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"Be good to yourself, because nobody else has the power to make you happy."

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Possible SPOILERS. Sick of life behind bars at Tartarus, Cozy Glow gets an unexpected visitor in the shape of former bully Diamond Tiara. Their conversation is interesting to say the least, and is documented here for posterity (and future evidence).

Featured on 11/9/18. It's true.

Cover credit to Squipy-Cheetah at Deviant Art.

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Oh dear god... I do not pity Cozy at all, she had it coming really.:rainbowlaugh: (Yes yes, harp on me if you like. Conspiring with Tirek and committing reason is a one-way ticket to Tartarus, no matter the age.)

It is great but... Who was Diamond Tiara referring to when she said "A daredevil pegasus, a musical unicorn, and a trainee farmer."?

Dan

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A lot of people seem to be leaning towards her having further villainous plans and she was counting on ending up in Tartarus.

But then, her calm reaction to being locked up there might just be due to her being totally batshit insane.
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9164117
I'm staying away from that hot topic. There have been enough squabbles about it on here already, I have no intention of adding to them... :duck:

9164175
Here's a clue. :scootangel: :unsuresweetie: :applecry:

Sic Semper Tyrannis, darlin'. :ajsmug:

I can't help but wonder how the heck Cozy Glow got so twisted and power-mad in the first place. Where could she have gotten those crazy ideas about friendship being a tool she could use to become Empress of Equestria in the first place? Something had to set off the chain reaction of events that led Cozy to becoming the crazed delinquent she is now.

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Well she wanted to absorb all the magic in equestria to transport to another world so either she isnt really a pony or she is working for someone. As to why she is so evil that is anyone guess.

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Ah. Okay.

I was actually thinking you were referring to other reformed villains.

I'm interested now.

9164187
That is the million bit question.

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Hopefully, something to be followed up in S9... :moustache:


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Come to think of it, so am I now. Possible sequel vibes? :raritywink:


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...And you just KNOW DT can afford to pay you, if you get it correct. :twistnerd:

Nice Work! I Really Wonder how a foal can get up with a Plan like that in the First Place. Franky, i find tartarus unfitting as Punishment for a Child. And if She has parents how they react to that.

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I agree on it being unfitting punishment (especially since it's apparently where she wanted to be), given her insanity... The appropriate response would've been to send her to a rehabilitation/mental institution.

On her parents reaction...

"Cozy Glow! You're going to get one thousand across the flank for this, little missy! And don't get thinking that's it, you're grounded for a week! No candy, no ice cream, absolutely nothing sweet! You're also going BACK to that school, with one or both of us watching you to make sure you actually pay attention and learn something! When this is all over, you had best be a good little filly... Or else Tartarus will look like a nice vacation to the beach compared to what we'll do to you!"

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Yeah, i could only Imagine She Lost them in a Magic accident to be like this

Uhhh... I think this is a bit spoiler-y

The episode hasn't even came out on Discovery Channel (the main broadcast) yet.

9164301
Who knows? Maybe we'll find out, one day... :rainbowderp:


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There are other 'villainous' Cozy Glow fics out there now. By the looks of things, most people have already seen the episodes anyway. That's the power of the Internet... :moustache:

I think I will read it if I finally watch the episode.

9164425
at least a tag lol. I accidently ran across this while scrolling down before watching the episode.

9164521
I was forced to delete a bit of text, but your wish is my command. Now, what do you want for your other two wishes? :scootangel:

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Sorry about that, thanks! Cookies and Cream

She need to wait for the next visit... Maybe Diamond Tiara could use her connection with the crusaders to let the tiara stay with Cozy, as she free all the prisoners in Tartarus

Darn it, now I have two fics I have to wait on until after "School Daze"! Oh well, into the "Read Later" pile it goes.

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Hope you enjoy it! (the fic and the episodes) :duck:

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I hope so too, I don't always enjoy the ideas like the cutie map, but the kirin episode was nice, I think I didn't liked the rockhoof episode so much, more about how they acted and well....it depenst on how it ends with the Cutiemark Crussaiders and the other six being the heroes. Sometimes you just have characters where you think they aren't exactly super heroes.

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She didn't say she was sending it to another world, and Tirek said it would've been sent into the ether. Hardly another world. It implies that she was just going to get rid of it, not actually send it somewhere else or do anything with it.

