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Yay whit it!!!

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Twilight Velvet and Celestia exchange a few words about the future of little Twilight Sparkle, an awkward conversation for both parties.


The image is a pile of photos glued together. :raritywink:

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This was good

Humorous, though there seems to be a missing Sunset in there (maybe) ...

Ri2
Ri2 #3 · Nov 4th, 2022 · · ·

Fuck off, Celestia, you lost the right to call yourself her mother when you gave her up and ignored her most of her life.

this did not go the way you'd think

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Yes, there are some unanswered questions in the story, for example, who is Twilight's father, why did Celestia give her up in the first place, how did she meet Velvet, why is their relationship so unfriendly, why doesn't she tell Twilight the truth, or why does she want to come back into her life now?

These are questions that I wanted to leave to free interpretation, and possibly I will make a continuation where the truth is told, but I also wanted to give more interaction to the story considering the comments that you write about it.

a really good little story hoping for a sequel or a prequel or both in one, to explore of this little universer, and to explore the relationship between Celestia and Velvet, while Twilight is growning up, and that it hopefully ends with them discovering how they need to work together rather then fight each other, as Twilight might start to see Celestia as her second mother.

doesnt feel like Celestia gave up Twilight willingly, and Velvets hostility it seems that a deal was made, maybe Night Light is the father? and a deal had been made or something else could have happened.

with Night Light being the father would be a good reason for taking in Sparkle.

and with the way they are talking to each other it seems that Celestia and Velvet, and the fact that Velvet is talking about that money is hard to come by, it really seems that this deal might have included that Celestia was to stay out of Twilights life.

i think Celestia was worried about Twilights magic output, and i also think that she wants to work with Velvet.
but Velvet is not making it easy for Celestia and that put her on the defence and that clouds her judgement, so she is not making it easier for herself either.


really like that little story :pinkiehappy:

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Wait a minute so twilight can have children?!!!.


Oh their better be a sequel where we picked off right were twilight was slowly crying herself to sleep..

Poor girl.

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