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Northern Desert


Hello Everyone, I'm Northern Desert and this is my user page. I'm a fan who loves crossovers, Pokemon, Bionicle, Lego, and other general nonsense. Witness now as this silly author writes horse words!

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So, I go to Comic-con to have fun with my friends and have a normal experience. I even resisted the temptations around me so I would not go cosplay as something. Go me. Unfortunately, the universe knows no bounds when it comes to screwing around with me.

Now stranded in a world and a body no longer my own, I'll have no choice but to face the politics and war that surround me. That and I also has to face the fact I'm in charge of a new kingdom and I have to look out for them as well.

My name is Philip. But some recognize me now as Yveltal, Pokemon of Destruction and Lord of Death.

Well, without further adiue, down the rabbit hole we go!




Displaced fic so if you hate that don't read. Displaced as a Shiny Yveltal!

Rated teen due to some violence and foul language!

We've got a great editor, Blood Angel Kirito who will edit things when he can, so don't rush the poor guy :3

The cover art is a clip from the amazing, and fluffy :3 , art series of SoftMonKeychains. So check out her work. She gave me permission to use her art as long as she gets credit, so thanks for that!

Crossovers will be done once I get situated!

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Comments ( 236 )

Tip #1: make sure you double-check your summary. You have two major problems with it--the first is you use "was" instead of "were" at one point, and the other is your complete misspelling of adieu. I haven't read the actual fic yet, but I shall commence now.

Sooo... is this in anyway connected to my universe?

6445675
I think he is just "a guy from the real world turns into a Yvetal and gets shoved into equestria"
pretty much a stand alone thing, unless he wants to cross over with other displaced

6445675 Yeah that's kinda what I was wondering about
Oh well, time to tag along and see if this story is interesting enough to keep tagging along

6445864 I'm just asking cause someone added it to my groups folder, which is meant for my story and its various side stories and crossovers

THE "aaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh" needs to be about 10 times longer...
more please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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ah, ok...
maybe whoever posted it there thought that, "your group is about pokemon, might as well put it there" instead of putting it in the pokemon group...

I must say this is good. Also original Kingdom to rule gives you a Like from me. More please :D

uhh, i think ur trying to put ur story in the wrong group... You might want to take a look at what group you put this story in, and then take a look at the kind of story you have. I dont think they match...

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Dude, you're being a dick. You can't judge the quality of something based solely on the synopsis. Either read it and then tell him it's shit, or don't read it and just leave. Just because it's an overused plot device does not connotate a discrepancy in capability. Most stories by famous authors and playwrights are overused plot devices, such as the generic zombie apocalypse or the kidnapped princess. This person did the exact same thing, and you decided to skip over it entirely, leaving only a review on how bad it is without even giving it a chance.

“Okay,” I said, the crowd hanging onto my every word. “I’ll bite, what the hell is happening?”

:rainbowlaugh: You just got an instant promotion to King. :pinkiecrazy:

6445869 Huh....I Pmed you a couple days ago about this same thing, but it was never sent. Give me a little and we can talk about this

6445604 Okay, I'm sorry. I had to re-read this about five times to piece together that you were serious. Listen, I appreciate constructive criticism, but this is just you flailing about trying to hit any mark of reasonable problems.

Here, let me break it down for you :3

>Comedy

>Crossover

>Adventure

>Alternate Universe

>Human

>all in the same fucking story

A mixture of shit, but let's continue on anyway.

So, your telling me that properly tagging my story is a bad thing? The moment you brought this up was your first blunder. If you know what tags are for, which I hope you do, then you would know that properly tagging a story will help the reader decided on what he/she is reading before he jumps into it.

>So, I go to Comic-con to have fun with my friends and have a normal experience.

Just like every other fucking 'LE COMU-CONE XDDD' displaced story, minus the 'friends' in some occasions.

I'm following the premise of the other displaced fics, like you're suppose to. What, you want me to have him get hit by a magic sack that transports him to another reality? Yet again, you're just attacking the fic and you might as well harass every other displaced fic if this bothers you.

