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Rated Ponystar

"You think you know me..."


Of all the trees in Sweet Apple Acres, there is one tree that stands out. A tree with a marked carving that symbolizes the love between two ponies. When Applejack found herself falling in love with her best friend, she knew it would be the best place to share her feelings. Only that tree became so much more in their love life.

Done for the A Dash of Passion: The Applethology.

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This story was what got me to follow you. :duck:

Thanks, hope you like the rest of my work

A very nice look at an AppleDash life.

Even if it was a bit sad of an end.

Well done.

~Skeeter The Lurker

If this is like the rest of your stories, which are bloody brilliant, I'm sure that this one will blow me away too. :raritystarry:

I never really see the end of life by old age a sad thing. Maybe it has to do with my Catholic upbringing.


Y'know, I have to agree with that.

What was that one saying? "Death is simply the start of a new adventure"? Or something similar.

~Skeeter The Lurker

That was from Harry Potter


True. But still a very good line.

~Skeeter The Lurker

“Even if they’re against you like mares, they’ll still love you!” Rainbow Dash reassured.

Should be

“Even if they’re against you liking mares, they’ll still love you!” Rainbow Dash reassured.

This was a cute story, could do without the implied sex, though.

Cole: The Rated Pony Star has done it again, King! How does he do it?

King: Cause his the best! that's why Cole!


And for other places that say the same with similar words :pinkiehappy:
JBL: He's the Ultimate Opportunistic! And he is Best for Business!

absolutely beautiful

I'm sorry yours had to be paired with mine. I feel like I drug yours down. :raritydespair:

This made me tear up. It was so sweet

3516199 the quote After all, to the well organized mind, death is but the next great adventure
On another note. Ow my heart.

:fluttercry: SO... BEAUTIFUL!! :raritycry:

This is kind of reminds me of that comic you wrote about! Still very good setup!

Wrote this a year ago, but never finished it till now that is

Damn...Dash's last line...

My favourite of the anthology so far. This will be the 4th time I will of read this

:fluttercry: I applaud you. Even if you claim a thousand times its not yer best work its a darned good one. That ending was so sweet it made me happy and sad and fuzzy and it was such a perfect ending for it. :fluttercry:

One of the best... what's that word again? Lifefics or whatevs, I've read in my life(so far). Love it! Not only 'cause I love the Appledash shipping, but also cuz I just think it's a-maze-ing!:ajsmug::pinkiehappy:
Here y'all go: a dragon with a moustache, ordered, delieverd and seen! ;):moustache:

That was beautiful, and now I have to go lie down and have a good long think about the direction in which I'm taking my life. Then I'll start on accepting that death is an inevitability.

Actually I think it was Peter Pan. In it he said "Death would be an awfully big adventure"
Anyway, I really liked this story and it got me thinking how I'd love this to be a huge series with like 300,000 thousand words because the cut scenes felt like snippets from a big long book. It also reminded me of "Roll of Thunder, Hear My Cry" just because of how much I thought a novel like approach to this would be perfect. All in all I really enjoyed it and I give it 10/10.
It's better to die of old age than anything else, at least that's how I'd like to go. So I didn't find it sad but uplifting as I believe in an afterlife and the great unknown is a great way to finish.

I am literally sobbing many tears at how beautiful this was. Outstanding work. Please, make more.:pinkiesad2:

Just wonderful. I'm ready to cry too now...

But I can't deny, it was a really good fic. Just wish we could've seen the wedding... oh well.

this is one of the best stories i have ever read

no THE BEST AND MOST BEAUTIFUL nearly put me to tears :fluttercry:

There's no way it's been only 15 weeks. Last time I read this, I broke down sobbing. This time, I've done it again. This is the single most beautiful fanfiction I have ever read. And as far as all literature goes, I have only had a single reaction comparable to this. Jerry Spinelli's Stargirl. Happy tears, mate.

4195388 it's a must-read, by the way, guys

:raritydespair::yay: BEST STORY EVER
i read this a while back and it is still great. I just have a few things. I would have liked to know more about and the end could have been a little bit longer and imagery of her chasing AJ at the end would have been great. I believe you managed a notebook moment in this for the fact that it is super sad and happy at the same time.


This was touching, in a way. It reminds me of being a teenager all over again, and the way I was with my first girlfriend, eleven years ago. I was kind of dumb, but I was sincere, just like Applejack in this story. I don't know if that's what you were going for,but effectively bringing forth emotions is a feat any artist should be proud of.

A good artist paints an image; a great artist paints a mirror.

I think FiMFiction should have an "Extreme Feels" tag. This would go first.:twilightsmile:

You are a gived writer! I'm crying Waaaaaaaa... such a great story!:fluttercry::applecry::pinkiesad2::raritycry:
Appledash Forever!!:heart::ajsmug::rainbowkiss::heart:

Why you do this to meh?! Why you gotta go and make me cry like this?!:raritycry:

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