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EVERY TIME I'M ABOUT TO PUT MY PHONE DOWN AND LEAVE THIS UPDATES I HAVE THINGS TO DO.
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I apologize for nothing and I have no shame.
Keep up the awesome work! Luna is best pony!
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I don't mean the fact that it didn't affect him -that one was pretty obvious, for those who look for it- but I mean that his trust was not as much altered as I thought it would be, that came with the context of the Rainbow Trust problem I was speaking of before.
If he doesn't at least come with some restrictions of how he gives information -at least to Rainbow Dash- It would fell rather unusual, but it's still possible that nothing changes at all, everyone's different, but my reaction to someone that reads my journal would be a mayor blow of trust, It has happened to me and I had a period of mistrust to the person at least for a while.
And about chapter 31, FUCK YEAH UPDATE!!
1270353 I love you. No Homo.
Oh and when he ever gets mad this is my response.
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Aw his talk with Taya is heartwarming. Also woo extended life...does that equal extended youth?
Also what would have happened with Discord if Navi did die?
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Yes, and Nav can't die. Remember the tenets of Discord's deal? One is that Nav can't die. If he did... Well, that depends on how he dies. I can't elaborate more without spoiling stuff.
this story only gets more and more exciting keep it up
And now we have a hero who will live longer, is battle scarred, bald, has featherless wings, severe mental issues, insecurities, a new father with an adopted other species daughter and potentially him simply giving up hope with a possible breaking point of him saying "fuck it"
This guy is not getting any brakes and we are all enjoying his suffering. This should tell us all something about our self's. So, I will be the first:
I am a horrible person and I admit it.
That aside, good chapter and cant wait to read more.
1271570 it would be cool if by chance his body is destroyed it would eventualy reform looking like one of the eeco forms from Jak 3!
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I will take your bet sir! I sagest you ready your wallet.
1272536 My wallet stands ready, it is currently next to my keyboard staring at me with the googly eyes I super-glued on. And those eyes are looking right at me.
...wow so where's discord and why isn't he having some kind of hernia/stroke/aneurism from all his laughter at Nav's situation so Trixie and crazy cat man can become their own characters again? (this is not a criticism, just asking if discord is more...bloody minded and less random shit for the lolz)
also wow...."that's rough buddy".
I am now curious to see if this story doesn't go on after all his old friends who are basically Ponyville have died cause honestly you could turn this NOVEL you have written into its own thing.
also are you a professional writer? cause this is one hell of a story for some random person to write on a whim.....though I guess that's how all writers start out
/5
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I'm not yet. This was my way of seeing if I could write something this big. When I finish I reckon I might try my hand at an actual book.
Wow... that's all I can say.
1270353 thats the best way to leave it too... without shame...
btw how long did it take you to write your first chapter?
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First chapter? A few days, I think. That's usually how long it takes me to write them. Some days I just don't write at all.
*sigh* with long life it is a trade off. No matter who you are your going to suffer because of it.
Way to go with the relationship though, heh.
Luna is going to have a LONG time to 'aquaint' with him *snickers*
Wow, love how i can do that? go from being sad to 'funny' in 1 sentence? i dont i hate it,
Damn mood swings
I think this story just got extended to forever.
Well, this was both a good and horrible turn for him. I know he said almost doesn't count for anything, but the fact that he almost did, after everything he's said about his lack of feeling, speaks volumes.
If the story continues at the rate it has, it will probably never be finished, most likely due to the fandom dying out eventually, especially with Nav's life extension. I can only hope it does, as even with all the moments where I've raged and called bullshit, this story is well written and has kept me interested and I just want a fucking happy ending for him and Luna (and possibly Celestia).
Love how Nav has a fallout style lone wanderer appeal to him. Mysterious. Charismatic. Aggressive. Nice. And can't stay out of awkward situations no matter how much he tries.
Maaaan, making him almost immortal... like he didn't have enough shit to deal with. That dude really needs a fucking break.
At least he has Taya (unless you were being a dick and killed her off in later chapters)
It IS a good story to read though. It takes skill to make one mad at the author, yet keep reading and enjoying it at the same time.
Human who killed and is left off with PTSD, is granted a very long if not almost immortal lifetime... Yeah I don't see how that could possibly go wrong.
I have the feeling that Celestia and Luna will in near future regret, what they have done to him, I know that it's the work of Discord anyway so another power has returned to him (somewhat immortality). But still, they just don't have the foresight, of what can or even will happen with a human who lives that long, especially all the things considered that already happened to him and his current mental state.
Immortallity is best granted to beings without emotion, they may not be able to appreciate it as much, but they would also not frown upon it, or even rage about it.
