Cardfight Vanguard a card game that has spread through out the entire world. It's a life altering experience. Join Apple Bloom and her friends in their epic Cardfights. Image it the path to victory.
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Hey everyone, I help out with the chapters. So if the writer needs more help, he just got to let me know.
you sir are a great adapter. it's not a flawless transition but it is close i would caution agianst ponifying the mecha units (maybe daimond dogs?) but other then that great work.
I guess the biggest constructive criticism I could offer is not to rely on those vids. You paint a picture of the thing in your reader's head with details and they can be better than any vid.
Outside of that, you're doing fine
3875096 you mean the ones in the author's notes
3877037 I mean things like the opening theme and ending. To be completely honest, I kind of overlooked that was what they were. Sorry
I take it back. You're doing fine
3877137 I get that now
... Dude. You just shamelessly ripped everything from the anime. The plot is basically S1 with names and races changed to fit Equestria.
I mean, COME ON. Even I diverged from it a bit, but... This? You even copied the titles of the episodes. Not cool, man.
EDIT: AND DIAMOND IS MORIKAWA. Y U DO DIS.
EDIT: Sure, I have my own Kai expy (who is basically a douche-ier Manga Kai). But really? Spike?
3999206 its called a reenactment
3999485 Reenactment. Sure.
Never mind that you forced the bright, obedient Spike in KAI's role. Or the manipulative, bitchy Diamond Tiara into MORIKAWA, who can't even bully right, of all things.
4000591 well there are stories were Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon same become friend with the CMC and Kai was nice before his parent's died and he could not save Ren
4001542 But Spike doesn't have any parents. Nor friends that are like Ren (that I know of).
4002370 what about the main six either way I was going to give him friends
4017565 sorry but I found some one else to help sorry
I think your story is great. Though it is going to be hard when you get into episode 20. Best of luck. I can't wait for the next chapter.
4062409 all have to do is if ponies for the teams I would say episode 23 because I will have to make an OC for Ren and I have an idea how he would look like but I don't have his cutie mare or name thought up yet
Got to admit, it too much similar to the s1 anime but with name changes. Overall, it's a good story that you did
4155486 well it is a reenactment with some changes to fit in the mlp universe
Great chapter. I can't wait for the next one. Good job adapting the story.
4186897 thanks
Nice chapter. I can't wait for the next one.
Nice chapter. I can't wait for the next one.
4285888 yes
great you sucessfully captured whats his names little sister....
now pass me that baseball bat so i can beat her and rumble to death with it.
4288721 you mean nagisa and gouki
4288817 yes now hand me the bat
Nice adaptation. I can't wait for the next chapter.
I loved how you changed the black mail. Great job.
4395383 Thank I thought it would be strange if he had to eat Sea Orense
Haven't read the story yet [i`m fic hunting for a group] but in your summary.
Cardfight Vanguard a card game that has speared [Spread...Speared?] through out the entire world. It's a life altering experience. Join Apple Bloom and her friends in there [Their] epic Cardfights. Image it the path to victory. [That last sentence... what?]
I find that i can let a lot of mistakes in the story itself go over my head but mistakes in the summary.... well, i`m just pointing it out.
4431470 I was trying to make it sound like it link with some of it not in there and when I put this up I wasn't that good at writing
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Better now you`ve fixed it though, it gets the message across great. So would you say this is a tournament story?
4432369 more like a reenactment of the show with some changes to fit in the MLP universe
4432499
what i mean is, the group i mentioned i was hunting for it about ponies playing competetive sports of pretty much any kind as long as they fit into a tournament style. so if the story feature characters playing this card game against multiple opponents one after the other i think it would qualify.
4432518 oh sorry I thought you meant something else
4432549
Sooo....?
4432565
never mind I hope you enjoy my story
Nice job with this chapter. I enjoyed the part where the string attached to Scottaloo and Rumbles's wings.
Yeah. I can't wait for the next episode. I wonder though how is going to be on Ren's team. I suggest, Trixie, and lightning Dust. Good luck wiith the next chapter.
4446238 I'm glade you are enjoying the story. But just so you know I already characters set
4446459 When you reach the point please put Queen Chrysalis in place of Leon... she's the PERFECT fit.
4460015 Maybe but I don't think she could
4460245 Alright here's my thinking... there's few of her own kind and she wants to raise them back to dominion over Equestria... she takes upon the power of the void to achieve her goal wanting any and all sacrifices. Let's look at why Aqua Force would fit her... Water takes shape of what it's in... it adapts... many transforming deities like the Greek God of Elusive sea change Proteus have the element of water and sea in them that allows them to transform and change. Well... it's up to you tho i just say what i think...
4463545 I'll have to think about it but I'm not making any promises. I was thinking a dyeing race that controlled the Aqua force clan but when it diapered there race started to die like what happened with the Soryu clan
4463620 Hmmm you would have to conjure a race of ponies to represent that race. Or at least say the kingdom that was before the Princesses and stuff. That's harder than it sounds.
4463654 it doesn't have to resemble a pony it could be dragon
4463757 It would have to be something that could be linked with the water... a dragon is occasionaly or more than ocassionaly linked with fire.
4463928 It could be wind like Leon says make your wind blow
4464118 It's all up to you...