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After receiving two tickets to Dodge Junction's Founder's Day Festival, Applejack invites Rainbow Dash to join her in what looks to be a great time full of fun, games, rides, food, and more. But hidden behind all this is an opportunity for Applejack to finally tell Dash how she feels about her. Can the farmpony manage to confess between all the excitement?
(My entry for the AppleDash contest, image belongs to OZE-JP and not me)
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This is going to be very interesting. I can't wait for you to write more of this.
Hehehe, the entries are rolling in. Not long till my birthday, its gonna be a good one filled with appledashery this year.
This looks fun to read.
Lets see what you got!
~Skeeter The Lurker
Awesome as usual. Can't wait for more. Also...
i.imgur.com/fZr5857.png
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That's the first prize ribbon I've even been given in my entire life. Also please update your stories!
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Coming soon hopefully
This story is gonna be damn awesome, as usuall when it's a story by our great Rated PonyStar
ill defiantly be looking out for this
Im loven' this story!
"To Tartarus and back" I see what you did there...
I do like where this is going. A lot.
This is really good! I can't wait to read the rest! Good luck with the contest! Just curious, do you get a prize if you win?
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First, second, and third place all get prizes
2951940 Cool! Can you tell us what kind of prizes they are?
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It's a choice between two artworks done by two appledash artists and a figuring showing a scene from the famous AppleDash story "Stuck"
Wow an awesome story with a doctor who and WWE referene too impressive
Me gusta!
“... but ya have to dance like Twilight.”
Oh, bitch be going DOWN
>Although all five girls were special, a certain rainbow manned
...must...not...laugh...
>“I said it was sorry!”
"I"
>crash into one of their tree’s
trees
>After a quick confirmation that she was okay, Ditzy
Mixing names?
>In return, she received a lovable
loving
>Her expression reminding Applejack of Apple Bloom’s face whenever she woke up on Hearths Warming Eve.
reminded
Hearth's
>“For pete’s sake, Dash
Pete's
>She only nodded or exchanged a quick greeting with them, humbling
humbly
>flying was something she had pondered about
pondered, or wondered about
>despite the old pony's dismissal for a new one
dismissal of the need for a new one, or dismissal of the idea of a new one
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http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/176128/update-to-the-appledash-contest
Has the details :)
Im sorry to correct you here its easy to mix em up...
There is 7 colors on the Rainbow. So you are kiiiinda right here Buuut!
Rainbow Dash's mane has 6 colors.
deviantart.com/art/Rainbow-Dash-204973879
Its about 58.46% chance that the photo wont work.
Buuuuuut, if it works, look at it. The colors in the IRL rainbow is; Red, Orange, Yellow, Green, Blue, Indigo, Purple.
But RD's mane only has Red, Orange, Yellow, Green, Blue and purple. There is no Indigo.
So.... please correct the error?
Otherwise from the mini-error xD..
My review of the chapeter;
Good story overall. A few Grammatic errora here and there, not much to worry about...
Its following a string strong enough to sew it together... i can not spell...
Thia chapeter gets 8/10 Photo Finish's Purrfection!
Wow..
Awezum! You just earned youself a favorite and 10/10 Photo Finish's Purrfection!!!!
Aand, if that wasn't enough, heres a reward only a few gets;
Mr.Meowmers Approves.nekothacay.deviantart.com/art/Mr-Meowmers-approves-389023620?ga_submit_new=10%253A1375056425
Actually, you are the only one to get the prize yet...
Congratulations!
Yes! Another AppleDash fic by my favorite AppleDash writer
Author of one of the first fics I read on this site making another Appledash?
SOLD!
FINALLY got around to reading this. Finally!
And I am not disappointed at all. You have my interest and I shall be here till the end.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Loving so far. The Beer Fest contest you threw in worked awesomely.
And that bit with Dash's dad! STRAIGHT outta left field on that. But it worked.
~Skeeter The Lurker
awesome work
Dashie? D'aaaw, my little country heart twanged just a bit in that paragraph.
Ya know I don't usually read AppleDash, but this is pretty good, I really can't wait to see what else your gonna show us! 
I noticed that it's usually Rainbow Dash that's confessing to Applejack. Don't know why that is, but it's nice to see it the other way around.
2951017 lol @ the downvote
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Downvoters. I have them.
Never certain why.
~Skeeter The Lurker
This is very good. :)
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That's the entire purpose of the contest. It's something I noticed, and I challenged people to write a fic where Applejack is the one chasing after Dash.
WWE.... Just, WWE...
well if it was up to me I really like this one!!
please do me a favor and continue even if you do not win!! its a great story, and though i stink at writing myself you should make a series off of this
i will be following you the whole time!!
I'm enjoying this immensely. Can't wait for more!
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one day Skeeter. One day I'll beat you.
If I didn't read the fics first, I could have beat you to one last week, but you read them too, so its only fair.
Still.... one day. you will busy, you will be gone, and that'll be my chance.
oh... and great story.
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Good luck.
~Skeeter The Lurker
“Fluttershy was a flower child?”
th09.deviantart.net/fs71/200H/i/2013/144/e/b/hippy_fluttershy_by_mojo1985-d66goqu.png
WAS a flower child? AJ, Fluttershy IS a flowerchild.
me like it
I think you're starting to lose it pall
"Applejack quickly took off the outfit, and walked out and walked out" Walked out walked out
"That was a total lie at least. If there was any pony she would go to Tartarus and back with, it would be Rainbow Dash." That was a total lie at least. I belive you mean wasn't a total lie
"The crowd groaned in in disappointment" In in
Just noticed as i read through
Thank god no one does that to my fic....I would have to rewrite everything 
keep it up! Can't wait to see where this leads! I'll wote for you in the contest 
Anyway, I enjoyed it highly
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Fixed
In Act 1
maned
In Act 2
I'm assuming the second "hooves" was supposed to be "boots"
Also, gotta say I love McShady. Really wanna see what happens next ^^
Well you got tears from someone today, ranbow's father died in a similar fashion to my father but he passed out at the wheels vs a heart attack
you did a terific job 20/10
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I'm sorry to hear that
I know this game is played all the time, but it just takes me back to that scene in Raiders of the Lost Ark with Marion Ravenwood and that other person in the drinking contest, lol.
Otherwise, good story so far. Can't wait for Act III.
This deserves more likes, favorites, and views!