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(If there are any spelling mistakes, or if something doesn't make sense, send me a message immediately!) This a sequel to Dueling Rocks Canterlot High has never beaten Crystal Prep at anything. So this time, instead of the usual Friendship Games, they're having a dueling tournament between the two schools. But Sci-Twi is more interested in the magic coming from CHS. Which school will win? And Is this Twilight a friend or foe? (I based some of the decks on the character's attitudes and others on the situations they find themselves in. There's a Easter egg from Sunset vs Bakura in the last chapter.) Special thanks to the Mlp wiki for the artwork. Next Story is The Seal.

Chapters (5)
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Comments ( 34 )

from the pic yo-gi-oh 5ds

Ok then. So, is the picture your own? If not, kindly credit the owner. It will be good to also mention the show/game/book/manga/etc that this story is having a crossover with in the description. Other than that, it's quite good :)

This was pretty fun. My only advice would have been to be just a little more detailed in the duels, like showing the life points more often or explaining a cards effect better, maybe provide a link to the card in the story, but I thought this was a fun little crossover.

6852659 Sorry, I thought everyone knew about the cards I used in this story.

Very nice! I know these cards', I hope your making another!

6853123
It's okay. I actually do know most of the cards that were used, but it's kind of just a suggestion to improve your work and more convenient for anyone who doesn't know the cards.

6852659 I fixed chapters 3, 4, and 5. Check em. Is that better?

6855033
Not a bad job. Good editing.

6855039 Thanks. I even added some links in chapter 4.

A decent story but needs a lot more editing and details.

Comment posted by Pony paladin deleted Oct 17th, 2016

6854088 I'm working on another. But give me time.

6903899 Thanks for the heads up, I fixed the problems. Spell world 2 is now part of the turbo duel and the Malefic monsters can be summon.

All this dueling brings back memories of my first husband,” said Cinch as she picked up her own deck. “Ah, the Ancient Gears. Oh Crowler, I wonder where are you now.”

why dose this not suprised me at all

Let the games begin!

6854088 My new story is up. It's called 'The Seal' here's the link. https://www.fimfiction.net/story/323708/the-seal

nicely done; also:

“I'm so sorry I didn't get here sooner!” said Twilight. “I didn't get your messages until just now because I was caught in this time travel loop and, honestly, it was the strangest thing that's ever happened to me!” When Twilight saw her human counterpart, her jaw dropped.

:twilightsheepish: make that the SECOND strangest...

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Comment posted by Mr-Astounding deleted Oct 17th, 2016

7509937 Just want to mention that he edited the speed world 2 after I told him that speed spells couldn't be activated without speed world and that a malefic monster needs a field spell

Comment posted by Shadow Kick deleted Oct 17th, 2016
Comment posted by Mr-Astounding deleted Aug 30th, 2016
Comment posted by Mr-Astounding deleted Oct 17th, 2016

Why are there none of these here save mine? Also, I've read another story involving Numbers, and Sunset's secret "Ace in the hole" was The Supremacy Sun as well, did you write that story or someone else, I didn't look at the author's name.

6981473 That did surprise me a bit. I laughed after the shock wore off though. I wonder if she has the Fusion Dimension Ancient Gears.

7600381 I do want to do a fanfic and I ended up giving her an Ancient Gears deck.

7073078
It's time d d d d d d d duel!!!!!!

“All this dueling brings back memories of my husband,” said Cinch as she picked up her own deck. “Ah, the Ancient Gears. Oh Crowler, I wonder where are you now.”

He is probaly of somewhere yelling at some slifer slackers.

It does not make sense that sci Twi has a spellbook deck cause she is science. Give her a science deck.

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