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Oh, poor Navarone's trials and tribulations are just getting started. Soon, there will be absolutely no one that he trusts, not even himself. Yes, you are correct when you say that by all rights his friendships should be over. However, Navarone is a better--or dumber--person than most. They both show regret for their actions, if not so far then they will later. He forgives them in what is probably a relatively stupid motion, but it shows how kind and naive he was back then. And as he goes through more and more horror, those little betrayals of the past seem less and less. He will never forget, but he can forgive.
So yes, while to most people that would be a friendship ending event, for Navarone it was just a hiccup of sorts. Does that make him stupid? Does that make him kind? Only time will tell.
...Brilliant
>> whatmustido- Still I would give them the silent treatment, or just distance myself from them mostly Rarity cause her " brilliant idea " but you know that's just me.
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He does distance himself from Rarity, though he was never that close to her to begin with. It's impossible to distance yourself from Pinkie. If she wants you for something, she will fucking find you. Or someone will help her find you. Like, there are some time skips and whatnot in here. It isn't written what went down, but you can assume that he stayed away from Rarity and Pinkie as much as was possible without bringing up too much suspicion. It wouldn't be stretching to assume he began avoiding ponies in general through that time period, but it isn't yet that he begins to seriously lose his connection with the pony race.
Is.....is that Cupcake Pinkie?
..........
*Shiver* Okay, im scared now....
Heh, my second readthrough, and I gotta say, the image of a Pinkie in a dom outfit still cracks me up.
Btw, did it look something like this, perchance?
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And I still get shivers from the hints at Cupcakes
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I don't know if that's awesome or creepy. Either way, ponies have crotch tits, so the 'bra' is in the wrong place. Other than that, I imagine it fits well enough.
he has his crack team of "not insane or rapist" ponies consisting of spike, CMC, applejack, fluttershy (kinda), rainbowdash, and luna (kinda) he needs to tell them what's going on and he needs a bunker where AJ and fluttershy can bring him food, spike can send him messages and news and dash and CMC can be guards/friends so he doesn't go stir crazy cause apparently rape happens alot in equestria so luna can push laws forward to help him out (when she gets out of "prison").
......I still don't get why he hasn't asked for help or demanded punishment to the people who raped him
still love your stuff but I don't like rape much so......no longer reading for clop but still its an amazingly good read
Huh, nobody mentioned it. Colgate is a Twilight fan, yes the books. Also, 'call me' Did he tell her that or is she minuette?
prure comic relife right there
one question that is stupid, is Nav aware of the fact that he is Discord, i dont get it at times it seems he is at others he is not, please explain
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Answering that is somewhat of a spoiler. It might be answered in the chapter I'm about to write, which is seventy-something.
I just know that me getting a toothbrush turned into me getting hit with a lot of laughing gas and not remembering what happened next. I woke up with my teeth shined to perfection and a minty taste that didn’t leave me for a few days. I also had a toothbrush and a card that said ‘call me’ on it.
i was reading that when i was bending my head down to get another bit of cereal and out of the corner of my eye i see "Call ME", if it wasn't for the fact the spoon hasn't made it to my mouth yet i would be cleaning my keyboard and screen right now
2011996 he kinda made himself a new body, mind, and well all around a new personality, so conclusion hes a whole new person. (that cant die and has hidden magic)
The first part: comedy gold.
Granny Smith cracking up? Priceless
I really hope he's going to confront Rarity badly at least once. I mean, she raped him. You don't just shrug that off.
Why the hell dose it seem that almost every mare want to fuck Navarone for some reason if eel sorry for the poor bastard even if he is part of Discord
also i see the discord part can be annoying at times
2012037 I hate you for that comment... great story though.
And I thought biting my tongue or cheek hurt like a motherfucker. Just... *shiver* ow... Unintentional, do-it-yourself, extreme piercings.
As someone who literally has his canines as fangs I can wholeheartedly say that yeah, it is fun.
Ummmm.... ummmmm....ummmmmm.....okay then.
And here i thought Rarity was the crazy one in this fic.
Daaayumn, Pinkie is scary.
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In this story everybody has left saneville and headed for coo coo cliff
Cupcakes?
Poor Cain. Dude commits first murder ever and a copy of him goes through this.
Scary dentist is scary.
Didn't he already tell them that he's an omnivore when Twilight first summoned him? Or, did he only tell Twilight and Spike?
so it was me and one other that caught that cupcakes reference
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That honestly didn't happen on purpose. I've never even read that bloody story. Don't even know too much about it. I was just hinting at something very kinky involving that very same dominatrix suit. And since Dash's fetishes are outlined much, much further down the line, it makes some sense.
Pinkie?
Just...
what?
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U MAD PEGASI?
You sir Nav, just saved Rainbow Dash from a terrible fate, you are now considered a hero to us all!
3197622 Cupcakes ~ Pinkie Pie makes cupcakes out of Rainbow Dash.
Youtube Video:~
FanFic:~ Cupcakes
Now, I am unsure if that's the right version but I do believe so.
And if you haven't read it already, Rainbow Factory.
Youtube Video:~
Fanfic:~ Rainbow Factory
These two are landmarks of the fandom, how could you not know of them? :P
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I know of them, but I haven't read either of them because I don't care about grimderp things. Especially not gory grimderp things. I might have to change that scene so it doesn't seem like a reference. It most definitely wasn't supposed to be one.
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What do you mean by hidden magic?
So you changed the 'big thing' that happened in chapter eight. Cool. However that part still feels like it needs to be in the story.
I haven't read these first chapters in so long, I can't remember what's removed 'cause of the rewrite.
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3265251 I think you should keep it the way it is, the reference even if you didn't intend it to be one is pretty cool
3516756 Dammit, you beat me to it...by ten weeks...
I put jackets in closets..
That was entertaining.
Isn't that- goddamn, someone beat me to it!
Just thought of something: a point of the deal with Discord was that she would forget ever making the deal.
But after making the deal, did the entire world forgot about Discord, like he never existed?
Because if not, surely the fact that he isn't petrified in the Royal Guard would have alarmed someone.
If you already wrote the whys of the whats in a past, present, or future chapter, never mind what I said.
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I think it says in the prologue that Discord just stepped out of his statue, leaving the hollow stone behind.
Oh god please no...
When we finally finished, I felt very much like I needed an adult. But as she assured me herself when I yelled that, she was an adult
why are you wet?” “I don’t know what you’re talking about,” I said, stringing out some of my wet hair. :Is it?” I held up the strand I was twisting and hmm’d. “Well now, looks like it is. Wonder how that happened.” “...Did you take a shower?” “Maybe
4401026 Do you like... Cupcakes?
3265203 I believe you are forgetting Smile HD...
Or it didn't exist yet when you posted this comment...
I'll be so dissipointed if he does not atleast get to tap Luna...
I know i said that horribley... But I'm a horrible person...
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Haha
Oh god
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAHHHH
As someone who's read the whole thing...
HEHEHEHAHAHEHEHHEHAHAHA
Well after several hours of reading I'm going to keep reading some more but I have to say that Nav has some pretty obnoxious views of life. Pessimistic, asexual, touch-averse, and not particularly nice to anybody. Practically anti-pony in all his attitudes. I don't know if that's self insertion going on there but i like to see a lone human hero with a little bit of positive attributes of humanity and less so many negative ones. Just make the best of what you got and start a little more bonding. Maybe a few more chapters in I'll see a bit more change if I'm gonna keep reading.....