They may say: "bla bla all things will end well, even though you have to live that long yadda yadda", but for real It won't, not as things seem to develope currently. He in turn, was managing a good job to keep himself stable. There is no telling though, when Nav will finally lose grip of himself, and that should happen eventually.
... My guess is, this will happen should Taya come to harm somehow by someone else, and then sure as hell It won't matter to Nav, if it was jest an accident or intentional. He claims that he doesn't feel much, but i got the impression that he does infact alot but keeps it hidden and locked away, because most of them are negative.
And negative feelings such as anger, dispair, hate and sorrow, do not bode well with time.
At least this is what happens mostly to humans of other fictions, if they have experienced things as Nav has, they alwast end up as Dr.Evil or the bad guys.
3383402 I honestly don't know what to say to that so i'll settle with "My great grandfather once taught me that killing a man from range is like hunting eek, you shoot it dead and feel nothing. It's when you look it in the eye a bit of their souls stay with you because you won't see a soldier, you'll see a man who's forced to kill other's no matter how much against his will it is, not an enemy."
hey could someone point me to when all this 'Z' stuff happened i must have skipped a chapter somewhere
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I should probably make this more visible somewhere. That was retconned and I haven't gotten around to fixing it in every chapter yet. Having to go chapter by chapter in a million+ word story takes time, especially when I have other shit to do and new content to make.
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i know its late and all. cosidering this story got out like. a million years ago. but he is wrong about the human brain going shit in 60 years. the only reason the human brain starts to loose function is because of cell degeneration. if the mind is still intact like Celestia said it is. without aging and without cell degradation. the human mind can retain information for about 600 years before it starts to push early memory away. but in the end. fucking magic man. and because nav is discord..
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Nav doesn't know nearly as much as he thinks he does. He got there when he was 18 or so, after all.
I dunno if I missed something, but I think a more detailed explanation about transferring life force from trees to Nav was nixed somewhere in this chapter or earlier (my memory of the original version's a little vague). This bit –
– is the first and only reference to said garden I remember seeing in the revised story, save for Discord's mention of the ancient magic in the prologue. Unless it always was that vague and I’m just derping …
Also, regarding brains, it's inevitable they would start to decay at some point, be it at 60 or 600; human brains just aren't meant for extreme longevity. (Also, #3 & #2 in here – long story short, human memory and temporal perception would get seriously fucked after a few normal lifespans.) Celestia & Luna (and Chrysalis, and old dragons, and etc.) are only still sane because they were basically designed for quasi-immortality. (Also, magic, which probably helps somehow.)
Then again, Nav is basically Discord-in-disguise, so his brain's biological integrity might not be at risk in any conventional sense …
3803813 when nav fisrt met sunbutt and she told him that she knew how Luna felt about him I believe it was spoken of at that time but I could be wrong
Then I started cooking meth, and growing pot.... Equestria enter a new age of tranquility and never sleeping crazy ponies that day.
Well, if he really gets desperate, there's is the pragmatic option of suicide. I few explosives and a crossbow to the head would be enough.
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im glad he also hates immortality, living for a long scares the shit outta me, same with the knowledge of any human living forever. we make bad gods
Honestly I would love to have immortality, yes I know this comment is going to get down votes but seriously I would like to have eternal life. I want to see what happens to humanity in the far future and what my descendants would be like and what they would do in life. Idk maybe I'm the minority and yeah I realize that all my friends and family would eventually die and I would still be here forever but it would be really cool to just see what would happen. The way I look at things is like this, wouldn't it be cool to know everything about everyone's past, present, and future? Would it really be that bad to be immortal?
Just a quick thing I'd like to point out.
Taya is talking here, and mentions her horn glowing. But later they discover that only Navarone can see the glow.
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The way I figure, if she's having an overload of magic, her horn could start glowing anyway.
I'm still waiting for the part when Nav realizes that the princesses don't do jack shit, like in the original. Unless you took that out too.
If Nav doesn't want to outlive Taya couldn't he just ask the princesses to transfer a few trees to her? Itks not like Taya would say no.
4544182 I most say that I would prefer, like Discord, not being able to die. Inanition? Fuck off. Sickness? Don't mind. Twisted neck? Stings a little, but not worse.
I could live forever while never giving a shit of what I do. No need to get food. No need to worry about anything.
That, at least for me, would be the living definition of awesome...
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"one that had a holes for my wings."
Third sentence of chapter 32 and I see a typo, story ruined, unsubbed and voted down
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Fixed that shit, yo.
Holy shit.
This chapter had WAY TO MANY feels for me man. I feel like every chapter after this will be depressing...
Does that mean I'm gonna stop reading???
Fuck no
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Man, I hate a-holes for my wings. :)
4303160 What anime is that?
4893504 I have a question on the age thing, he said he had a thousand years but you also mentioned a few thousand years, do they not know how many or am I just confused?