Eljunbyro

by Imploding Colon

Loyalty's Lament

She slept soundly.

The hat was lying over her freckled face.

When the train came to a stop, there was a sudden lurch.

Finally, those two emeralds opened up.

She twitched at first, like a nervous foal.

The she looked up, her lids thin and contemplative.

And she smiled.

Comments

[Keratin]

Well, this was certainly cryptic.

[Jade Curtiss]

Shortest chapter ever?

[Pilate]

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It's a continuation of the train scenes from chapter 33.

[zaponator]

This is so sad, read directly after the last 3 chapters.

[Rara]

Oh, man. So few word, so damn many emotions. Onward.

[MellowMabari]

You're trying to break my heart, aren't you? Well, its working. Gah, 49 piddly little words and I'm almost tearing up. Onward...

[Psyco Josho]

Alas, poor Applejack I knew her.

[IfOnlyICouldDeactivate]

Why do I have to read all these stories that end up sad? They're all great stories, but it can't be healthy to read sad stories all the time...

[PinDrop]

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You'd think such a short chapter wouldn't have errors.

[Riverwing]

[dashie76]

IIIIIt's Dashie's evaluation time!

How could such a short chapter...carry so much emotion...argh...Imploding SERIOUSLY needs to write a novel...it's just a chapter about Applejack waking up when the train stops...and yet, so powerful...<sob>...These are my thoughts so far.

-MASH

[CrimsonPhoenix]

People says the shorter the joke the better. IC just proved the same with chapters and feels.

[Honeytiger]

dem feels... Honeytiger is full of feels...

[Regidar]

Oh my god
who told you that was okay

[Super Trampoline]

[whizzball1]

So sad. Also, 1/4 done!

[Enix]

This is probably the moment Rainbow Dash decides that she wants to be with AJ instead of traveling everywhere.

[JustAnotherTimeLord]

Where her journey ends, Rainbow's begins.

[Aiyonbeam]

No.
Not after last chapter.
You can't do this to me!
Nooooo!

"Her shoulders are so broad..."

[Real_Atomsk]

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That is the best time to twist the knife

[Quirky View]

49 words and you managed a typo.

Then* not "The".

[FOXTrot2]

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Records have been broken this day.

[Jex]

How dare you, Colon. How dare you.