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"You think you know me..."


Applejack has always had a secret dream, one that some ponies would find strange for the tomboyish farmer. She's always wanted somepony to treat her to a special romantic night, while being treated like a real lady. Turns out all she had to do was have a certain rainbow-maned pegasus catch her in a dress. Such an awkward moment will lead them to a night neither will ever forget.


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Live long and Dash Apples.

1906743 Holy god Regi. Where the hell have you been?

1906757 Yeah ever since your ban. :trixieshiftright:

>Implying that was my first ban.

Does this mean that you have fallen behind on your total comment count?
No of course not. How silly of me :twilightsheepish:

1906772 OK, your most recent ban :ajbemused:

Four thumbs up and three thumbs down already. Not the most comforting of starts...

Psh, wait till people besides Regidar read it :twilightsmile: you need to give it a bit more time :pinkiesmile:
Besides, some people just downvote things cause they don't like the idea of the story, or the ship in the story etc :twilightangry2:

1906792 well welcome back to the land of the living anyways :ajsmug:

1906788 Don't forget, your dealing with a lot of biased hate. it had 3 down with only one view right after posting :applejackunsure:

>Implying that I'm a bad thing

1906824 :ajbemused:

Gotta love that "judge a book by its cover" crowd...

Well on the plus side, if it wins or gets recognition in the contest it's bound to attract attention.

1906839 lol yep, best of luck!

I just started writing my submission for it wednesday evening like an idiot. :facehoof:

hadn't planned on it til an idea popped in my head that night. :unsuresweetie:

What do you think of the story anyway?

haven't had a chance to check it out tbh.:ajsleepy: Got it saved for later so i can try and get to it this weekend.
Still hammering away on mine. I just saw the notification pop up and thought I'd watch it's progress.
Pisses me off the people that will just thumb it down without giving it a read though.

Well, to be fair, it might be bad. I am my own worst judge. I'd just like people telling me though why.

1906889 Certainly understandable. I would love to give you an honest opinion when i get through it. I'll admit, I like the concept.

I loved this with all my heart. :ajsmug::heart::rainbowkiss:

Yay! Positive Feedback! I l wuv you!:heart:

I loved it. If I could make one suggestion it would be to change the word transvestite with transgender (transvestite is actually a very derogatory term); other than that it was sweet, heartfelt, and a pleasure to read. Thank you.


More specifically judging a book by the section it is in. :facehoof:

I have not read or rated this story.

1907040 Aye, that be true too. Tis a sad thing to see in this fandom :ajsleepy:

Implying that you are a bad thing?:facehoof: Never. Just that you must have read damn near everything on this site by now.

That was so sweet that I may need to get checked for cavities. Har har har!

But really, all bad jokes aside, that was really well done. Its too bad you got bombed with downvotes, but we all know this community can't handle the awesomeness of AppleDash. Tis such a shame ...

Very nice story (fan of AppleDash myself), I thought your characterization of Applejack was spot on. Rainbow Dash, on the other hoof, seemed to be doing a bit too well of a job for someone whose whole intention was to set the night up as a role-play that (unintentionally) moved into something more (dropping an large undisclosed number of bits, knowing AJ liked Bucky Cash, the cake and songbirds, ect). She also seemed to jump at the idea of taking the role of the stallion rather fast (again, for someone who intended the night to be in effect a LARP). To me, RD's actions would make more sense as a whole if she already knew in her own heart she had romantic feelings for AJ but wasn't sure if AJ felt the same (the ''you helped my dream so I'm helping yours" being a coy cover-story should things not turn out in RD's favor).

Still, it was well paced, had it's funny moments, and overall a great read.

A good ship fic is always nice to read, and this one was done perfectly. You set up the 2 characters involved well, gave them both effective motivation, and let the others come in as extras in order to increase the idea. It had excellent pacing, and the actual characters you shipped didn't seem like they would never end up together (they are both particularly athletic and competitive ponies, after all). One thing you did that put you over the top, though, is not ruin their personalities. Dash didn't wear a dress for the date, as she would never do so in real life (and for other reasons), and she also kept her pranking personality throughout. Applejack, on the other hand, had perfect motivation for wanting such a night, as well as you having a nicely set up theatrical production that the real Applejack would enjoy. I can only find 2 faults with it; (1) the grammatical errors, for obvious reason, and (2) the fact that the other ponies were in the bush, which caused buckets of unnecessary cheesiness to be propelled onto the scene. I'll need to check out your other work, though, as this was really amazing.

This story
This story

Damn you for making it that perfect:raritycry:

I'm more of a fan of the Flutterdash ship but this was an extremely well written Appledash. Very good sir, have a moustache:moustache:

Absolutely gorgeous. Cute, funny, never tawdry, this is an awesome little fic. I can't believe it got so many down-votes. The date was perhaps too perfect, but RD never struck me as a pony that would do something halfway, so it worked still. Faved!:pinkiesmile:

Words cannot describe what I am feeling about this story.

So here's some thing that comes close.


*Passes out*


Lately, one of the things that I ignore in AppleDash fics is the immediate bomb of downvotes, mostly numbering from six to nine in a very short amount of time. So so far, this story is doing very well. Aside from the upvotes/downvotes, as for the story itself, I am truly speechless. I do not normally cry when I read.... but this story, I mean, just wow. And when I mean crying, I mean tears of joy. Tears caused from sadness? Those are a lot easier to cause upon someone rather than from happiness, which are common for sad fics.

I hope this story gets featured, because, in all honesty, it trully deserves it. P.S. Good luck in the contest! :ajsmug::heart::rainbowdetermined2:

Ten out of ten for this good ser.

If you could point out the grammatical errors that would be great. PM me please. Glad you and others like the fic so far.

Glad you liked it.:twilightsmile: NOW READ UPON WINGS ALREADY DAMNIT! :twilightangry2:

I kid, (No, really read it). :heart:

Fantabulawesomazing. That's the only word I can think of to describe this story.

I don't always read fictions like these but...

Picture caught my attention

Description made me want to read... Now let's see how my #2 Mane6 shipping does in this story :3

I'm not really an AppleDash fan, but this hit me right in the feels. well done.

EEP!!! That story....so....so good.....don't worry about those down votes. AMAZlNG! :raritystarry: Have you considered adding more...or maybe a sequel?? :moustache:




Precious! :raritywink:

I really do have to say one on my new favourite AppleDash fics.

~hugs~ Agreed, don't worry about the voting war there. Sad biased people don't want to give other ships room to breathe in this fandom, it has nothing to do with your writing! =)

But hmm, to the story. Gotta give you props for taking Appledash in a different way - I've had just about enough of the RD-AJ-have-loved-one-nother-for-5/6/7/8/9/1000-years-and-didn't-realize-til-now fics. You know what I mean. But you built the feels up from platonic to ILY, gotta enjoy the pacing. :D But... have to say, to me they both seemed the tiniest bit OOC in some parts. Maybe it's just my character views against yours, but whatevs. :p Don't get me wrong, this was very well written and a nice original idea. My OCD is just trying to get in the way xD Keep at it though, you're doing fantastic!

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