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Rated Ponystar

"You think you know me..."


After losing a bet, Rainbow Dash now has to wear panties for an entire day. This wouldn't be so bad except for the fact she not only has her weather duties, but also has to help out her friends. Let the awkward moments commence!

Pre-Read by: RainbowBob and DbzOrDie

Edited by: Unnamed Pawn, ugugg93, and Apple Fritter

Thanks to FreeHomeBrew for the cover art

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 450 )

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Comment posted by FamousLastWords deleted Feb 25th, 2014

Dude, if your girlfriend approves of it. Do not question. Buy it asap.

What the heck.
I love it!:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

It’s like it's’ crawling up my butt or something.

so true

This can only end well. :rainbowlaugh:


Brilliant. Simple brilliant. I went ahead and put this in Twilight' Library


Can't wait to see the rest of this.

Oh my god, that bit with Derpy just killed me. Hmm... how many butt jokes can you fit in, I wonder.

I laughed su hard

Came in just a lil' bit weirded out.... But totally worth the bruises from hitting my head on my couch to keep from waking up the family :rainbowlaugh:

3998909 How do you find inspiration for writing so fast?:rainbowlaugh: I'm so jealous

Years and years of experience and hard work

Must read more. :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy: Must know what happens next.:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:


Ohhhh noooooo...

There is no way this is gonna end well...

~Skeeter The Lurker

Oh god, this'll be great!

Well this is going to end.., interestingly... :unsuresweetie:

Hah, oh this will be good. :rainbowlaugh:

A cast huh? Nice 'save' Rainbow :raritywink:

Can't wait for more. :ajsmug:

It’s like it's’ crawling up my butt or something.

Hey buddy, there's an extra apostrophe on it's.:twilightblush:

Great, three seconds outside and already I’m in an awkward position.
“Derpy! I...um...” struggled Rainbow Dash,

You need a space in between these two paragraphs.


Was that intentional?

Ponyville in the distance.Knowing

You need a space in between those two sentences.
This looks like a promising start to a good story. However, if you're gonna continue it, I recommend adding more details and such to the end; it felt a little rushed.

I see London. I see France. I see colored underpants. Rainbow's hips started to dance, pulling me into its trance. From me to you, I share this song. Let's come together and sing along. Man, this feels so wrong!


So the Pie's color their manes to look like their most loved pony? Oh what will Pinkie color her main like?

No one ever said she couldn't wear anything on top of them.

True, but that would be violating the spirit of the dare, and I suspect Applejack would call her out on it if she tried to exploit that kind of hair-splitting loophole.

That being said, it would be an excellent final twist of the knife if, after watching Rainbow suffer a whole day's worth of indignities and embarrassment, Applejack were to casually point that loophole out to her... :pinkiehappy:


the butterfly flying away, oblivious of it’s its actions.

"Its" is the possessive pronoun. "It's" is the contraction of "it is." Possessive pronouns (his, hers, theirs, yours, its) never get apostrophes.

I don't want to know why she has a cast covering... that area... :eeyup:

If i was in dash's position i would not give a damn and act like nothing is weird or awkward. (example) :twilightoops: twi: Why are you wearing panties and nothing else? me: because...I...AM...FABULOUS :duck: (PS: I am a guy)

3998765 That right there is why I don't wear underwear.

3999911 I concur, wear 'em like ya own 'em

The Derpy part... Oh jesus :rainbowlaugh:

My attention has been had, and my sides are approaching orbit.

Continue if you would good sir.




Was that intentional?

I'm pretty sure that's Derpy with the marker in her mouth.


My sister is defending her PhD dissertation in a few weeks. I've been thinking about getting her some pony-themed lingerie as a joking graduation gift. She loves the show and already has some pony clothes and merchandise. But I have no idea what her size is and can't exactly ask directly. Maybe my other sisters can help conspire.

This genuinely made me laugh out loud. That almost never happens :rainbowlaugh:

...Most interesting.

AJ, you're an evil genius. :pinkiehappy:

Okay, this is going to be awesome. :rainbowlaugh:


This three posts resumes my reaction :pinkiehappy: You should write more comedy, Rated :rainbowlaugh:

Awwwww damn~~ Derpy called dibs first on Dashie's butt :derpytongue2:

Dam Dash is in for a day full of HILARIOUS

I feel like this is going to be a good story. When is the next chapet going to come out? :moustache:

Awesome. Can't wait for more.

haha why is this now in my head ?!!! AJ WHAT HAVE YOU DONE !!!

Future chapters need Gilda.

3999724 to much "training" with Sorrin maybe?

Well, I... Uhm... :rainbowderp:

I think Big Mac was bucking her-I mean, er, teaching her how to buck trees... hehe:twilightblush:

Comment posted by Dustin Lange deleted Feb 25th, 2014

I died. Please, continue. *tries to stifle laughter*

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