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Oh. Oh! Ooooooh...
Good show sir, you made air flow at a faster than normal rate out of my nostrils.
Oh dear.
And well done.
A male calico? Very lucky!
He's definitely a keeper. Elope! Now!
But then... If Shining and Candance knew much about cats, that might have clued them in that something wasn't on the up and up.
Excellent
Gosh damn it to heck. Well played.
Non stop giggling the whole time.
oh flurry you silly filly
He turned into a statue of Cosy Glow? That's dedication.
Speaking of petrification, how did Dolph escape it after assaulting the person of the prince consort?
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When Shining tapped out, Dolph let him go. Cadance recognized good sportsmanship.
11673647 . . . and got his number.
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In first draft, Cadance got the zebra's number, but I liked the final version better.
I see Flurry is already practicing for when she becomes the empress. May god have mercy on crystal ponies.
Not gonna lie, one of the best endings I've seen in a while. Especially for a short one shot. Takes maybe a little too long to get there (you can probably do with a few less dates, like 2-3, because it drags on a bit right now), but boy, is the payoff worth it. Please tell me it was Tergums plan.
Loved it, though I've managed to predict the reveal
Caught some vibes of sketch comedy show there, like 'Monkey Dust', where main character conjures something implausible. Reads like a short series of vignettes, too
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thanks!
Also, "short series of vignettes" is one of my specialties. I love writing that format.
Oho, clever girl!
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Well played.
Though... just imagine if Cadance and Shining had been Pharynx and Thorax meeting all her other bad dates because Cadance and Shining didn't have the heart to make Flurry give up on another date after they'd first heard of Tergum.
That ending
i kinda knew it was coming but it's still sooo hilarious!
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Dang it, I missed that XD
I wish that if G5 ever reintroduces the changelings, that Thorax is remembered something like this. It just fits.
I guess also calling the latter the dungeon would be confusing and might send the wrong impression.
Still, the fact that they have one is some nice forward thinking.
She's either getting desperate or they need to check those three to make sure they aren't communicating telepathically. Or both.
Clever girl...
Tilapia's a keeper, I don't care what Shining and Cadence have to say about it.
they had us in the first half not gonna lie
That ending... I feel like I should have saw that coming, but didn't but still annoyed I didn't.
Sigh, take my like, fav and my comment and go on.
Hahahahahaha, flawless. I especially liked Swiper. n_n
That would be how Thorax is remembered among the 'lings.
Okay, Grifter at least had it coming.
No one said you had to accept Dolph's offer to "go," Shining. That one's on you still.
Yeah, okay, Tilapia had it coming too.
And here I was about to comment that Flurry didn't seem to be into ponies.
You know, I think she might be trying to make a point to you two, Cadance and Shining.
Oh yeah, she's definitely making a point here. No way Flurry's bagging all of these bad dates on accident at this point.
Heck, I'm half-expecting all of them to be in on it too.
Oh, that's even better! Well-played, you two, well-played.
I love the ending! And the middle, or middles. The very beginning is quite serviceable too, but not as good imho as the rest of it.
I could say "Recommended! 👍" but I think most people will already know it's very good.
The question is, was he the Cozy Glow statue too, or did they steal it for a prank? (it was probably found after the concert, wearing a funny hat and a pair of sunglasses).
Haha that was really fun!
Perfect ending line!
Okay i think that gets her approval!
gets em every time
Epic bait and switch scheme from Flurry :)
Well, you can't argue with results, I suppose....
Perfect, no notes.
I saw the twist coming as soon as Flurry brought her first date home, but I'm not mad about it. 😂
I like bugs 🐞
Lmao
Nice to see something Chaos approved!
I had a feeling that was gonna be it after what originally happened.
Even the Cozy Glow statue?
Excellent. Perfect ending as well.
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Spoiler this please
I knew it! Still hilarious. The story's structure is very much like an old timey joke, and a well put together one at that. The inertia keeps the pacing going strong and helps with every oncoming joke. There are no duds either, so the comedy holds up pretty well. Good job!
Oh, that was a devious plot on Flurry's end. But hey, it worked! And it got a few chuckles out of me. Very good story!
Hilarious.
Game that system Flurry!