To be inserted into Equestria, it's a dream come true for anybrony!
Meet the ponies!
Have super awesome magical adventures!
Use foreknowledge to avoid all those silly pratfall moments without screwing things up and causing irreparable harm to the Mane 6...uh...hopefully!
And all for the low cost of possessing Princess Luna, denying her any real freedom or the ability to move on with her life since she's in your head and you're walking around as Nightmare Moon!
Yeah...there had to be a catch in there somewhere, didn't there?
Chapters (17)
I laugh my head off. Amazing idea. Someone is in Nightmare Moon's body and the whole situation is soo silly. Best pharse Evil guy makes nose boop joke!
Oh, I am down for this story. Into the faves it goes!
Thus, I lurk
Oooh da gut stuff.
I love this already!
This is genius!
Righty-o.
Well, here's one to a great start.
My excitement for this continuation is something akin to a collective seizure.
THE NIGHT
WILL LAST
(bink)
Oh hey, look, ponies!
Embarrassing secrets are the best way to prove validity of your claims of identity. Science proves it
This story looks like it's gonna be another great ride. I also love your descriptions of the ponies. Brick House Brawler Physique Celestia hugging Twilight makes me think of Alex Armstrong though.
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I think I'm in love!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Liked faved and followed :)
On the one hand, I think this is an interesting concept and I'd enjoy seeing more of it. On the other hand, the fixation on pony asses that is already showing itself makes me think the world might be better off without it. I'm conflicted.
I approve.
Keep going.
"thing the bookwork had"
"bookworm"?
"all that tons was"
"toned"?
"did slow ever slow "
"glow ever so"?
"In top of which"
"On"?
Less ass more sass. Good to goo.
so evil that coming back?
After the Internet of course.
nightmare boop
Cute! CUTE!
Kinda wondering if there's going to be any romance. Our protagonist's wandering eyes and thoughts on Luna and Twilight make it pretty clear that they find ponies attractive. And their denials aren't convincing me otherwise.
6157504 yeah, its a little strange that upon seeing them the possesser is checking them out instead of say, asking for an explanation.
Also surely they know they aren't NMM? Why say they are?
Must. Have. MOAR!
There's some word problems here and there, minor typos, but aside from that, quite enjoyable. Looking forward to more once it's written. :3
Looking forward to more.
ch.2 now plz
Im not acusing you of anything but I actually wrote a story with incredibly similar premise about a month before this. I really dont mind because it seems to be taking a different turn from mine and is honestly a lot more entertaining. Bravo and I hope for more!
I question to the auther. IT is this. Did the orignal Nightmare Moon originate from Luna or was a parasite. the answer will determine if I continue reading.
6158796 Not exactly the newest premise, yo.
6156627 The whole "Human-replaces-Nightmare-Moon-and-hilarity-ensues" has already been done before...several times, in fact
Heck, just search the Nightmare Moon tag
Not saying this is a bad story though
It's always amusing to see Twilight freak out that the Elements of Harmony don't work and Nightmare Moon becoming her own character separate from Luna
Although this time it looks like Woona is going to be a backseat driver
That's gonna be awkward when it comes to romance...
Dude has his eyes on the prize.
More please!
6159048 The main reason I noticed it is the title similarities. Mine was Am I the Nightmare? And the setting is the same.
Hm....
OH OH THIS ONE I WANNA KNOW THIS ONE
You get a thumbs up for the bit about Sharknado and the head tilting at the end. Keep it up!
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It seem the possessor love the booty.
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DOWN PINKIE! BAD PONE!
Oh yes. This shows good promise.
Interesting fic so far i must say, keep it up!
more please i can't stop laughing
6159048 Eh, nobody really. I'll agree with you on what you wrote. I do like how the author did the descriptions, but I can't help but feel they were long-winded. They could have just used them as the protagonist looked at the mane six; I mean, they were talking. It would have helped break up that huge section where absolutely nothing was happening.
Overall it was pretty enjoyable. I mean, when I was sending that message to the other author...it was more to say, you can't exactly lay claim to the idea of 'Human Protagonist in NMM does things with the Mane Six' that's practically a given mini-genre now. It's not new or original, so who cares? In this case, it's what you do with a given that makes it good or bad.
This fiction looks very promising. Not like the other Nightmare Monn/Human ones, I must say you thought well in excluding the Human memories but keep the personality. I was personally looking for a good Luna -nightmare Moon/human fiction without the Gore or Tragedy tags and certainly without overused human concepts like the human part having useless flashbacks of his home or stuff, thinking that this is a dream/coma and not taking anythig seriously, and other lame stuff.
I hope this will be very entertaining
6158808 Depends on if you're following show canon or Comic canon
In the comics, the Nightmare is a completely separate entity
In the show, I think Moon was born out of Luna's dark emotions
I tend to think of the Nightmare as somewhat similar to the Symbiote from Spider-Man
Attaches itself to a host and feeds off their emotions and eventually takes over
Or something
That ending was hilarious!
6158808 It's likely a parasite; it would have had access to all of Luna's memories if it came from her.
6160124 Not talking the current personal sharing with Luna but the one before that. If so that's it for me I can't stand that route.
That wasn't as bad as I thought it would be. In fact, I enjoyed it. Well, I guess it's on to the-
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Wait, someone made a lurking comment already? Crap. Uh... I'll just like and fave and be on my way then.