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Tom Majors has had many adventures in his life.
He and his friends are great at playing the game Chaotic.
But now a new play challenges Tom to a battle against a new creature he's never seen
An Equestrian!

Prompt form Bronybro 117 Crossover Thread.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 25 )

Wow! I missed playing Chaotic! I had Chaor once!

3460291 yah, I know what you mean, I had all these good card but never got to use them On-line.

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I tried to as well. I look back now and find the whole thing overrated. There are better, free online card games available.

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Also, grammar and spelling need to be checked.

Awesome start

3460482 Thanks for telling me that.
I kind or guessed but wasn't sure.
Thank you, all the same.

3460483 Thanks but I wouldn't know where to continue.
This was just a prompt story after all.

But thank you for reading it.

Very good concept, but needs improving in sentence structure and grammar. I've some suggestions for some groups that'd help you.

And please continue this.

I think you sired make it into a Series like Tom get the ponies Kaz get the dragons Peyton get the diamond dogs Sarah get the griffons as for the pain in everyone ass keep it the same as for Discord have him prank the codemasters. :scootangel::rainbowdetermined2::

Chaotic? :rainbowderp: Awesome!!:yay: I used to love that show AND played the game like crazy:pinkiehappy:

3604919 Thank you, I did not know it would be so popular.
Too bad I can't thinks of any thing to do with it.

3604945 Let the kids scan some creatures, use'em in some matches, then somehow send some Perim creatures in to Equestria and see what happens:eeyup:

Well that's what I'd do anyways:pinkiesmile:

3604968 yah, your right but Two things
1) I agreed to let MathewSwift continues it.
2) I wanted some story behind any thing else but I couldn't come up with any.
Thanks for trying to help.

3606602Oh:derpyderp1: Sooo...Is this Mathew guy gonna give you the updates or do I have to go someplace else?:rainbowderp:

3608753 not sure I was just going to ask him. But do not worry I'll find out.

3609871alright then, I'll be waiting:eeyup:

Hay every one I have a side story that you might like. It is connected to this story so I decided to put a link here.

Hey I remember Tom beaten two codemasters which the third one come from?

10299465 Chaotic has 7 codeMaster(s),

It is believed that there is an secret 8th and can only be faced when you beat the other 7. Before the show was canceled tome was going to face Amzen.

10300551 affirmative, some you can find out on the Choaticwiki but I've got a book on chaotic the covers all kinds of stuff, like what would have happen in season 4 and the card series fire and stone were 90% ready to print but then the company went under.

I knew Discord had something to do with this!

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