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Procrastination is my middle name. My parents had a very good sense of humour.

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After an unfortunate accident, Spoiled Rich wakes up thinking she's her old self before her marriage to Filthy, and boy isn't she different. The whole town is shaken up in the process, and Diamond is about to uncover some long lost family secrets...

Featured Nov 16th-18th 2017

Chapters (11)
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Comment posted by TheMajorTechie deleted Nov 16th, 2017

Spoiled lost her memory eh? This'll be interesting!

8554344 Why do I feel like this is... somehow a better thing for Spoiled?

I'm intrigued... and worried due to the lack of a Romance tag. At the same time, I suppose I should be glad there isn't a "Tragedy" tag.

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Just because there isn't the tag of a certain genre here, it doesn't mean there won't be elements of it there. Not that I'm giving away anything by saying that, of course. :scootangel:

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Ahh. That makes sense. I was just worried because If there was no romance... then that would indicate an argument incoming between spoiled and filthy

I hope despite her memory loss, this isn't a story where filthy is going to force her to love him when her current feelings may not agree with that. If she is back to her old self I don't expect her to rush the romance with filthy to a point where they are together "again".

I want it yes, but maybe they have an argument or something, filthy feeling bad about it and she noticing that he can be kind of sweet or something?

This looks good so far, just in any other story like that when someone woke up maybe even suddnly being a human tunred pony, they are usually forced from the story to act on feelings that can'T be there yet. Like when they force the new cadance (bein a male once), to marry shining.

Honestly I would like both, her falling in love with Filthy again, or she falling in love with someone else, that would give an interessting problem for the story I guess.

Why do I get the feeling somewhere in this (perhaps in flashback), there's gonna be a "by Celestia, I think she's got it!" floating the direction of this story...?

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Yes, many different directions this story could go. I have my own set route I'm going to take, but any one of those would be interesting. Hope it lives up to it's potential. I'll be doing my best. :raritywink:


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Maybe. there's only one way to find out... :pinkiesmile:

Wait...what?! The ending threw me for a loop. That's how she talked back then?! AHAHAHAHA!!! Oh, its hurts to laugh....AHAHAHAHA! Can't wait to see where this goes!

That accent though...

I don't know what that was, but it was hilarious!

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Glad you like it so far. The way things are going, more VERY soon. :pinkiehappy:

This as potential. And I love what you did with spoiled: the attitude, the accent, her past... This beg to be explored.

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It's a cockney accent, a "lower class" British accent.

Using all of her until now untapped earth pony strength, she blasted the ball straight to the artfully drawn chalk goal.

I know it is a fact you can hardly ignore sometimes, but there are times in which I think it would be better to not even focus to much on "power boosts" or whatever.

If anything, her new walk reminded one of a certain cranky old wig-wearer instead of the proud wife of a local tycoon.

? the translation is suggesting she act like an old mare, I thought she might act like her younger self. However the way she walked I udnerstood that she was practically crawling the whole way, a bit like you would image a sad pony to walk.

Well it is as good as I thought.

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The fact Diamond is an earth pony would give her some solidarity with the ground, so any activity she participates in on land would naturally give her more of an advantage than non-earth equines... as least, that's the way I understand it. :pinkiesmile:

Also, let's just say life on the farm is kind of slow for Spoiled, so her gait is a bit less hurried than before. She's also looking at the ground instead of the sky with her nose turned up, which is a major change for her. :scootangel:

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The fact Diamond is an earth pony would give her some solidarity with the ground, so any activity she participates in on land would naturally give her more of an advantage than non-earth equines... as least, that's the way I understand it. :pinkiesmile:

I know that stuff, but just like in some other stories, animes or whatever I think it would be better if they sometimes don't try to mention it to hard all the time, or hinting on it. I can'T explain it better than to say that it wouldn't hurt the scene if it would have played out without the mentioning of that magic.

That and maybe to make it fair they should just not exactly use their special magic when they can control it.

