(Sub) Chapter 2: A new home (edited)
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Ponyville hospital ER. The determined doctors were working on an unusual patient.
Nurse Redheart barked:
“Keep him steady!”
Wolf began to spasm.
“Nurse, the anesthetic is wearing off again!”
“Give him another shot!”
“But, we've already given him four times the normal dose!”
He began to wake up. His whole body flung upwards. He fell back to the bed as the clutter of falling surgical tools hitting the ground.
“If you want to operate on a fully conscious patient, then don't give it to him.”
He obeyed, and gave Wolf the shot.
“Now let's stop the bleeding.”
*****
Wolf woke up and he was back in bed.
- - - - -
What happened?
- - - - -
Wolf looked around. He was back in the hospital. He let out a discontent sigh.
“Welcome back.”
Wolf turned to investigate the source of the voice. It was Big Macintosh, the same pony he met the day before.
“Thanks. I can't exactly say it's nice to be back.”
Big Mac laughed.
“At least he has a sense of humor.” He thought to himself.
“So, how did you get back?”
Before Wolf could answer, Nurse Redheart cut him off.
“He ignored my: ”Don't strain yourself” advice.”
“Sorry Nurse, but....memories of the war, they just.....seem so real at times.”
“From what I've heard, you have been doing some extreme moves. Care to explain?”
“I don't react well to suprises?”
“Oh?”
“What do you expect? I was fighting a war for nearly half my life.”
“Right, I forgot about that. Anyway, you're free to go again, but please, no sudden reactions this time. We used up most of our anesthetic to operate on you.”
“Right.I'll try.”
“See you later Macintosh.”
“Eeyup.”
Wolf left the hospital again. Outside he found Twilight playing with Nyx.
“Hey.”
Twilight greeted Wolf, but told Nyx, who hid behind her, to go home.
Wolf noticed this, and before Nyx could leave, he asked:
“Why? You two are having fun out here.”
He knelt and asked Nyx her name. She didn't answer. Then Wolf remembered.
- - - - -
The night of the crash.....
"I SAID-”
He didn't finish the sentence, but his weapon was already pointed at her.
I almost shot her.....
- - - - -
Wolf rose, and whispered to Nyx:
“I'm sorry....."
A single tear formed in his eye, and rolled down his cheek.Twilight noticed this, but before she could say anything, Wolf was walking away.
“Wait!”
Wolf stopped.
“Yes?”
“Where are you going to sleep tonight?”
Wolf didn't answer. Twilight was caught in the middle of a serious dillema.
“Should I let him stay? Or will I leave him alone in the cold?”
It was a beautiful early spring day, but it was coming to a close. The sun was about to set, and while it was nice and warm in the day, Winters chill still had a firm grip on the night.
“I don't know.” was Wolf's final answer, and he began walking away again, with his head down.
Twilight turned to Nyx.
“What do you think, should we invite him to stay?”
“Yes.”
Twilight was surprised with Nyx's answer.
“Are you sure? After that night, I thought you wouldn't want him to stay with us.”
“I was a bit scared at first, but...then I realised that he was alone in a new place, he was hurt and he had just lost everything. I don't want him to stay in the cold.”
“That's my girl.”
“And....”
“And?”
“And he apologized to me. You probably didn't hear it, he whispered it to me.”
“Hmmmm.”
Twilight thought to herself: ”He apologized....maybe he's not as cold as I thought....”
“Wolf! Wait!”
Wolf stopped again, without raising his head.
“What is it?”
“If you want, you could stay with us....”
Wolf raised his head and turned to face Twilight, with a visible smile on his face.
“I'd like that.”
“Well come on, I'll show you the way.”
Wolf turned around and followed the two ponies back to the library.
* * * * *
The trio arrived at Ponyville Library.
Twilight's horn glowed and the door opened. Wolf was surprised at that, but didn't say a word. He was paying more attention to the library that was carved into the tree.
Wolf was nearly a foot taller than the doorway, and he had to duck to fit into the library. At least the ceiling was more than high enough for Wolf inside the library.
“Wow.”
“Welcome to Ponyville library, our home.”
“It's very nice. I haven't slept in a real house for nearly two years now.”
“Didn't you get time off?”
“Yes, I did but most of the time I was shaking hands with political candidates.....going to fancy dinners...and I think I even opened a few malls.
“What about time with your family?”
“Rare. I didn't get to sleep in my own home with them for two years.”
Tears formed in his eyes.
“I didn't even get to say goodbye to them.....”
Twilight regretted asking the question.
“Oh! I forgot to introduce you to someone!”
“SPIIIIIKE!”
“I'm coming, I'm coming.”
“Spike, I'd like to introduce you to Wolf.”
“Who?”
Spike then noticed the tall figure in the room with them.
