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After being sold a "magical" necklace from Trixie, Queen Chrysalis believes she is completely invisible, and begins systematically ruining the lives of Twilight Sparkle and everyone around her.
Sadly, Chrysalis is not invisible. Not even close.
Artwork by Ernestboy.
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That certainly was entertaining
Bizarre but fun. Bravo n_n You do write a great Chrysalis.
This is the Sketch Police! I'm calling a halt to this sketch, as it is too silly! Too silly, I say!
This was absolutely hilarious! I loved the complete randomness of it all!
Favorite moments:
I love Twilight's reaction here. She seems more indignant than anything else.
Boy, Chryssie really is helpless without an army of emotion-sucking drones, isn't she?
Yeah, she's really run out of ideas.
I...I can't even. There are no words. I completely lost it at the sushi part.
Nice job! 10/10
Oh, Chrysalis
I'm busy wondering if Chrysalis wore the two eyepatches over both of her eyes or actually strapped the second one over the first one.
Sad yet hilarious either way.
Couple of typos:
Reckon that should be "tapping".
"as opposed to"?
Don't mind me, just gonna be taking that for my own use...
Sooooo.... basically Pinkie Pie Infiltrates The Changeling Hive, but with Chrysalis instead?
Okaaaaaay.
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No, it's "taping". Spike let Twilight cast Dazzler's Discombobulating Displacement on him once, and ever since his poor chin just hasn't been the same.
I think we can all thank Drax for this baby.
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And he never let Twilight test a new spell on him again.
Replace the "s" in invisible with a "nc" and it's more accurate to Chrysalis.
Chrysalis is truly an evil mastermind.
Upvote.
Rarity should totally 'design' the most magnificent dress in the world for Bug Horse Despot and tell her only wise people can see it.
She'll totally pay a million bits for it.
8941442 We must have something manly!
Organized drilling!
Enjoyably goofy, though I am concerned with Chrysalis's mental state.
Lemme first say that I love the picture you used
Oh look, Count Olaf showed up again.
And then it turns out the popcorn kernels were actually preventing the invisibility.
We once did that to a friend in a game, due to a bizarre chain of coincidences we got him to believe that if he stands at certain props he turns invisible for us and that it just seems to work if he does it. Somehow it got a bit out of hand and in the end half of the server joined in, pretending to not see him. It lasted for 3 days in which he genuinely believed that he was invisible to the majority of the players while standing on props like a fool.
In other words: Pure, unfiltered evil.
Darn writers block, indeed.
One day, Spike. One day.
(But first you'll have to survive Chrysalis.)
Good story!
And congratulations to an well-deserved place in the feature box.
Chrysalis comedy is best comedy.
I can't tell if 451 was picked randomly, or if it's a nod to Ray Bradbury.
Also, I can't help but think Chrissy knew it was fake, and just wanted a couple days of getting free shots in on her enemies.
Fun fic!
No. No, I think she's operating at exactly the level of intelligence she's always had, Twilight.
Do try to keep up.
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Seems normal to me. A couple of steps from crazy cat lady status, but this will do.
So much 'what'.
Lol
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OMG YOU ARE THE BEST KIND OF PERSON.
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a la The Emperors New Clothes?
Chrysalis insinuating that Twilight has a pot belly? That's almost on a par with Trixie calling Rarity's coif a rat's nest.
8943189 Random number, actually.
8942667 This made me laugh. Like out loud. Not the simple air exhaling nostrils type laugh, either. Thank you!
8942563 I suck at finding pictures, so I usually just google "Chrysalis happy" and use whatever's on the first page. This... was that one.
8942099 Chrysalis: "I have mastered the art of standing still. I become completely invisible."
Pinkie Pie: "Hi, Chrysalis!"
Chrysalis: "Damn it!"
8941442 I guess that's just my style of humour. I'd write for SNL, but I suck at political jokes.
"Trump sure sucks. Hahaha. Take that, Trump!" "Trudeau sure is nice. Hehehe. Roasted, Trudeau!"
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I honestly just surprised you didn't use the exact same profile picture as I have for the story xD
8945213 It's not the plot of "The Usual Suspects"?
I didn't like this as much to be honest. Not as funny as your other creations.
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Almost every joke in this fic felt like it had potential, but needed a bit more polish to get the wording and timing better. It was still a decent read, but was so close to being so much better.
IMO, the jokes were perfect.
Yeah, I'd say Chryssi cracked up a bit. At least she was a relatively harmless snugglebug.
Which is it?
Honestly..
Yeah! Buy that for a dollar
Every single line of the story is a hilarious classic!
Just was done with reading The Queen of Hearts... but is one hits the characters a lot better! Honestly. I wish this was an epsiode!
/).(\ facehoofing but I LOVE IT.
FAVE. FOLLOW! thank you!
Oh my God! Chrysalis has falling in love with Spike!!!
Why would you NOT want to snuggle up with a Chrysalis?!
Awe, I thought that at the end there Twilight had been replaced by Chrysalis, who had secretly been aware of them being on to her the whole time, and used it as a part of her master plan to replace Twilight.
naturalbornderpy: Now, BEHOLD!
Me: You supposed to write somethi-
nbd: Is Chrysalis not invisible?
Me: Yea- No.
nbd: WHY NOT?
I want to say 'Chryssi is best troll' but that would just be encouraging Discord to prove that wrong and I'm not sure Ponyville would survive that. Still, amazingly hilarious bit of fun.
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I'd snuggle her so hard. Then I'd invite Cadance and Sunset Shimmer in on the fun before giving her the brushies.
Why would Chrysalis want to become invisible? She can shape sift!
Sneaky author