Aug
19th
2021
Small part of mi new Story - Chrysalis last letter. · 10:49pm Aug 19th, 2021
Frustrated with nothing to read, Chrysalis went back to bed and flopped down heavily on it to wait for sleep to return, after pouting and kicking she remembered something from her time as a spy.
"Under the bed... Ponies always keep things under their beds." Said Chrysalis to herself as she rolled over and stretched her front hoof under the bed looking for anything, and as she stretched a little further she could feel something like a trunk.
https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/959965/a-help-request
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the story looks good, and I think u got a lot of potentials, but I think that chapter was a little rush in how the character found each other and got together, we don't know how the pony think of each other in your "AU", but I think you can work more in the background, the dialog was good to
Thanks for the follow, it really means a lot XD
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No problem men, im glad