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coto616


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  • 45 weeks
    Small part of mi new Story - Chrysalis last letter.

    Frustrated with nothing to read, Chrysalis went back to bed and flopped down heavily on it to wait for sleep to return, after pouting and kicking she remembered something from her time as a spy.

    "Under the bed... Ponies always keep things under their beds." Said Chrysalis to herself as she rolled over and stretched her front hoof under the bed looking for anything, and as she stretched a little further she could feel something like a trunk.

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  • 69 weeks
    CHRISTAL SPARKLE UNIVERSE (AU)

    This AU focuses on the story of Christal Sparkle, the daughter of Chrysalis and Twilight, being a universe generated as it progresses I personally don't plan on making an ending anytime soon, but I intend for each story here to have its own ending, I don't want to leave stories with "Hiatus, Canceled, or Imcomplete for more than a couple of days. The world of Equestria is vast and I would like to explore it with you.

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  • 73 weeks
    Pony days

    Just Pony days to remember...

    15 November 1958... Never Forget...

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  • 74 weeks
    Story Done

    - Link- Twilight really likes heavy metal. I think it's an alicorn thing... (pony victoriağŸŽ¼)

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  • 88 weeks
    story ideas - 02

    - poniville sues me for writing a finfic about them without prior permission and I must travel to equestria for the trial

    - a series of letters between twilight and the princesses, her friends and chryssy about why she can't have foal

    - I need to buy rat poison at the walmart in my city, and I am taken care of by fluttershy, I end up raising a colony of adorable little rats and wondering when leaving why a pegasus works at walmart

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Aug
19th
2021

Small part of mi new Story - Chrysalis last letter. · 10:49pm Aug 19th, 2021

Frustrated with nothing to read, Chrysalis went back to bed and flopped down heavily on it to wait for sleep to return, after pouting and kicking she remembered something from her time as a spy.

"Under the bed... Ponies always keep things under their beds." Said Chrysalis to herself as she rolled over and stretched her front hoof under the bed looking for anything, and as she stretched a little further she could feel something like a trunk.

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thank you for your opinion. I'll try my best to improve my story :twilightsmile:

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the story looks good, and I think u got a lot of potentials, but I think that chapter was a little rush in how the character found each other and got together, we don't know how the pony think of each other in your "AU", but I think you can work more in the background, the dialog was good to :twilightsmile:

Thank you for favorite my first story

Thanks for the follow, it really means a lot XD

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