>I even resisted the temptations around me so I would not go cosplay as something.

Wow one of the few times you can play dress up without looking like a huge autist and you turn it down? 10/10.

Are you a child? So, I suppose everyone who goes to Comic-con should dress up. Surely this is the only way to have fun! This character is based off of what I would do, and I would feel nervous 'dressing up' because I don't like being in the spotlight.

>Go me. Unfortunately, the universe knows no bounds when it comes to screwing around with me.

I have nothing to comment on here, aside from the fact that the first sentence of this story already painted it as generic as fuck, no less it shows you have little imagination. But I'm getting ahead of myself here.

That's cute. I don't know what to say other then read the other 496 stories and whine about about how they're also 'generic as fuck'.

>Now stranded in a world and a body no longer my own, I'll have no choice but to face the politics and war that surround me.

Ayy. Lmao. It's a good thing you have the alternate universe tag otherwise I would call you out on the bullshit that is the 'politics' and 'war'

Oh, so now you like the tags? You can call bullshit on a fanfic being written like a fanfic if you want, but it's 'fiction' for a reason. At this point you're just looking to complain about anything.

>That and I also has to face the fact I'm in charge of a new kingdom and I have to look out for them as well.

God I didn't even have to read the story to know this character is generic.

So, did you read the story? Because you seem to be hung up on the description. Hate to tell you this buddy, but your idea of generic is that everything fiction is about.

>My name is Philip.

Let me guess, J. Fry?

I didn't get this at first, then I googled J, Fry. I've never watched the show so I wouldn't know. I guess I should go for an unreadable and rare name that no one else has huh? Philip is a common name so I really don't see your logic here.

>But some recognize me now as Yveltal, Pokemon of Destruction and Lord of Death.

>Pokemon

Okay so when I thought it couldn't get much worse than it already was. It literally got to sewage status.

How fucking long did you read the description? If you hate Pokemon so goddamn much then why are you still here? Now I know you're just bashing on the fic because of idiotic reasons. Look out, we've got a Pokemon hater here!

>Well, without further adiue, down the rabbit hole we go!

Yeah a rabbit hole filled with turds as far as the eye can see, or in this case as far as this shitty pokemon can see.

Wow, you really are something new, aren't you? Did you even try at this point to give a decent analysis? You're still on about Pokemon and the description. And what's with your wordplay, are you trying to sound clever because all I see is an angry individual.

>Displaced fic so if you hate that don't read.

>Displaced fic

Yeah cause it wasn't fucking obviously already, but I get it, some people can be a little tweaked out, so mentioning something completely obvious is needed sometimes I'm afraid.

You're that person. You literally have been hating on displaced fics the entire time and now you're going to insult others? Clearly I need to mention it's a Displaced fic five more fucking times to keep idiots like you away.

>Displaced as a Shiny Yveltal!

Ah, yes. We have to get extra snowflake, otherwise the character could actually be something more!

I like the color scheme of Shiny Yveltal better. It makes his appearance look less dark and brooding. You're a child looking for something to cry about.

>Rated teen due to some violence and foul language!

Ayy lmao.

*Sigh* Seems like someone doesn't understand the large age gap this community holds. I have to add that! But you wouldn't know because you've never written a fanfic before!

>We've got a great editor, Blood Angel Kirito who will edit things when he can, so don't rush the poor guy :3

Wow you actually roped someone into helping you with this bullshit?

You're a moron. You managed to bash at me giving credit to someone who edits the story and still think you're smart. As I said before, your idea of bullshit is flawed.

>The cover art is a clip from the amazing, and fluffy :3 , art series of SoftMonKeychains. So check out her work. She gave me permission to use her art as long as she gets credit, so thanks for that!

I hope the artist only accepted for the fact that she gets free publicity off of you.

Now you're just being hateful. The artist and I don't work together. I'm just stating that it's her work and that I got permission to use her work. Anyone could get that. But taking it as my own is called art theft you idiot.

>Crossovers will be done once I get situated!

Literally epic.

