Spin-off sequel to Fashionista's Dilemma.
Several months have passed since Michael Walker's single-day experience as Twilight Sparkle. The night before his birthday, he has his car transform him into pony -- this time as the Great and Powerful Trixie. He ends up getting far more than he bargained for as he travels between two distinctly different universes, meeting a distinctly different version of Trixie in each one. He ends up losing everything on his human homeworld, choosing to become a unicorn stallion and tagging along with Trixie, and performing on stage with her as they travel across Equestria. Ultimately, every happy ending must come to an end.
Cover image by GSphere of Deviantart.
Chapters (102)
I didn't read this story, but the title caught my eye since my name is Michael.
So in this universe everything went wrong.
1958082 That's just the tip of the iceberg...
BRRR!!!!
"Now that was interesting, alright"
Seriously, my face after reading this chapter - O_O
2027759 Thank you for your kind words!
good fucking thing that was only a nightmare.
aaahhh, I see, he's trying to find out what caused the initial change to becoming an alternate universe, and thus, fix from present, to that points, problems.
2027892 or at the very least make things better for the ponies in that particular universe.
This story deserves more likes that it has right now!
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This story? Not bad. Could be better
Funny, though, is this one: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/59847/the-great-and-powerful--walter
Keep it up, though!
2032147 Thanks for the encouragement. I had no idea that other story existed!
I am still confused about Twilight being mute....
2072291 Nightmare Moon used a silencing spell on her and also placed a counter-spell upon her so any attempt to heal her would backfire.
2073496 So neither of those spells can be dispelled?
2073583 I haven't written it into the story yet, but when the two Trixies return to the other Ponyville, they find that the spells were lifted as a result of Nightmare being turned into a crystal sculpture.
May I suggest a catchphrase for Mike? Like "Looks like I'm in the wrong universe again...". Might not be the best idea...
Story sort of just "took off." ... without the reader...
2087186 Is it moving too fast, or is there not enough detail?
2087237 Story is too fast, and elements are being thrown at the reader with no explanation. Thus leaving the reader lost and in the dark.
For example, what is a TS? (I realize now this is a sequel... still to a new reader this is basically gibberish) Some authors do sequels, but also provide explanation so that new readers understand what's going on. The Dresden Files novel series comes to mind here.
2087476 Thanks for the info. The car/van in the story carries the name of TS, a carryover from the "Twilight for a Day" story. I have a tendency to try to get as much into the story as I can, but I will admit that I want the action to proceed at a rapid pace. I thought I had slowed it down for this story, but I believe I am going to have to slow it down further. Sorry for the confusion.
I BUCKING KNEW IT!
My brain just died.......
2094306 Sorry about that. Let me know if I can fix it for you.
Makes good human crossover fic.
Gets more dislikes than likes...
[bad luck brian]
2094306 Another dream sequence, my friend. I tried to throw the reader off again. Looks like I failed.
2098666 But overall, I luv it
2100067 Thanks for the kind words. I think my writing is improving, at least somewhat.
poor micheal
2105433 He still has more stuff to do ...
Interesting...
2110342 That was my goal with this particular human cross-over fic.
After reading this fix from chapter one till now I still have no idea why its gotten so many down votes
HMMM, BACON-- I mean good chapture!!!, though I really wanted him to be turned into a centaur,
magic AND hands , he'd be UNSTOPPABLE, plus he'd be like "I'm an a horse".... and that would be so much win.
2117702 Those downvotes have come in small batches -- I have posted chapter by chapter -- some of which might not have seemed canon at the time -- I only hope those who have downvoted might give it another chance. Thanks for the kind words!
2119110ahhh I see and its my pleasure mate I'll have to go back and read your other stuff later to get some of the backstory but this is a about a 7/10
story to me
2119142 Thanks again. Hope you enjoy the other stories as well.
God damn it, spike...
Yet he still doesn't have a form for himself? He needs a really badass pony form, like an ironman themed color , or perhaps a centaur, cuz centaur are awesome, but good writing- though he should eventually get some of his stuff back.
2132862 He's not going to be a centaur -- Trixie would have nothing to do with him then.
A sequel to a spin-off is almost as twice as large as the original story. Amazing! Good work!
2134586 Thanks for your kind words. Still not finished, believe it or not...
And he's like: Troll mode activated. On a side note I figured out why Lyra and bonbon live together- because "The rent is too damn high!".
nice little chapter
That's not trixie! Its a changeling!
2183818 shh, you'll ruin the surprise!
2170056 Thank you!
2202933 Exactly where I borrowed that line from. Nice catch. Maybe I made it a bit too obvious...