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When a young human super-soldier falls to Equestria, he must move on from his dark past filled with war, tragedy and bloodshed. Will he embrace this new chance at life, this new beginning? And most importantly. can he protect it when an ancient evil returns for a second time?
(NOT a Halo crossover.)
!!!Due to an incredibly busy schedule now that exams for college entry are closing in, New Beginnings is on Hiatus!!!
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My first story!
Please comment,rate and point out any mistakes!
Human super-soldier in Equestria? Sweet. I am definitely keeping my eye on this one.
Chapter 1 will be up shortly.
I think you should explain who is Nyx. I heard this name before and still don't know who is she. You wrote her down as Twilight's daughter, but it's not clear to me.
Anyways, your writing is good! Nice work!
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Thanks for the compliment,and Nyx is one of the main characters from Past Sins.My writing is nothing compared to that masterpiece.
Wow, fast reply and new chapter! Thanks for the infos!
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No problem,I'll be here for a while and working on chapter 2 at the same time.
Cant wait to read it! Have fun with it.
Oh, one more thing: as I know the ponies never seen a human before so they should be more surprised. A strange, 2 meters tall, bipedal and tailless creature with small eyes... I should be affraid of him if I were a pony.
Just sayin'
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Well as we know,Twilight can get too curious for her own good,and after saving Ponyville from an ursa minor (and any other creatures she has faced in fanfics that are based before these events) she should have earned the trust and respect of the residents of Ponyville.
But thanks for the advice!
Chapter 3 is up,it's a bit shorter than expected but it's there.
Hmm, one more thing: how Twilight "got" her daughter? Was Nyx adopted? Or is she Twilight's real daughter? If yes then who is the father? O.o
Hey, started reading your story, really liked it so far. Not sure if you know, though, but the title should be "New Beginnings". I'm not sure if you're able to change the title after submitting it, but if you can, I'd recommend doing so. I almost didn't start reading because, due to the misspelled title, I was afraid the rest of the story would have all kinds of grammatical and spelling errors (which fortunately, it didn't). Other than that, keep up the good work, I look forward to reading the rest of this fic!
Also, Zephyr, Nyx is Twilight's adopted daughter. I recommend reading Past Sins if you've got the time, though, it is amazingly well written.
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Thanks for pointing that out!
i really like these crossover stories you think maybe after this story you could do one featuring mewtwo from pokemon? i'd really like to read something like that and i've had the idea of pairing mewtwo with princess luna they'd make a good couple they both long for something for mewtwo it's finding a purpose and acceptance and for luna it's making a friend anyway keep writing this story and maybe write the new story i just suggested.
Grammar and spelling are a big issue in this story. Otherwise good job.
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WHY U NO BE MORE DESCRIPTIVE?
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Better description for Wolf's face on chapter 1.Nothing big,I might change it more later.Too busy working on chapter 3.
Can't wait for chapter 3!
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It'll be up soon.
Yay chapter 3 is up! :D
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Would have been up faster if Mom and Dad weren't dragging me all over Europe.
I hope you all enjoyed chapter 3.I certainly enjoyed writing it.
Whoops!Forgot a bit of the morning coversation between Nyx and Wolf.
.Fixed now.
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Sorry buddy,but I'm not a pokemon fan.Don't know who you are talking about.And,after I finish this one,I'll be writing more!Have 2 ideas so far,1 is a sequel to this,and the other involves a road trip around Equestria.The second one will be written.Sequel,not so sure.
That's all I'm saying!=P
I want you to make your writing more descriptive. It makes reading so much more enjoyable.
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Didn't know what you meant before,I'll get to work.
Better description of places,people and Spinar added.
I'll try to describe things better from now on.
I SO need a cover for this.....
New chapter! Big event. Bigger question.
Cant wait till the next one! :D
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I'll tell you the truth,my heart was racing as I was writing the last part......
I'm curious to see what's gonna happen in the next chapter.
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Already writing it.
That reminds me we still need a MLP/Killzone crossover.
I'd like to see a MLP/Halo crossover.MC landing on Equestria or something like that.
Also,to those of you who gave low ratings to the story,could you please specify why in a PM or in here?I'f I've made any mistakes I'd like to try and correct them.
Minor spelling errors fixed,and added some more details to a few parts.
Chapter 6 will be up from anywhere ranging to later today,to Tuesday.
May I ask why you don't put spaces after Full stops and Question marks?
Used to writing in Greek.We don't put spaces after them.
I am in love with this story!
Keep up the good work.
Apologies for the short chapters,they look MUCH bigger on Open Office.
But still,quality over quantity right?
i guess the pairing is twlight sparkle and wolf huh? anyway story looks like it's starting to get good keep writing.
In the process of fixing all remaining grammatical errors,and added the characters that I had forgotten when I first uploaded.
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
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It was from the story Past Sins. You know, the one everyone has been going crazy over?
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Yeah, I began to read it a while ago but had no time cause the school...
Hmm, Soulsilver will you continue your own story?
muffins!
Good chapter.
What is this a crossover with? I assumed Halo because of "Super Soldier" and the picture, but I've never heard of the Spinar.
hey how can i read it g ?
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Yes, first of all, you have just violated one of the BASIC internet safety rules,
And 2, just click on it......
And 3, you know this is a site meant for Bronies/Pegasisters right?