What the hell are you even saying? You just added in two words and left it up to others to decipher what you're implying.

Overall. You tried, but it's shit, it's time to turn off the computer and go outside of your dungeon m8.

Yeah, no. You are a poor analyst who had nothing worthwhile to mention. I can not even express how poorly of a job you did when writing this pitiful post. Every single complaint was on the description and how It addressed what the story was about. Benevolentdarkness gave real criticism, the one where he actually brought told me what mistakes I made. You've made one non-stop post about your own opinion on how a displaced fic should be written. Do it yourself! Of course you wont, because you've expressed that you hate displaced fics.

Trust me, when you've seen as many 'displaced' stories with the elements 'comic-con, cosplay' and the usual 'merchant' as I have, then you'll come to find that they're all essentially the same story. Very few actually tried to be different, because why should they? This kind of story is guaranteed to get you followers, even a badly written one will get you a couple more. It's a lazy, effortless story to write that gets you free popularity, and rarely a free ticket to the featured box.

You idiot. Your biased against new Displaced fics because they follow the trend of the fandom!

From what I've read, you tried and you fail to create constructive criticism. Nice try 'm8' but leave a better and more sensible post next time.

6446928 Please don't sick those guys on the rest of us. :fluttercry:

(A nine tailed fox walks around the story before poking it a few times, then sniffs it and finally taking a lick.)

"Yummy!":raritystarry:

Long live the king! ...Wait a tick... that's the name of another story! This story seems to a have a great premise. I will continue to follow along with it. Keep up the good work mate. :pinkiehappy:
Teehee that title is different then what I stated.

Don't censor yourself here, it's looks stupid and immature. It's like cursing too much, it makes you look like a child trying to be 'edgy' by cursing without actually cursing.

This is the Internet, we've seen worse than a few curse words.

6447611 *Reads story* XD That was an amazing way to kill off Sombra! Thanks for showing me this!

6447932 Oh, okay.... *fires censorer*

Yeah, I think I can fix that XD

In truth I didn't want to offend anyone so I did that, but your right.

6448335 Don't mean to be too harsh, but yeah. This is the Internet, offending people is as easy as breathing.

I mean, take the guy that got his panties in a bunch over your story's mere existence, for example. Really, it's not that hard.

In the end, it's all a matter of ignoring the raging idiots and focusing on the actual constructive criticism.

I landed right at him

how do you land AT somebody?

Yay this is awesome! So I see this is a Displace story? Are there going to be cross overs in this story?

I gotta say, I am really enjoying this story.(If my avatar didn't make it obvious, Yveltal is my favorite legendary)
I am only a little upset that you decided to write this before I could come up with something with Yveltal that's actually decent like yours.:ajbemused:
Oh well.

...i can't wait fro him to Munchkin the hell out of his moves...
"oh, you want to hit me? sorry, i'm intangible"
"hmm... if i can make a claw and arm out of Shadow claw, what else can i make? oh look, i made the Susanoo"

I really love this story. I like how you did the world building and made it feel really neat! Like Lord of the Rings.

You pick the right Pokemon for this story.

I can't wait for the next chapter.

“For your punishment, I assign you to work in public office!”

NOOOOOOOO! :fluttercry: That's cruel and unusual! :pinkiecrazy:

6459198 In due time. I want to get settled in with my story first!

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Here, let me send you through a dimensional rift where everything you have changes and the chances of getting back to your loved one ranges around 7%.

Wow. How did he calculate that chance? :rainbowlaugh:

6461187 I was thinking, "Wow is he doing crossovers? Naw, I couldn't make a displaced story int ime!"
I see your comment.
WORKBRAINWRITEWRITEWRITE&@#$&@^#*$@^#$&#$^

I have a feeling the Mane 6 might accidentally cause a War.

But great chapter!

6464972 Oh noes! I'll try to fix that but can you tell me why you can't see it?

6462684 XD I'd love to! No rush though, let your story be what you want and never feel pressured to finish it quickly.

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Great chapter. What what the Mane Six will think of current events.

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