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coto616


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  • 15 weeks
    CHRISTAL SPARKLE UNIVERSE (AU)

    This AU focuses on the story of Christal Sparkle, the daughter of Chrysalis and Twilight, being a universe generated as it progresses I personally don't plan on making an ending anytime soon, but I intend for each story here to have its own ending, I don't want to leave stories with "Hiatus, Canceled, or Imcomplete for more than a couple of days. The world of Equestria is vast and I would like to explore it with you.

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  • 19 weeks
    Pony days

    Just Pony days to remember...

    15 November 1958... Never Forget...

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  • 19 weeks
    Story Done

    - Link- Twilight really likes heavy metal. I think it's an alicorn thing... (pony victoriağŸŽ¼)

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  • 33 weeks
    story ideas - 02

    - poniville sues me for writing a finfic about them without prior permission and I must travel to equestria for the trial

    - a series of letters between twilight and the princesses, her friends and chryssy about why she can't have foal

    - I need to buy rat poison at the walmart in my city, and I am taken care of by fluttershy, I end up raising a colony of adorable little rats and wondering when leaving why a pegasus works at walmart

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  • 34 weeks
    story ideas - 01

    this is a personal list of future story ideas i whana try, and if somepony whana make one of these fell free to ask me for more details of it...

    - a serie of letters whit princes twi, celestia, luna, for whi twilight dont have his foal..

    - a random human exploring the garden of his new house get lost and end in everfree forest ( he is not realy good whit maps)...

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Mar
1st
2021

CHRISTAL SPARKLE UNIVERSE (AU) · 5:12pm March 1st

This AU focuses on the story of Christal Sparkle, the daughter of Chrysalis and Twilight, being a universe generated as it progresses I personally don't plan on making an ending anytime soon, but I intend for each story here to have its own ending, I don't want to leave stories with "Hiatus, Canceled, or Imcomplete for more than a couple of days. The world of Equestria is vast and I would like to explore it with you.

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thank you for your opinion. I'll try my best to improve my story :twilightsmile:

3042705
the story looks good, and I think u got a lot of potentials, but I think that chapter was a little rush in how the character found each other and got together, we don't know how the pony think of each other in your "AU", but I think you can work more in the background, the dialog was good to :twilightsmile:

Thank you for favorite my first story

Thanks for the follow, it really means a lot XD

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