort of view on them as fillies.

939083 Thank you. I shall keep it up.

fabulous chapter my dear FlutterDash7 i simply cant wait for the next installment of this adorable and fabulous story:rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

I love the start. Will continue reading to see where it goes. :yay:

Awesome! Her first and best friend :yay::heart::rainbowkiss:
I'm really looking forward to where you take this. I will comment sooner next time; you won't have to ask me to read it again :ajsmug:

And we both thought of Tag! Just like you said! How awesome is that! :rainbowlaugh:

941385 I understand what you mean, but still i'm bored of all the same things.
Good thing this ISN'T like all the other FlutterDash stories! :rainbowkiss:

True story man. I'm not going to argue that most FlutterDash fics (or any shipping fics at all) are not boring and predictable, because they are. But this story isn't man. Give her credit!

Peace out :moustache:

Wow... I always thought you were good, but this was... AMAZING! No shipping yet, but still insanely cute! It was an excellent chapter for the most part and I look forward to theur friendship growing! The only semi negative thing would probably be the lack of setting descriptions. Not too major, I suppose. Oh well! I excitedly wait for more!
And as always FLUTTERDASH FTW :yay::heart::rainbowkiss:

I'm unhappy with certan scenes in this... its getting a rewrite.

945226 I will fix this in the rewrite. Thanks for informing me of it. I have been focused on RD+FS and thier emotions. I just need to find some cool images to help me think up some cool settings for them :pinkiehappy: I like my refrence images.

You have helped me decided that I will go thorugh and re-work a few things. I promise this whole story will be 20% cooler afterwards.:rainbowwild:

:yay::heart::rainbowkiss: FTW!

So this is basically the story from Fluttershy's point of view?
You ran out of ideas, right? (no offense)

There are some spelling errors "Suddnely" for exemple. That's the only one i found...

I like it. It was very cute, though I wonder what Fluttershy is going to think when she wakes up with Dash asleep in her bed. Anyway, cute chapter, can't wait for the next.

Okay... So did you rush this chapter? Tense wasn't so much an issue, but random words that don't quite belong or don't make sense litter this. Read through it and edit it.

Nice chapter. :pinkiesmile:
Caught a misspelling- "Clots" instead of colts.

It's nice to have a change of view between the pegasus. As much as I love Rainbow, Fluttershy is my favorite, so it's nice to have a different change of pace.

Keep up the good work.

963821 No I have not run out of ideas. The plan has always been to have some of the story told from Fluttershy's point of view. I like the both of them a lot and don't want to focus solely on one pony. I tried to keep this chapter short and to the point just to show how bad 'Shy's year had been so far and this also allows me to set up her nighmares for when she has them later on too. From now on in there should be no more need for flashbacks from either pony.

964023 :pinkiehappy: Than you. You'll find out. I'm enjoying what I've go so far on it.

964288 No its been left to sit for a few days. Things have been corrected now.

964370 Thanks. I very much like writing from Fluttershy's point of vew. I think I find it easier to write from her viewpoint personaly as I can relate very well to her.

It should be all fixed now...

965247 I'm caught up in my fic right now, but I'll give it a re-read when i get the chance.

:pinkiehappy: Oh gosh, this was all so lovely! :twilightsmile: Poor Fluttershy, but she has a friend! An angel! So cute!!

I'm looking forward to how things progress! :yay:

965664 So am I. Is the writer suposed to enjoy her own story this much?

More squee incoming in a few days time.:scootangel:

how do Fluttershy and Rainbowdash have a kid with both their qualities...
love it though, Favorited!

984222 It will be explained. :pinkiehappy: and yes it is actualy thier filly. Don't worry, it will be explained in later chapters.

Wow. Really cute start. I mean DUH! it is really cute and D'awwww.....

Let me guess.... You are a supporter of SoarinDash... am I right? Anyway, the fact that you say "lesbian" is of course true. Over-used meme. But, hey...
the reason "FlutterDash7" shipping both of them is that they both have wonderful childhoods and also I think that she (FlutterDash7) read FlutterDash shipping fictions and it felt as a PERFECT match! I understand what you are trying to say... since Rainbow Dash is shipped with all the mane 6...
I respect your opinion. But, I think this shipping is the best and perfect. While other are just... hard to understand... like Fluttershy/Big Mac shipping...
There is not a single scene both of them talking to each other... they shipped them because, Big Mac is shy too... but that doesn't mean Big Mac is perfect for Fluttershy... :eeyup:

Awesome emoticons. I have them now.

And, for the little spelling mistakes:
slyly, cute mark, <------ was supposed to be: shyly, cutie mark
And I think the "Ch 1. Part two: When angels meet." can be centered and made into bold.

But other than that awesome start for "First story" post.

1034000 Thank you. I really didn't need that convo with ozpakko to continue... sigh. Notice I have Soarin' as Dashies older brother as I think it can legitly fit well. I think he is about 13 yrs older than she is and that he and his gf Spitfire would have been one of the influences that helped shape Dash into the speedester wonderbolts wannabe that she is.

There will be a LOT more to come on this story so keep an eye out.
:yay::heart::rainbowdetermined2: FTW!

Well, to be fair, there's a difference between a lack of imagination and a desire to stay slightly cannon. Rainbow is barely shown spending time with anypony other than her friends, so pairings with other characters seem rather out of the blue. There are, of course, the Wonderbolts, but one of the two even slightly characterized Wonderbolts, Spitfire, is a girl. That leaves pretty much only Soarin', and even then, there is the fact that idol worship is often separated from romantic desire. Really, the most cannon pairing for Dash seems to be FlutterDash... i mean the show has hints thrown EVERYWHERE. Hay, even the basic character design for RD seems to be stereotypically gay, we have rainbows, the tomboyish attitude, how she never really expresses any desire to be in any relationship other than her friendship with all of her female friends, I mean really. But you know, everyone is entitled to their own opinion, and i can see just plain not having RD in any ship/romantic fics, and just as an adventurous character.

Hope you guys enjoy the chapter!


:pinkiehappy: Aww, this story is just so fun. Seeing them grow up together as fillies, being social outcasts and each other's only friends like they are...yeah, that is kind of sad, but I think it works! :twilightsmile:

And Dashie's little allergies to sentimentality? XDD :rainbowlaugh: Hey little Dashie, might want to eat your words because Fluttershy is your future wife!! XDDD

1131909 Don't worry... Dash will make a few friends like Gilder later on... but for now... :yay::heart::rainbowdetermined2:

1132057 I'm just tossing up what kind of treatment Gilder would give Fluttershy (and if the two pegasi are a couple by then... what effects she would have on thier closely knit relationship)
But largly I think Dash would be more focused on being awesome than getting new friends

1132079 That'll be an interesting angle, I think!

True enough! XD That seems to be her schtick.

Well worth the wait. This was just adorable.

1149562 Thank you. I'll try and keep the waiting times down in the future :pinkiehappy: but the next chapter is absolutly massive so... who knows.

1151959 Doesn't matter. The end result is well worth it.

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