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I feared this would actually happen. Them putting a child there was to much, I would have understood them getting her to psychatrists or something like that, but not putting her in pony hell.

I just watched the episode and since this story is about her I think I can write this without making it a spoiler right?
The stuff with the CMC was not to bad and 3/4 of the final was nice.

Now I probably read the story or tomorrow.

My advice to Lord Tirek?
Do NOT drop the soap, buddy. Do not EVER drop the soap...

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That what the subtitled version stated when talking to glimmer. I didnt watch the dub version so my apologies if she didt say that. I was under the impression that she was trying to put it somewhere elseand that she was working under someone from another world.

as soon as she showed a singular drop of genuine empathy for her 'grievous' crimes, there was talk of her 'beginning the long path to redemption', or at least being transferred to a less foul location.

You noticed it too huh?, yep me and a youtuber hated it that they were putting a child in tartarus instead of putting her somewhere else like a mental facility or stuff like that if I got that word right.

Well as long as this doesn't means "they change all of her personality to make her joing "cult harmony", I don't mind them trying to make her a better pony.

Wait just a second. I-It couldn't be my p-par..

I didn't even thought about her parents.

"What did I tell you when you first arrived?! Inmates are to have no personal possessions whatsoever! Now stop with the internal monologuing, or you won't get your ration of bread and water for dinner!"

Looks like the guard broke the fourth wall if I understand it right and I didn't liked that part.

Well...while I don't know if Diamon was the right choice, I liked the idea enough to say good job there.

I want to see a human turned cowzy glow, who isn't a fan and the usual perverted character or guy from the street (bad neighbourhood and everything, drugs and co.) Just a honestly nice guy having the trouble to get his new body out of prison.
I want him to actually be her and not having to share a body.

I couldn't think of the whole idea for a sequel so I just said what my first thought was when I was watching the episode.

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I don't think the guard was 'breaking the fourth wall', he has just probably been given a psyche evaluation paper for Cozy Glow, being the main sentry at the facility where's she's held. So he knows this is what she does, and is encouraging her to stop it. After all, it's not healthy behaviour, right? :rainbowderp:

I did think of what you said about her situation too, hence it's inclusion in the story. Considering Cozy's young years and the gravity of her potential crime, it would probably take a while to figure out what to do with her. In the show the solution might be a bit more simplistic, but at least fan fiction lets us spread our wings a bit... :raritywink:

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Well simplistic or extreme:scootangel:

Well I guess the monologing is selfdestructive, not sure if there is a good way to do it, but I guess it would distract her from living her life, at least the way I image it at the moment.

Yep we thought the solution was a bit extreme, but it's only a kids show yes, for that we have the fanfictions like you said.
Only that....I found out a while ago, that some stuff is just taken from the show like that without thinking to much about it and implemented in many stories.

Okay enough of that, you at least did a good job with it.

edit: I just notice that your avater looks it would react to my new avatar.:pinkiehappy:

9164186 Semper Fidelis Tyrannosaurus! I hope you watch Venture Bros like I do

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1: I meant Thus Always to Tyrants.
2: We don't get those channels, sooo...

Comment posted by the dobermans deleted Sep 11th, 2018

9165569 I know what you meant; a part of me thought of an episode of Venture Bros where the phrase you posted was mentioned as a correction to what I posted :rainbowlaugh:

...Is it bad that I'm wondering HOW the guard knew she was internal monologuing?

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If you read the replies below, then you'll find the explanation you're looking for now. :twistnerd:

9164175
Dude she meant the Cutie Mark Crusaders.

Anyone else think Spoiled Rich should adopt Cozy Glow?

9168676
The author already told me.

Headcanon accepted.

9168731
Oh god, now there's a frightening thought.

Short but Amazingly written. For a minute there I thought she was about to escape with the tool that was unwittingly provided to her. Thank God the guard caught her in time.

Nope, Cozy Glow is going to be an uber bad seed for who knows how long.

I'd love to see Silver Spoon pay this bitch a visit, too.

9168731 No! A thousand times no! Spoiled is a bad influence as it is, the last thing she needs is a filly who's committed treason and thinks friendship means power. The two of them could become dangerous if left to their own devices. :pinkiegasp:

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Let me rephrase. Anyone think it would be horribly fascinating to watch Spoiled Rich adopt Cozy Glow?

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Cozy is already capable of running circles around Spoiled.
In fact, if I had to write an older Cozy Glow I would make her a Livia's expy

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