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Thanks for the fave :twilightsmile:

Lots of good ideas! Thank you, I'm already plotting this out in my head now... I think I will take this up. Thanks for the extra encouragement!

Meh, could be about plenty of stuff. They could be doing this more frequently. They could experiment. Twilight could visit. Talk about more stuff. Console each other when there is a bad day. Add another of the main six. Change the location, like if they go on a tour with their band or the beach like in the shorts episodes. Add toys. Sunset get confortables enough to ask Flash find out exactly how much of the transformation she is affected. Etc.

Plenty of stuff you can do. Continue to keep them talking and being good friend or whatever kind of relationship they are in now. I don't know where this story could go, I am not one to plan too much when I write, I usually kind of let the characters drive the story.

Ooh, really? I wondered while I was writing it whether I should make it the first chapter of something bigger, or leave it as a one-shot; I decided one-shot because I wasn't really sure where else to take it afterwards, and that I might have written myself into a corner. What would you like to see happen in the (hypothetical) sequel?

Wouldn't mind seeing a follow-up on that one.

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