“Is that Wolf?”
“Yes, that is Wolf.”
“Oh, hi.”
Then Spike returned to his bed.
Twilight blushed.
“Sorry.He was up late last night and he didn't get to nap today.”
“It's alright.”
“Well, the kitchen is over there, and the bathroom is over there. I hope the couch is alright for you.”
“It's perfect.”
Nyx shouted to the two.
“Goodnight!”
“Goodnight.”
“Well, I'll be turning in. Goodnight Wolf.”
“Goodnight.”
Twilight turned to go upstairs to her bedroom. She was interrupted by Wolfs voice.
“Twilight?”
“Yes Wolf?”
“Thanks.”
Twilight smiled and nodded.Then she went upstairs.
Wolf laid down on the couch, closed his eyes, and drifted to sleep.
End chapter 2.
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Chapter 3 is up,it's a bit shorter than expected but it's there.
Hmm, one more thing: how Twilight "got" her daughter? Was Nyx adopted? Or is she Twilight's real daughter? If yes then who is the father? O.o
Hey, started reading your story, really liked it so far. Not sure if you know, though, but the title should be "New Beginnings". I'm not sure if you're able to change the title after submitting it, but if you can, I'd recommend doing so. I almost didn't start reading because, due to the misspelled title, I was afraid the rest of the story would have all kinds of grammatical and spelling errors (which fortunately, it didn't). Other than that, keep up the good work, I look forward to reading the rest of this fic!
Also, Zephyr, Nyx is Twilight's adopted daughter. I recommend reading Past Sins if you've got the time, though, it is amazingly well written.
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Thanks for pointing that out!
i really like these crossover stories you think maybe after this story you could do one featuring mewtwo from pokemon? i'd really like to read something like that and i've had the idea of pairing mewtwo with princess luna they'd make a good couple they both long for something for mewtwo it's finding a purpose and acceptance and for luna it's making a friend anyway keep writing this story and maybe write the new story i just suggested.
Grammar and spelling are a big issue in this story. Otherwise good job.
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WHY U NO BE MORE DESCRIPTIVE?
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Better description for Wolf's face on chapter 1.Nothing big,I might change it more later.Too busy working on chapter 3.
Can't wait for chapter 3!
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It'll be up soon.
May I ask why you don't put spaces after Full stops and Question marks?
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It was from the story Past Sins. You know, the one everyone has been going crazy over?
wait....a freaking OP super overkill supersoldier in some random universe decides to sleep in a home with ponies he barely knows?
i find that....very interesting
usually when the plot like that is well....like that then i down vote but
its different for your story now,you make me proud when i know that an author like you knows their potential.......as opposed to a few certain OTHER ones -coughs- about 3 authors
"I was shaking hands with political candidates.....going to fancy dinners...and I think I even opened a few malls."
I'm shure I heard those exact words watching Stargate SG1? Awsome!
again the idea of making this into a video game with a different plot compels me unfortunetly I have no ability to make a video game
The prologue should have contained more info about Nyx and who the father was.
293500 Nyx doesn't have a father, she is Nightmare Moon reborn as a filly without any of the hate that she got from being banished to the moon for one thousand years, now instead of wondering anymore about this go read the story "Past Sins" on EqD its fantastic. ( Not saying I don't enjoy this story, I really do
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anyone else think he is gunna break a neck or 2 when pinkie throws a party?
So let me get this straight, he has two surgeries in as many days, yet is able to walk out immediatly after. Remember where the wound was in the beginning? Large hunk'o'metal in his side gonna do some serious damage. I swear if you say magic imma rage quit and go back to Battlefield.
I love how this guy is just rolling with everything. In almost every Hie fic I've read they always start with the human freaking out about everything at first. I'm gonna laugh if Discord decides to congratulate him or something for just saying to hell with it.
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You do realize he's a damn super soldier, and fought in a war for half his life, right? He probably had worse injuries and recovered quicker. Also, they have healing magic. They're gonna use it! Magic was part of it, so accept that! ... if that's ok with you, of course...
OMG, is this a Jet Force Jeminai Fic?!
3723661 Ur name is PrincessLunaTheGamer! Not FluttershyTheGamer!
Get it right!
1367055 oh shit! (yelimng to the doctors) WE'RE GONA NEED ABOUT SEVENTY NECK BRACES AND MEDICAL TEAMS HERE STAT!!! / AND BREENG LOTS OF MORPHINE!!!!!!
He hasn't been cold at all. He reacted as expected, obviously suffering from some form of PTSD, and he has been fighting a war for the last 11 years, because he had no choice.
Twilight, stop being judgemental.
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Goddamit Twilight... Are morals more important than the survival of your race? Are they?
6081444 Well, the ponies are pretty naive