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RIP DarkWing's Writing. We Hardly Knew Ye.


This story is a sequel to My Little Caboose: Blue is Magic!

It has been one month since the Elements of Harmony were used to trap Discord again, and it has been one month since Twilight lost one of her closest friends, the only consolation of which being that Church was finally getting some well deserved rest. At least, that is what she and the others believed. Discord, still trapped within Church's mind, has been picking away at his sanity the entire time, messing with his memories, making him forget what was real and forcing him to remember what wasn't. When he finally escapes, will Church be able to distinguish between reality and the memories Discord tampered with, or will his slim grip on reality finally give out?

If the ponies he is led to believe are his friends are of any indication, probably the latter.

[Before asking questions in the comments, please read!]
- This is a sequel to the completely unjustifiably popular, My Little Caboose: Blue is Magic!
- You probably will be extremely confused if you have not read that before this.
- You probably would be even MORE confused if you have never heard of Caboose.
- Click here to watch the series if you have not.

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Comments ( 3339 )

Well, here we are once again. The start of the second piece of the infamous MLC series. Before we begin, here are a few notes:

The last story I updated every day (or almost every day, but during the first two weeks I put out 2-3 a day so it sort of balanced out to a little more than once a day), but for this story I can't promise the same thing. I was not attending college for the first few months of writing MLCI, but now that I am I don't have the time anymore. I'll still try to get one out every night.

Also I will be deleting comments more regularly. Not that I don't love people commenting on my stuff, but I will delete things that add nothing to the story. For example, I will delete posts that are;
- Someone saying "Yay, new chapter."
- Someone saying "First!" or anything alluding to them being first.
- Someone only putting "lol" or something of the like.
- Someone only posting an :emoticon:
- Any combination of the above.

They seriously don't do anything for me OR for you. Sure, people use these as placeholders so they can edit it later, but I'm not like that. If you're not patient enough to read through a chapter that takes at most 5 minutes to read before commenting, why should I be patient enough to wait for you to edit your placeholder?

Comments I won't delete, but you should really consider just not doing. Not because they make me angry, but just because of the redundancy of them.
-"Shit hits the fan" comments. It happens a lot in my stories, so putting "shit has hit the fan" or any other variation is unnecessary and has basically lost all meaning since the last My Little Caboose.
-Question that are in the FAQ located is located in the description. Have a general question? Read that before asking anything.

In advance, I apologize to the people that don't like this story if this gets featured whenever it updates. I realize that a few people on this site have come to hate me for this fact when I have no control over it. If it was up to me, I would put a cap of only being allowed to be featured once a week, or maybe even once every other week. So again, I apologize if this gets featured a lot. I don't want to be hated for putting out chapters to entertain people. And since a lot of people still wonder why the chapters are so short, there is a reason. I make the chapters small because they are supposed to feel like RvB episodes, which on average are about 5 minutes long, so I try to make my fic feel closer to RvB my having it have the same "run time". I also have no attention span.

Also; inb4 featured. Mainly because I purposely only published the prologue and first chapter, making the word count less than 4k (which is the minimum word count requirement to reach it).

Well, this is a good thing to have when RvB isn't on (until whenever it returns)

Here we go! Oh boy, was worth waiting until 1am. Now to read!

1560516 All I can say is it's about damn time this was uploaded. I will certainly enjoy reading this.

Aaaand then to next one...

This made my day good sir. After a horrific night shift (I am British so your is about 11PM for me) I came home saw you posted this and was over come with joy.

So thankyou. And this is good so far.

:pinkiehappy: Now I have something to look forward to every day!

AAAH! This is already so freaking magnificent!
You are a freaking god DarkWing!

It would be funny if you wrote that it has been five months instead of one, but nevermind. I'm glad my favourite story's sequel is finally here! I hope it will be as epic as the original one, and it will take our minds off from the distress over lack of both My Little Pony and Red vs Blue.

although I can halrdy wait I would rather you take your time - I was impressed with my little caboose but if you need to take your time just say so

2219455 Lol, everyone's freaking out about how awesome it is and I'm just sitting here masturbating.

The promise that Church made... That is going to come back to bite him so hard.
Also are you going to use anything from New cannon?



Nobody is ;_;

Finally! Definitely gonna be a good way to pass time till the next season of RvB and MLP

You should've let it be featured. It's got way more quality then my Blackbird story, so it deserves it way more, at least, in my opinion. Just one thing... OC tag? Or am I making a Derp of myself by saying this?

Indeed I am, but it won't be like the wedding from MLCI. I'll just use certain themes for some arcs, but I won't copy-paste any dialogue.

Also I will be deleting comments more regularly. Not that I don't love people commenting on my stuff, but I will delete things that add nothing to the story. For example, I will delete posts that are;
- Someone saying "Yay, new chapter."
- Someone saying "First!" or anything alluding to them being first.
- Someone only putting "lol" or something of the like.
- Someone only posting an :emoticon:
- Any combination of the above.

You beautiful man.

Have my babies
ALL the homo


I'm masturbating while freaking out.

Does that count?

It was talked about by some of the mods and they said that characters that are crossed over (not yours) don't really count as OCs, thus don't need the OC tag.

you might want to add a link in the old story to this; I had stumbled upon this on accident

BY THE GODDESS YOUR BACK!!! right as i have to leave for the hospital:fluttershbad: no worries adding to the list as priority :pinkiehappy:

Im surprised Discord didnt start going crazy inside Chuch's corrupted, insane mess of a mind!

2219568 Ah, I see. Clears things up. Thank you.

"There he is! Wow, there is a lot of bird poop on him,"


Also, it begins...
Me constantly having the site bugging me about more and more updates to read, that is.

2219328 Pretty sure RvB is over. Rooster Teeth's next big project is RWBY.

so hes already out of stone???
or is he dreaming it while falling unconsois in a dream???
any ways ......Awesome chapter.

lovely chapter all though how is the rest of the gang doing if I don't find out next chapter can you pm me? thx oh and love the story all ready although what is with caboose?


Nope, season 11 is already confirmed. they said they'll keep doing it until people lose interest.
He's referring to him not having his armor.
The prologue talks about how the gang is doing and what they've been up to.

such a wonderful story and Daark wing I don't fully understand what is going on.

YUUUUUUSSSSSS IT BEGINS AGAAIIIINNN!!!!! Though in all seriousness this is a very good thing! Looking forward to moar!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::moustache::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

2219670 Really? Must've missed that, where'd they say that?

In a few videos, a couple of the podcasts, several blogposts on the website, on facebook, twitter, and on a website made for saying they're making more. :raritywink:

The only thing I have to say: FUCK YES! It has begun once AGAIN!

(jaw drops) FUCK YES! FUCK! YES!

YES YES!! Oh dear God yes!
I can't believe it's already here, but Man I am so psyched to read this story.

Plus I can't wait to see what you do with Alicorn Twilight now. :twilightsheepish:

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