It is a bad example but it is like talking about the Stallions equipment in m-rated stories and the lifespawn of the ponies if there is no second race that would really life much longer. I mean like when dragons or much longer.....okay scratch that. Now that I think about it the lifespawn thing is already there without the humans I suppose.


Also, let's just say life on the farm is kind of slow for her, so her gait is a bit less hurried than before. She is also looking at the ground instead of the sky with her nose turned up, which is also a major change for her.

Also, let's just say life on the farm is kind of slow for her, so her gait is a bit less hurried than before. She is also looking at the ground instead of the sky with her nose turned up, which is also a major change for her.

hhhmmm okay that gives me a better idea about whats going on.

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This is actually the first time I've bought up some of the advantages of being an earth pony, so don't worry... it won't be a regular thing. Thanks for commenting. :twistnerd:

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Thank you for understanding, but don't worry, it won't be always so important for me.

You probably know the freeling if you see something often enough that it starts to annoy you, that or it is.....just not your thing?
oh god damn lost my thought I had on the matter. Well it seems I can't concentrate right now.



You only have to know that I don't want to start any fight if I should mention something in the future and that I just like to speak my mind about some stuff that many else seems to be fans of.
I had another author that was rather like"what you don'T like it? huh huh,...go **** yourself.", but I wasn'T even the only one that mentioned his mistake in an harmless comment. I think you were a rather patient person as far as I remember, but I thought I better mention it.

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I like to think I'm a bit politer than that. This comments section is a free area for you to express your thoughts... the only things I draw the line at are personally insulting others or making threats. Anyway, I really appreciate the time you took to read the first chapter. Tune in soon for part two. :twilightsmile:


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Hopefully, you'll like where it's heading too. :raritystarry:

Scottish? Irish? I can't tell lass.

Is it wrong if I say, I hope Spoiled stays like this? She seems a lot happier, and I think everypony will be better off with her in this state of mind. :rainbowhuh:

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You can have that opinion, but as to what happens next don't change that channel :rainbowderp:

Comment posted by SuperPinkBrony12 deleted Nov 16th, 2017

I love it. This fic is gonna be good, I can tell.

A fanfic about Spoiled Bitch? Interesting, let's see how this goes.

Can't an upperclass mare work in peace, without some outrageous racket permeating my delicate eardrums?!

Can't an upperclass mare invest in some earplugs or a music playing headset to play some classical music over the sound of kids?

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DJ Pon-3 is on the case! (insert gif that doesn't exist)

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8555014 Thanks, I'll do my best to make sure I meet your expectations :rainbowdetermined2:

carefully plotted plans

I read this as "carefully potted plants"

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Well, I'm sure she likes to keep a nice garden... :raritywink:

a-and she's not even wearing her tiara.

Okay, now THAT feels OOC for Diamond since it's her friggin' name sake.

"The same one she was about to accuse the pegasus filly of not wearing regularly, to get her into major trouble."

In my home town, people seem to NEVER wear helmets, I offered a guy one once, and he refused to accept it, RIGHT AFTER HE HAD A CRASH! Saying he normally didn't crash, and wasn't hurt when he did.

I do like from Spoiled's POV, the CMC are the ones corrupting Diamond.

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She's not wearing her tiara, because she's playing a physical sport where it might get damaged. I'm sure she'll put in on again afterwards. :scootangel:

Always protect your head when travelling at high speeds. :moustache:

Yes, Spoiled has a very 'unique' view on things, to put it mildly. :twistnerd:

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No pressure though. I know what that can do to an author.

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Don't worry, I'm going to take my time with this one. Thanks for the good advice, though. :scootangel:

I'm in a weird position where, because of my personal feelings on Spoiled Rich in general and the comments, I both kind of want to read it and I kind of don't.

So, this will go in my read later for now, and once it's complete, I'll check how it ends.
If I like that, then I'll go back and read everything else.

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Alrighty then. If I can remember, as soon as it's finished, I'll let you know via PM and you can book the night off to check out the conclusion, then hopefully the rest. Thanks for dropping by! :pinkiehappy:

Whoa, she wouldn't sound out of place on Coltonation Street.

Well, well, well, isn’t this a twisting turn of events?

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